I Have Been Cultivating Immortality Since Ancient Times, but My Taoist Companion Is Very Young.

I also like to write about fairy tales. But it is shameful to say that after two years of working behind closed doors, we are still standing still. Read the author's book today. When I first read the introduction, I felt confused. Looking at the first chapter later, if I think about it carefully, I feel that there is something wrong with the logic. But as long as you don't think about it carefully, there's nothing wrong with feeling it. After reading it for the second time, I felt that the book was indeed worth learning. The plot attracted me. Very much looking forward to it. Of course, plot is not the main thing. Main writing power. Many people think that the power of writing is just a pile of words. Even I used to think so. Later, I was discouraged many times, and gradually I stopped piling up rhetoric, but I always felt that it was missing a bit of flavor. Reading the author's book today helped me answer this question. The author knows where to bullshit and where not to bullshit. Very comfortable to watch. This is what I admire the most. The last thing is character creation. Although the role of Yun Niang is not long, the character is very heartwarming and impressive. Come on, author, you will become a great success! ! !

It has been more than sixty chapters, and it has developed steadily along the way. The plot logic is reasonable and there is no poisonous point. You can do whatever you need to do, and kill when you should. There are plans and plans, a steady flow of cultivating immortals, and the golden finger design makes people look forward to it.

The writing is very good, and the protagonist is down-to-earth and takes it step by step. Give people a sense of expectation. Five-star praise

Author, you are not a single player. Come on, come on, come on.

Not bad, no poisonous spots, stable development, good-looking!

The book is pretty good, but I couldn't stand it when Xiu Xian walked on his legs [laughs awkwardly]

Book stickers for extras. Book lovers who want to have extras in this book can pay attention to it.

Not bad, the rhythm is very steady

It's okay for now, keep going

The author doesn't understand what men really want. It's definitely not the love of their children, but the foundation of eternal life.

Very nice! I think it's ok! [Laughing][what][thinking][admiration]

I finished reading it in one go and I still have more to say. It's so good and I'll update it soon.