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Ding Wenlang traveled through time. No golden fingers, no magical talent, not even a wizard. He is just a new life teacher in an orphanage in London in the 1930s.
Originally this was nothing. Until he saw the name on the roster - Tom Marvolo Riddle.
That little boy with black hair, dark eyes, quiet, well-behaved, and too polite a child would become the most terrifying Dark Lord in the history of the wizarding world. Seven Horcruxes will be made. There will be two wizarding wars. Will kill countless people.
Ding Wenlang knew that if history was allowed to develop as it was, he, a Muggle, would have no chance of survival in the coming dark age.
So he decided to educate in advance.
He doesn't teach love and peace because Tom doesn't believe it. He teaches interests, rules, systems and power. He told Tom: "Fear can only make people obey you, and interest can make people follow you."
Tom understood. Then everything started to go off the rails. The Death Eaters are gone. In its place was the "Magical Equal Rights Reform Association." Azkaban is not full of prisoners. In its place came one legislative reform package after another.
Dumbledore was silent. The Ministry of Magic panicked. Ding Wenlang looked at the newspaper headline [Mr. Riddle was elected the youngest Minister of Magic with 98% approval rate] and slowly put down his coffee cup.
"... Did I teach you in the wrong direction?"
Reader comments
Really good-looking! ! What kind of Tom will Mr. Ding's resourcefulness teach him? So looking forward to it! But it's a bit awkward, what should I do? [Love][love]
Who knows? Although Tom is still very young now, Mr. Ding, who is super strategist, VS Tom, who is extremely smart and full of ambitions, is the best of both worlds! ! ! Looking forward to what happens when Tom grows up! !
Family-friendly ones are fine too! Mr. Ding is Tom's real mentor!
The straight man's actions are neither gentle nor serious, and Tom is almost being trained like a dog by Ding. Very beautiful! ! ! ˶>ᗜ<˶
This is really one of my favorite HP fanfics I have ever read, it makes me feel like it is different from other fanfics.
There is always a setting in other articles about Tom - he is the product of love drugs, so he has no love. No matter what the protagonist does, they can't change Tom, because they are trying to use love and kindness to influence a person who doesn't understand love and lives in darkness. Many have written emotional lines, but the emotional lines are not drawn up all at once. They go from unfamiliar to familiar to important to unique. The emotional line in this book is neither too fast nor too slow, just right. I really like this kind of development speed.
Then there is the portrayal of the protagonist Ding Wenlang. The protagonist gives me the impression of being cautious. He used a notebook to record the plot at the beginning, and became even more careful after being discovered by Tom. Later, he was tested in the magic world, etc. His strings were always tense, which always made me feel a little distressed. He is very smart, but the Muggle world is not peaceful, and the magic world is not open to him. Instead of being in the Muggle world and not knowing which day he will be affected by the war, it is better to choose another path where he has some information. He has no other way.
He also went from being purposefully wary of Tom at the beginning to now putting each other in the most important position. Their story is very full and seems really touching.
Although there are some small details of the timeline, it does not affect reading. Also, the author is so big, I'm so hungry! [Cry]
The writing is very good, and it stands out among a bunch of HP books that ruin the character. The setting is also relatively novel, the story line of Muggles and Voldemort. I saw a certain respect for the original work and reflected the theme that love is the greatest magic. Tom Riddle's character portrayal is very good.
The writing style spoke volumes in the past, but few people read it now. You must stick to it and don't give up on it.
It's such a fairy tale. I feel so happy when I look at the master and the apprentice who are both powerful and sinister [Admiration]
I go, shocking and delicious [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Straight men start with nothing serious [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I hope the author will not stop updating. Can the author write extras? Just finish the main text and write about the movie. The original movie is now this Tom [Adoration] [Blow kiss]
It's really good to read, and I read it in one sitting. Speaking of which, when the author writes about the relationship between master and apprentice (?), It's really not a big deal (damn it, I really can't help but want to break it). I beg the author to finish it (it's not easy to find a story that suits my taste) [Shy][Read it carefully][Read it carefully]
Please support me with five stars O_o
Overall I feel good and the writing is okay. But the writing that exaggerates the sensationalism is not very good. The narrative is relatively plain and easy to read.
There are some speculations about the world view of Harry Potter by the author in the article, but because the events happened so frequently, a few pictures were skipped, and it is not clear what happened (only for people who have not watched Harry Potter).
