The Fox Demon Scholar: Beginning With the Journey to the Capital for the Exam

Not bad, the settings are complete, and the narrative is reasonable Questions: 1. The early stage was too 🐢, the literati used face output and the final slap in the face was just a word of shame. 2. A bit flat, nothing exciting

What do you say, brother? Your setting is very good and your character creation is relatively good. The plot is still good, but it doesn't get better or better when it's exciting.

A very interesting and innovative world view, the main characters are all very cute, the writing has a good rhythm, and the wording is somewhat elegant. The copying was very fresh and refined, and the poems copied were all poems I didn't recognize. I would have thought the protagonist had written them himself. But there are a lot of holes to dig, so I won't update quickly!

Like this book very much. The writing is very good, and the people and things written are wonderful. The protagonist does things in an orderly manner, has grace and style, is not abstract, is sophisticated and sophisticated, and is round on the outside and square on the inside. The supporting characters also have distinct personalities. Each one has his or her own position, and they are often vividly portrayed with just a few strokes, without any stereotypes. The plot has twists and turns, but the transition is very natural. There is no black and white. The rhythm is well controlled, compact and not tense. Already collected, come on! I checked out your other books, and they were all cut!!! Don't be too serious about writing a book. Just blindly write randomly when you are stuck on writing, or you can fool him into dozens of chapters, and your ideas will flow naturally as you write. It's a pity to mix such good writing with tomatoes. In addition, the title of the book is a bit inappropriate for tomato text and can easily be ignored.

This book is evenly matched. This book continues to fill in the gaps more seriously, continues to advance the current plot line, and improves the world view. It is also a rare and good book. What I think is cool: First, there were several times when the protagonist was already in a desperate situation. For example, the protagonist was placed under house arrest by Liu Moumou. In the end, Yang Dame risked his life to save him through coercion and inducement. His life was hanging by a thread. Finally, the zombies sent by the protagonist before finally arrived and successfully escaped. Later, he chased and fled to the Confucian Temple, and Mr. Lu helped him finally reverse the situation, successfully reversing the situation, and another wave of people showed up to the saint. I think the scene at the back where the National Preceptor and his camp ambushed him fifty miles away from the capital was pretty good. There are many reversals, and there are many scenes of showing off in front of others. Secondly, the world view of this book is quite interesting. It is all about [fate], [character], etc., And the world view is unfolded little by little, and there are a lot of foreshadowings that can be discovered. I am currently filling in the holes. I think the author can summarize the divisions of these ranks, which is a bit difficult to understand. The three characters are very full-bodied. I prefer Yang Zizhen and Sun Guanshi. One has a chivalrous and heroic character, while the other is calm and loyal. Both characters have a bit of a reversal in their personalities. One looked down on the protagonist as a scholar at first, but later changed his mind and was willing to go to hell for the protagonist. The other was a servant and was taken care of by the protagonist, but he was loyal and sincere and went back to plead guilty and receive punishment. I feel that both of them are foreshadowing. The fourth story line is rich and diverse, and the world view is grand. It is not far from the temple, and involves the Jianghu and the imperial court. (I think the story lines include: Yang Zimo, Sun Guanshi, Liu Yan'er, Jiang Xia and his sister Jiang Yu, as well as Meng You, Shen Hanyu, and zombie [Qiu Sheng]. The world is fluid and the story lines are connected in series, which is very interesting. If it's a bit of a surprise, it'll be frustrating in the early stage but it will start to feel better later on. The story line should be very long, and it's a growth-oriented protagonist.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night. (The setting is novel and the writing is smooth. I don't know if it will collapse later, but at least it looks good now.)

It's super pretty. If you don't believe it, just watch me for how long.

It's okay, it's okay, it's well written, I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot of Fu Long Okay, okay, it's getting better and better, and it gets better and better as you go to the back [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

It's not an AI article, the writing style is quite good, plain and delicate. There are many female characters in the back, but there is no emotional line (love) and no heroine. The plot of each character is just right, no one is deliberately highlighted, and no one is given a lot of plot description.

He has logic, is not invincible, and is not a brainless villain. He has an IQ, and the most important thing is that he doesn't give in when he sees a girl.