Honkai Impact: After Death, He Became Many Valkyrie Bai Yueguang

Love is really a crazy thing.

The overall feel is good, but I don't understand why the author suddenly switched to a multi-line narrative. This will compromise the smoothness of the reader's reading. The most important thing is that the immersion before and after cannot be maintained. Of course, as a Bengsan fan, this book has well-founded plots and explosive emotions, making it an excellent work.

This is mainly a matter of perception. Before I became a demon, I felt pretty good. After I became a demon, I felt okay. It can be seen that the author is a love cook, but I don't like to love only one person. He shouldn't make novels with multiple heroines the same as having a single heroine.

If you can't write a multi-line plot well, don't write it! ! Hello! ! ◉‿◉

The book is pretty good. It would be better if it didn't require a knife. Let's take care of it first. I hate reading plots with stomachaches the most.

I can't help it, there are too few books of this kind. This is the only one I have read after reading the other two, and my writing has improved a bit. Well, it is indeed a bit more awesome. I actually dared to write multiple timelines together. I just don't know if the writing will crash later. But indeed, it looks a bit like a single female protagonist later on. Then restart the timeline and then take them down. The main reason is that Su Yi's part looks a bit like a single female protagonist, and she is really crazy about love. Anyway, except for Su Yi and the second senior sister, all the other apprentices are dead, and everything else is pretty good.

The author came here to roast chicken.

This book is really beautiful

It's wonderful to help each other

Looks good, loves to read, watch more, and update soon.

Where did that child come from?

Come on, big sister who writes books [pouts]

It looks good, but the front is a bit hard to watch.

Now that we have two lines, one is so strong and the other is so strong.

Who among the children knows what it feels like to see iVTV in the introduction?

Overall it's not bad, but the jump is a bit fast, and the subsequent multi-line narrative will be good if you can control it.

[Mazhu] The writing is very good, but there are very few who write like this. There are very few people...[Thinking]

Will Qin Suyi be resurrected later?