But the protagonist's filter on Tom is a bit too big. Is it the kind of tinted glasses? (Tom didn't do anything particularly outrageous in the early stage, but the protagonist kept saying that Tom was the Dark Lord and was very powerful)
What Tom did [in the early stage] is not considered very special. If it is very clever, it can show a little bit, but not a lot.
Then I can't do anything outstanding, but then I do it very obviously (I don't quite understand this, maybe because I only looked at it in general?)
Overall, it's quite qualified, and it's a good imaginative article.
The subject matter is also relatively new. There is no heroine and no ambiguity at the moment. (But there are some people who complain about CP in the comment area. Is this a way to avoid lightning?)
The author himself has more speculations about the world view and less descriptions of the magical world. The focus is on describing the possible connections between the ordinary world and the magical world. There are original organizations and the power of the protagonist, which may affect some people's perceptions.
There are relatively few plots about the protagonist's early resourcefulness, and there is no detailed description of the protagonist's background and character traits. The character of the protagonist is rather vague, a bit startling. I don't know if it's the character.
But I personally feel it's still within the acceptable range.
It's so beautiful that it makes my brain take off.
It looks good, can you please give it a try... Cp Tom and Mr. Ding... Wow oh oh
How can I put it, I was shocked after reading it. It seems that Tom should be like this. I hope that both Teacher Ding and Tom will have a happy ending.
This article is really good. If you are a newbie, you will consider adding a bookshelf after reading more than 30 chapters.
The author made some assumptions. If you look at it from this perspective, it is quite well written.
If you stick to the original worldview, you will feel like he is locking enemies in the void [laughing]
It's rare to see an article that portrays Tom in a more positive light without losing his original background. I look forward to it.
The idea is really exciting, and the combination of all aspects is considered the most interesting Tom fanfic I have ever seen. Others either Tom is not as powerful as the protagonist, or he is soulless but has poor vision, or the main focus is on falling in love. Most of them are changing the magic world and are also limited to the magic world. They have not thought about the integration of the two worlds.
Don't stop! ! ! ! ! ! I finally found it from System Wen Quanfinger's vulgar love story.
It's just beautiful at the beginning! Hope it doesn't end badly!
Is this finally a career in politics? Looking forward to (*^o^*)
There are currently 60 chapters, and the more I read, the more exciting they become [please update]
The protagonist's back feels cold. Is he weak? Take more medicine to replenish your body.
So far I think it looks great, I hope the updates won't be discontinued
Starting from the childhood Tom, to the updated Tom now, the step-by-step guidance is not rigid, and the changes in Tom are fully presented. It's beautiful😊
Oh my god, it's so good. I finished it in one afternoon. I'll update Modo Modo [Love] soon.
No wonder I can't watch it anymore, but because the setting is so good, I still finish watching it. It turns out that the short drama was written in a shocking way. I was shocked at every turn and said that it was so tiring to watch.
I haven't read the original work, but I just wanted to know whether there was a prophecy about the birth of the Dark Lord. I can't figure out why I keep focusing on Tom. I wonder how he survived the murder in the original work? Then the protagonist didn't realize that his arrival would change the future. The plug-in of the original script can only be used as a reference book [laughing], that is, the protagonist revealed that he suspected of knowing the future (unlike Muggles, but has no magic and knows things about the magical world) [face covering], and the protagonist is actually afraid of Tom, and thinks that Tom has not changed his mind about killing people at will. Emm [laughing] The subject matter is good, but the author likes to make it more difficult to develop the protagonist [eating melon]
Delicious😋Support Tom to commit the crime [eating melon]
Mr. Ding is simply a succubus. Really, the top succubus massacred the novice village in a targeted manner!
I don't watch Harry Potter, but suddenly I clicked on this great movie. I really like the pull between them, and I hope they get together.
Elegant, wise, powerful and rational, this is one of the most charming characters I have ever seen in Tom's fanfics. Mr. Ding taught Tom very well [note]
I can only say that this book is very, very well written. It's really amazing. If you are out of books, you can really read it. The writing is really good, link by link. I can only say that it is really good to read.
It's very beautiful, but I personally think that some of the operations that Ding Wenlang did in the Muggle world should be added. After all, he is very awesome. Since it is a two-line, shouldn't the second line be shown?
