Rinnegan from the Start: Getting Stronger by Courting Death Across the Heavens

The title of the book is Samsung, Reason: What you write is a fan derivative of the main world and the multi-world, so you will attract the readers of the fan novel. For your book title, readers cannot find it when searching for Naruto, searching for Pirates, and searching for One Person. The label has two stars, why not try changing it to [Hokage spin-off, one-man spin-off, black-robed spin-off, multi-anime world spin-off, immortality, the more you die, the stronger you get] [sneaky laugh] Rhythm four stars The first chapter establishes the character, the second chapter introduces abilities and introduces variables, and the third chapter travels through Naruto. The pace is okay. But! What is the role of your character? 😂 Brother, you wrote about Xue Bai in the first chapter, and then there was no plot about Xue Bai in the tens of thousands of words, not even an ambiguous partner 😂 The world chooses five-star (with a traffic pool) Hokage, One Person, and Black Robe are all big IPs. There is traffic, but you did not attract it. 😄 Emotional four stars: Well, I won't spoil it when it comes to the plot. It is recommended for subsequent updates that if you have an impact on the world, you should let readers see the repercussions of change. Don't just try to stop it, otherwise it will become fast and you will not be able to retain readers. For example, if you change the will of a certain character, his behavior will change, his choices will change, and the world will also change. You let the readers see what the protagonist has changed after traveling through time. What the readers want is that the world can still function without the protagonist. However, there must be a legend of the protagonist in the world. Then it is best if the character influenced by the protagonist encounters a crisis again, or the country that the protagonist likes encounters a foreign enemy, etc., The protagonist takes action again, and then the protagonist obtains a legend again. Finally, the legends of multiple worlds are connected and all become part of the protagonist. Then the protagonist is promoted to the full level, and the protagonist becomes a part of reincarnation or reincarnation. The combat power is not handled well 😏 Let me see how you deal with the combat power. Otherwise, if the protagonist becomes invincible, the meaning of death will be lost and it will become a mindless and cool novel. 😂

It is indeed arrogant enough. This is the attitude that an invincible person should have. It's not the kind of person who is already extremely strong, and talks about playing in the world, being submissive, not caring about anything, and then being made angry by the clown later.

149 - So far, my favorite type! As a special reminder, the protagonist's resurrection is unlimited. The difference is that - the suicide is resurrected in the original world and the strength remains unchanged (except for the main world, it has not been written whether the suicide in the other world is back to the main world or in the current world. It is not very clear). He is resurrected in the other world and can extract the murderer's ability (the strength is determined by the performance before death)! ——Author, great update! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's good-looking but not particularly good-looking. I've been watching it since One Piece. I was born in 2001 and am part of a generation that grew up on the threshold of the new century. We have not experienced turbulent years, but we have witnessed the rapid rise of a country. The Shenzhou spacecraft took off again and again, and the Olympic flame was lit in Beijing. The Internet has changed from dial-up to 5G, and mobile phones have changed from buttons to full screens. We are the generation that has watched China move step by step to the center of the world stage. In my childhood, I heard the startup sound of an old-fashioned desktop computer. There are imaginations about the future in textbooks, There is the purest love and stubbornness in youth. We inherit the steadfastness of the previous generation, Also with the edge of the new generation, Don't dwell on the past and don't be afraid of the future. Born at the beginning of the century and raised in the prosperous times, There are mountains and rivers in my heart, and stars in my eyes. In your own time, grow quietly and move forward enthusiastically.

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Not bad, Shuangwen. The only drawback is that there are no female characters who travel through the world. Except for one Tsunade.

The writing is quite good, and there are basically no bad points. So far, the word count may be a bit short (because most readers may not want to read it when they see the word count). If you can keep writing, it will definitely be a good book.

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The plot is written in a simple and easy-to-understand manner, and you can get a general idea of ​​it even if you haven't watched it before. It's quite friendly to outsiders. I think this is a very important aspect of a comprehensive comic. If no matter how wonderful your writing is, only people within the circle can understand it, then after you travel through different works three times, the vast majority of readers will be lost.

The overall plot concept is very novel, breaking away from many clichéd routines. The story often takes unexpected turns. The whole process is not easy to make people feel boring and protracted. Each plot has enough highlights and attractions. The character of the protagonist is particularly likable. He is independent and clear-headed, and has his own principles and bottom lines in his actions. He will not blindly compromise and tolerate others without bottom lines. He has no sense of a virgin at all. Know how to protect yourself and fight back when faced with malice and calculations, and act with discretion when dealing with others. Kindness is a selective tenderness, not a concession without edges. The character's growth line is natural and smooth, and the emotional changes are real and unobtrusive. It not only retains the warmth of the character itself, but also has strong enough opinions. It is refreshing and healing to watch. The supporting characters are not tool-like, and the confrontation with the protagonist is full of tension. With a unique and novel plot setting, the whole work is comfortable and enjoyable to watch, and the more you watch it, the more you get hooked.