The Demon Fox Scholar: Starting from Going to Beijing to Take the Examination

Not bad, the settings are complete, and the narrative is reasonable Questions: 1. The early stage was too 🐢, the literati used face output and the final slap in the face was just a word of shame. 2. A bit flat, nothing exciting

What do you say, brother? Your setting is very good and your character creation is relatively good. The plot is still good, but it doesn't get better or better when it's exciting.

Like this book very much. The writing is very good, and the people and things written are wonderful. The protagonist does things in an orderly manner, has grace and style, is not abstract, is sophisticated and sophisticated, and is round on the outside and square on the inside. The supporting characters also have distinct personalities. Each one has his or her own position, and they are often vividly portrayed with just a few strokes, without any stereotypes. The plot has twists and turns, but the transition is very natural. There is no black and white. The rhythm is well controlled, compact and not tense. Already collected, come on! I checked out your other books, and they were all cut! ! ! Don't be too serious about writing a book. Just blindly write randomly when you are stuck on writing, or you can fool him into dozens of chapters, and your ideas will flow naturally as you write. It's a pity to mix such good writing with tomatoes. In addition, the title of the book is a bit inappropriate for tomato text and can easily be ignored.

A very interesting and innovative world view, the main characters are all very cute, the writing has a good rhythm, and the wording is somewhat elegant. The copying was very fresh and refined, and the poems copied were all poems I didn't recognize. I would have thought the protagonist had written them himself. But there are a lot of holes to dig, so I won't update quickly!

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night. (The setting is novel and the writing is smooth. I don't know if it will collapse later, but at least it looks good now.)

It's okay, it's okay, it's well written, I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot of Fu Long Okay, okay, it's getting better and better, and it gets better and better as you go to the back [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

It's super pretty. If you don't believe it, just watch me for how long.

So far, it seems okay. The toxic points are concentrated on the female character and the current crisis, but she is almost unable to deal with it head-on. The background relationship setting is a bit dangerous and sensitive, and she is involved in so many things. It is estimated that the plot will bring several major crises to the protagonist from this point. If it is not handled well, there will be no less toxic points in the future.

It's not an AI article, the writing style is quite good, plain and delicate. There are many female characters in the back, but there is no emotional line (love) and no heroine. The plot of each character is just right, no one is deliberately highlighted, and no one is given a lot of plot description.

He has logic, is not invincible, and is not a brainless villain. He has an IQ, and the most important thing is that he doesn't give in when he sees a girl.

Very well written

Faster, that's good

It's okay, I hope it can be completed smoothly

It looks great, but there are too few updates.

This book is surprisingly good. I almost missed it because of the title. It is worth recommending.

It's pretty, pretty interesting.

The character creation is quite good, and there are quite few poisonous points, but there are too few. The plot could be more compact and faster.

The content is still good, and the subject matter is pretty good, but the writing style is still a little lacking. The author would like to work on it [please give me more updates]

There are about 46 pictures, why do you want to resurrect that woman, what will you do if others ask for her to be resurrected, others will say that he will not save her until she dies, etc. [Laugh][laugh][laugh]

God! I think it's at least 8.5. It would be better if the male protagonist wrote less about the relationship between men and women.

The writing is very good

Not bad, it's a bit interesting, come on!

It looks good and attracts people to watch it.

That's interesting, come on

Very pretty, yes

If the level is maintained, it will have a nine-point posture.

Not bad, but unfortunately there are too few

Not enough, not enough, not enough

Quite interesting, a bit new

Some people are curious about the identity of the protagonist, so I made a guess. The aunt and the protagonist should have a grudge.