Please🙏must be. Thank you very much for writing out the Dumbledore in my heart. I hate his hypocrisy. In fact, he is not important, but you wrote it into my heart. I told n friends and I that I hate him, but no one can understand me.
I want be not to interfere with your structure, but I think the rift between Teacher Ding and Tom will become bigger and bigger. Be is the perfect ending. Of course, I still love him very much, because I am sure of the structure of the world. Come on, come on, I will keep chasing [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]
I thought the level was just visible, but I didn't expect it to be so great. It's great. This is what I wrote.
Really good-looking! ! What kind of Tom will Mr. Ding's resourcefulness teach him? So looking forward to it! But it's a bit awkward, what should I do? [Love][love] Who knows? Although Tom is still very young now, Mr. Ding, who is super strategist, VS Tom, who is extremely smart and full of ambitions, is the best of both worlds! ! ! Looking forward to what happens when Tom grows up! ! Family-friendly ones are fine too! Mr. Ding is Tom's real mentor!
The straight man's actions are neither gentle nor serious, and Tom is almost being trained like a dog by Ding. Very beautiful! ! ! ˶>ᗜ<˶
This is really one of my favorite HP fanfics I have ever read, it makes me feel like it is different from other fanfics. There is always a setting in other articles about Tom - he is the product of love drugs, so he has no love. No matter what the protagonist does, they can't change Tom, because they are trying to use love and kindness to influence a person who doesn't understand love and lives in darkness. Many have written emotional lines, but the emotional lines are not drawn up all at once. They go from unfamiliar to familiar to important to unique. The emotional line in this book is neither too fast nor too slow, just right. I really like this kind of development speed. Then there is the portrayal of the protagonist Ding Wenlang. The protagonist gives me the impression of being cautious. He used a notebook to record the plot at the beginning, and became even more careful after being discovered by Tom. Later, he was tested in the magic world, etc. His strings were always tense, which always made me feel a little distressed. He is very smart, but the Muggle world is not peaceful, and the magic world is not open to him. Instead of being in the Muggle world and not knowing which day he will be affected by the war, it is better to choose another path where he has some information. He has no other way. He also went from being purposefully wary of Tom at the beginning to now putting each other in the most important position. Their story is very full and seems really touching. Although there are some small details of the timeline, it does not affect reading. Also, the author is so big, I'm so hungry! [Cry]
The writing is very good, and it stands out among a bunch of HP books that ruin the character. The setting is also relatively novel, the story line of Muggles and Voldemort. I saw a certain respect for the original work and reflected the theme that love is the greatest magic. Tom Riddle's character portrayal is very good. The writing style spoke volumes in the past, but few people read it now. You must stick to it and don't give up on it.
It's such a fairy tale. I feel so happy when I look at the master and the apprentice who are both powerful and sinister [Admiration]
I go, shocking and delicious [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Straight men start with nothing serious [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] I hope the author will not stop updating. Can the author write extras? Just finish the main text and write about the movie. The original movie is now this Tom [Adoration] [Blow kiss]
It's really good to read, and I read it in one sitting. Speaking of which, when the author writes about the relationship between master and apprentice (?), It's really not a big deal (damn it, I really can't help but want to break it). I beg the author to finish it (it's not easy to find a story that suits my taste) [Shy][Read it carefully][Read it carefully]
Please support me with five stars O_o Overall I feel good and the writing is okay. But the writing that exaggerates the sensationalism is not very good. The narrative is relatively plain and easy to read. There are some speculations about the world view of Harry Potter by the author in the article, but because the events happened so frequently, a few pictures were skipped, and it is not clear what happened (only for people who have not watched Harry Potter). But the protagonist's filter on Tom is a bit too big. Is it the kind of tinted glasses? (Tom didn't do anything particularly outrageous in the early stage, but the protagonist kept saying that Tom was the Dark Lord and was very powerful) What Tom did [in the early stage] is not considered very special. If it is very clever, it can show a little bit, but not a lot. Then I can't do anything outstanding, but then I do it very obviously (I don't quite understand this, maybe because I only looked at it in general?) Overall, it's quite qualified, and it's a good imaginative article. The subject matter is also relatively new. There is no heroine and no ambiguity at the moment. (But there are some people who complain about CP in the comment area. Is this a way to avoid lightning?) The author himself has more speculations about the world view and less descriptions of the magical world. The focus is on describing the possible connections between the ordinary world and the magical world. There are original organizations and the power of the protagonist, which may affect some people's perceptions. There are relatively few plots about the protagonist's early resourcefulness, and there is no detailed description of the protagonist's background and character traits. The character of the protagonist is rather vague, a bit startling. I don't know if it's the character. But I personally feel it's still within the acceptable range.
