Are the Twin School Beauties Yanderes? I Raised Them!

It's quite interesting. The heroine's past always reminds me of myself. My grandma introduced me to everyone and said that my mother ran away with someone else. I actually didn't feel much about my mother running away with someone else, because I had received very little maternal love since I was a child. But she said over and over again that the eyes and words of people around me made me numb and escape. I don't know why I said this. This book is quite beautiful, and the male and female protagonists are also very profound.

The writing is quite good, and it makes people want to read on. However, the plot progress is a bit slow, maybe because of the multiple female protagonists. So far, there has been no substantial emotional development between the male and female protagonists. Considering that there are three female protagonists, the plot of this book may be longer. I want to give up. The flaws in the author's writing are becoming more and more obvious. In terms of emotional description and behavioral logical description, the author always has a tendency to explain everything too clearly. He repeatedly reiterates that in fact, there are some things that the author does not need to write at all, and readers can understand them themselves. It is too verbose to write. There is a lack of appropriate white space in emotional description and psychological description. There is a suspicion of a high word count. The writing rhythm is very poor, the plot advances slowly, and the information density is low, which is devastating to the overall reading experience.

It's awesome. The writing is no problem and the descriptions are very detailed. Especially the characterization of the characters is very detailed and flexible. However, there are a lot of explanatory narrations. It's probably like a single explanation that can be seen many times in different places. It may feel cumbersome. Everything else is very good. The rhythm is smooth and well controlled. In fact, I had a strange feeling when I watched it before. I felt that the smell of the bean buns in the narration was getting stronger and stronger.

It's very well written, it's my favorite genre, and it's one of the few Bingjiao novels that I don't skip. The details are described well, and Wen Youning really likes it 😳 But having said that, hurry up and get to the stage of being imprisoned by Bingjiao 😠 😠 Hey, as a reader, I like the author's advice the most. I don't know what the plot will be at the moment, so I'll give my best to the four-star 😳 author.

Although it is a harem, the male protagonist in this book is not a romantic, but is actually kind to the female protagonist, and the care hidden in the details is also full of love. I really like the author's writing style, and from time to time, he will be abstract and make readers break down. In short, come on, author!

Not to mention other people, I personally really like this book. The love story in this book is very detailed. He doesn't have a more classic one, where the heroine suffers, the hero helps save her, and the heroine immediately falls hopelessly in love with her. The sister of this book can be said to be sober in the world. The elder sister knows that she likes the male protagonist, but due to her own reasons, it can be said that she does not dare to expect this relationship. She has a lot of self-esteem and doesn't want to accept the male protagonist's kindness for no reason. Although some friends here may think that my sister is a bit naughty after watching it. I personally haven't seen the place where I completely open up my heart later on, but based on the current relationship development, I personally really like it. I hope the author will maintain his standards and strive to get the rating of this novel up to 9 points. Personally, I quite recommend this novel. 👍👍👍 I listened to the book all morning when I was at work today, and I found a problem. The author emphasized the same thing too many times in the article. For example, the sentence "Parents are something the male protagonist never dares to think about" appeared no less than four or five times in the article, as well as several other sentences. I hate to say this, I know the author may want to emphasize the theme, but it's a bit naive. I felt a little irritated when I was talking because I kept emphasizing those points. I hope the author can pay attention to it.

Definitely five stars. Whether it's the right mood, scenery or vivid characters in the book, the author's book gave me a sense of delicacy like "children's literature". They always touch me when I read it. It has a "sense of all living beings". It is crushed and broken to describe the pain of the two female protagonists, and it is also carefully mixed with the indescribable loneliness of the male protagonist. It reveals the ordinary atmosphere. The "Yao Ji" stall of the protagonist group sells the sweet and bitter. This article is about three female protagonists, but I only wrote about two of them at the beginning. I was also worried whether the addition of a third person would break the balance or be toxic, but it turns out that I thought too much. The addition of Zhong Ling was very smooth and even careful, and then she was painted under the old tree with the rest of the people, as if she was already there. Although I chose this book because of the yandere and the plot of this book is still unclear as of the time I posted the review, I can say that this book is worth reading slowly. Whether it is for the yandere novel or the quiet corner, I once mistakenly thought it was an online article. Check it out and laugh out loud. Unexpectedly, I put it together with "Children's Literature" in just two nights. It gave me a "Children's Literature"-like touch. Although it may not be comparable, at least in my opinion, it was included in the "Children's Literature" in my heart (first time writing a book review website Haihan)

It took a relatively long time to see Lin Luo and Shu Yao quarreling from the beginning (which is where the current update is). Overall, it's pretty good. The protagonists are portrayed with flesh and blood, and you can feel that they are alive. But some places always feel uncomfortable. Feeling a little unhappy, Shuyao was afraid that the two people would come and influence Lin Luo, so she kept silent and wanted to take her sister away after paying off the tuition fees. As a result, You Ning was afraid and Lin Luo was angry. After Lin Luo found the heroine's parents, what he wanted was for them to go home, because he could find a better doctor and no longer have to worry or run around for money. As a result, the two had a quarrel and stabbed each other in the most painful place. It's all for the good of the other person, but I haven't told the other person. There is one thing that I think is right, but the other person may not necessarily feel it. From a certain perspective, the problems of both are the same. On the one hand, this makes the two characters more three-dimensional, because people are not perfect, but it is always depressing to read. I know it is for the development of the story later, but I still want to say that I am not happy😢 I hope the author will update it soon, and then make the relationship between the male and female protagonists closer, come on^0^~

We walk alone in the darkness, but fortunately we become each other's light. Heal the pain of the past with love, support each other with tenderness, embrace and redeem each other in the mud, slowly walk out of the haze over the long years, and find peace of mind and destination. Covered with scars, he was reconciled when he met someone. Love is not about saving out of thin air, but about two people slowly opening their hearts, healing each other's regrets and cowardice, and redeeming each other, so that they no longer have to fight against the sufferings of the world alone. Once trapped in the abyss of the past, it was difficult to escape, and an encounter broke the silence. They heal each other, illuminate each other, use their long-lasting love to dissolve despair, and complete the dual redemption of self and emotion.

To be honest, I thought it was okay when I first started reading it. The more I read it, the more I felt that the author's portrayal of the character's personality and psychological activities was really detailed. Some episodes were quite touching. Also, the idea of ​​not letting the two sisters confront these two beasts is really good. The first 19 years were already hard enough. If we try again, even if the outcome is good, life will always feel like it is too hard. Also, come on, the author, please update quickly. I read over 100 chapters in 2 days. 😅