Oh No! My Online Wife Is the Guy in the Bunk Above Me

The writing is good at the front, and also pretty good at the back. But the middle is weird, a bit like AI (only personal opinion), I hope there will be more. Overall, there is no big problem. It's just that the vest fell off and the cold war gradually reconciled, and the emotional line is delicate. Appropriate.

The character setting is great, but I feel like there are a few chapters missing in the middle. The same content as before is used later, and the logic is not clear when I read it. Later, it overturns the previous content, and things that have been said clearly are repeated later as unknown. Song Qingyao threatened Lin Yang with his voice, but Lin Yang failed to record and found his way again. Another roommate helped him because he had known Shen Wan for a long time and saw that Shen was very interested in Lin. Shen helped Lin clean the table, buy medicine and so on. Ye asked Lin to help and secretly trained in the middle of the night. At this time, Song Qingyao's surveillance knew that Lin Yang was training, which was very baffling. This had nothing to do with what she had threatened Lin Yang to do with her voice. Shen Juan continued to investigate, and Han found Lu, the hacker who processed Lin Yang's information, and then took pictures of the chat records between Shen Juan and Han. No, I can't deal with it anymore. The author's writing style is still very good, and the details are particularly delicate. It is close to life and can be brought into it, and you can understand the psychology. But that's it, I gave them a sense of satisfaction in my heart, although I always wondered why Shen Wan guessed that Lin Yang was soft when he first came up. 😄

I stayed up late all night to tie it up, and the unexplained pull between the two was really great. The tension and suffocation was particularly well portrayed, especially the gradual reveal and transformation of the portrait. By the way, I secretly thought about whether there would be that kind of color scene in the future portrait. Hehe, the author works hard and I am more optimistic about you (◍>◡<◍)

It's very, very beautiful. The middle part was very distressing, but then everything got better. The two of them finally achieved enlightenment. It was also very perfect. The author's writing style is also amazing! The sourness and necessity are written very well, and overall it is very, very beautiful! ! !

Overall it's pretty good, but there are some small details that haven't been handled well. There's a section in the middle that seems to be a little missing. It's not connected but I don't admit it, and then I pull that section over and over again. It's really good. I like it [Adore][Adore][Adore]

Yes, I urge you to update more. The author writes so well. It's so exciting to watch!

It's delicious, the pace of online fraud is fast, there are pitfalls in the later stages, and the emotional drama is complicated. I'm looking forward to it to death.

I like it very much. It's very interesting. The author will update it soon. I can't wait to read the rest.

It's really well written, but because I just started grading, the score is relatively low, right? This one deserves 9.1 Points 💕💕💕 This is a plot that cannot withstand scrutiny

The actual content is better than the introduction, more logical and engaging