It's so beautiful that it makes my brain take off. It looks good, can you please give it a try... Cp Tom and Mr. Ding... Wow oh oh
How can I put it, I was shocked after reading it. It seems that Tom should be like this. I hope that both Teacher Ding and Tom will have a happy ending. This article is really good. If you are a newbie, you will consider adding a bookshelf after reading more than 30 chapters.
The author made some assumptions. If you look at it from this perspective, it is quite well written. If you stick to the original worldview, you will feel like he is locking enemies in the void [laughing]
It's rare to see an article that portrays Tom in a more positive light without losing his original background. I look forward to it.
The idea is really exciting, and the combination of all aspects is considered the most interesting Tom fanfic I have ever seen. Others either Tom is not as powerful as the protagonist, or he is soulless but has poor vision, or the main focus is on falling in love. Most of them are changing the magic world and are also limited to the magic world. They have not thought about the integration of the two worlds.
Don't stop! ! ! ! ! ! I finally found it from System Wen Quanfinger's vulgar love story.
It's just beautiful at the beginning! Hope it doesn't end badly!
Is this finally a career in politics? Looking forward to (*^o^*) There are currently 60 chapters, and the more I read, the more exciting they become [please update]
The protagonist's back feels cold. Is he weak? Take more medicine to replenish your body.
So far I think it looks great, I hope the updates won't be discontinued
Starting from the childhood Tom, to the updated Tom now, the step-by-step guidance is not rigid, and the changes in Tom are fully presented. It's beautiful😊
Oh my god, it's so good. I finished it in one afternoon. I'll update Modo Modo [Love] soon. No wonder I can't watch it anymore, but because the setting is so good, I still finish watching it. It turns out that the short drama was written in a shocking way. I was shocked at every turn and said that it was so tiring to watch.
I haven't read the original work, but I just wanted to know whether there was a prophecy about the birth of the Dark Lord. I can't figure out why I keep focusing on Tom. I wonder how he survived the murder in the original work? Then the protagonist didn't realize that his arrival would change the future. The plug-in of the original script can only be used as a reference book [laughing], that is, the protagonist revealed that he suspected of knowing the future (unlike Muggles, but has no magic and knows things about the magical world) [face covering], and the protagonist is actually afraid of Tom, and thinks that Tom has not changed his mind about killing people at will. Emm [laughing] The subject matter is good, but the author likes to make it more difficult to develop the protagonist [eating melon]
Delicious😋Support Tom to commit the crime [eating melon]
Mr. Ding is simply a succubus. Really, the top succubus massacred the novice village in a targeted manner!
Beautiful(♡>𖥦<)/♥Highly recommended૮ ´͈ ᗜ `͈ ა♡ Really awesome૮₍♡♡₎ა
I don't watch Harry Potter, but suddenly I clicked on this great movie. I really like the pull between them, and I hope they get together.
Elegant, wise, powerful and rational, this is one of the most charming characters I have ever seen in Tom's fanfics. Mr. Ding taught Tom very well [note]
I can only say that this book is very, very well written. It's really amazing. If you are out of books, you can really read it. The writing is really good, link by link. I can only say that it is really good to read.
It's very beautiful, but I personally think that some of the operations that Ding Wenlang did in the Muggle world should be added. After all, he is very awesome. Since it is a two-line, shouldn't the second line be shown?
Please🙏must be. Thank you very much for writing out the Dumbledore in my heart. I hate his hypocrisy. In fact, he is not important, but you wrote it into my heart. I told n friends and I that I hate him, but no one can understand me. I want be not to interfere with your structure, but I think the rift between Teacher Ding and Tom will become bigger and bigger. Be is the perfect ending. Of course, I still love him very much, because I am sure of the structure of the world. Come on, come on, I will keep chasing [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]
I thought the level was just visible, but I didn't expect it to be so great. It's great. This is what I wrote.