The icy sea swallowed him whole. Jiraiya, his body pierced by the Six Paths of Pain, closed his eyes with boundless regret.
He had come so close to becoming Hokage, so close to marrying Tsunade, so close to seeing that kid Naruto get married and have children…
But when he opened his eyes again, he heard the steady patter of rain.
Before him stood three ragged orphans from the Land of Rain. Beneath the red-haired boy’s bangs lay the Rinnegan, destined to destroy Konoha!
“Nagato, forgive me. This time, I’m going to stamp out hell at its source!”
Jiraiya’s gaze hardened. In an instant, he struck and ripped out those godlike eyes!
[Ding! The Host has forcibly altered a major plotline in the shinobi world. The ‘Defy Fate System’ is now active!]
Holding the bloodied Rinnegan, Jiraiya looked baffled. “System? Is that some new kind of ninja tool from a village?”
From then on, the shinobi world lost a perverted Toad Sage who wrote smut and gained a fearsome Toad Sage who was ruthless and swept all before him! Madara Uchiha roared from his underground chamber, coughing up blood: “Who! Who stole my eyes!”
Very consistent with the original work. Although there are only about 30 pictures. But it's really, really beautiful. Good writing. Books I've seen. Among the Hokage, only Sister Juan's twin powers can compare with him.
Inconsistency. I told Danzo in front of the senior management in the conference room that Sakumo is not dead and I cannot touch him as long as I am alive. After a while, he said that he was nominally dead, and then said that Danzo should not let Danzo find out that he was still alive.
The content is very good, I really like it! But for old fans of Naruto, they may struggle with logical issues. After all, they have watched the anime many times and will unconsciously make comparisons! Overall it's pretty good, keep up the good work, author!
Generally speaking, I like to save people at certain points without eradicating the root of the problem. I let Danzo cause trouble continuously, and then go to the rescue again.
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There are too many contradictions in time. Wasn't it Lu Yi during World War II? Why did he become Lu Jiu? I remember White Fang died after World War II? [What]
It's so embarrassing to write, I commend Jiraiya for writing it
There are too many natural segments
It's a bit strange, I don't know what to say
Not bad, good, very good-looking