Uma Musume: Fearless on the Track

I think it's quite interesting, but there are still many shortcomings. I feel that the two people are more like schizophrenia. They seem to be two people, but they are actually one person. It's just that one suppresses his feelings, and the other does not suppress it at all. It's just that if the protagonist runs away and breaks his bones, doesn't he explode? One body is broken and one is broken. The other one also had a fracture, so the protagonist must have been born with steel bones, right? This dream journey feels a bit yandere indescribably? Is it a harem story with a single female protagonist or no heroine? What do you say to the protagonist? I feel like my brain works pretty well. I won the Dream Journey on the first day and my eloquence is really good. They should be able to be divided into two people later on. After all, you have to have two people present. You can't have the trainer not be present when the horse girl runs the game. It's just one or two games. If he is not present in every game, you really have to wonder if it is wrong. There is a problem, and the household registration is all done, so we can't just watch it, and the victory stage is also a big problem. Is it possible that we can see the escape dance part that the horse racing girl has to try again? Anyway, we have already made a big fuss in the student union. This little thing is not a problem. After all, this is the author's first review, so I will give you a 5-star rating. 😏👍

The early stage is too toxic, but looking at the early stage, it is just fodder. It is rare to see Ma Niang stories with animation as the main game support. Other Ma Niang stories are either made to be the same as those of playing horse racing girls. Being able to adjust daily life and competition well, being able to integrate skills into Ma Niang's body and turning them into tricks and little tricks instead of just hanging a switch like a jump order, being able to respect Ma Niang's character, not being OOC, not treating Ma Niang as a horse racing tool, being able to not be like a fun person, engaging in Chinese dialogue, making bad jokes and not respecting the original horse racing and horse racing girl. This kind of writing is too rare in Tomato. (I hope that senior veterans can also appear in the game later. It's disgusting that veteran players can change their character to make OOC and not give senior veterans a plot. It pisses me off 😫)

He is a veteran author and has already completed a million-word Ma Niang novel. As long as you can accept the settings, there probably won't be any big poisonous points. The article is very interesting. The early stage is just foreshadowing, and there should be more games in the later stage.

Please support the boss's book with five stars first.

Comment before reading [Chigua]

Big book. I'll give my brother a hard blow first.

So good, so good.

Rare to see, excellent

I can read this book more than the previous one, but I'm not sure how to update it like the previous one 😫 I still have to read the rest of the story.

Needless to say a masterpiece