You Raised Me Like This, and You Still Want to Escape Unscathed?

It's quite interesting. The heroine's past always reminds me of myself. My grandma introduced me to everyone and said that my mother ran away with someone else. I actually didn't feel much about my mother running away with someone else, because I had received very little maternal love since I was a child. But she said over and over again that the eyes and words of people around me made me numb and escape. I don't know why I said this. This book is quite beautiful, and the male and female protagonists are also very profound.

It's very well written, it's my favorite genre, and it's one of the few Bingjiao novels that I don't skip. The details are described well, and Wen Youning really likes it [shy] But having said that, hurry up and get to the stage of being imprisoned by Bingjiao [angry] [angry] Hey, as a reader, I like the author's advice the most. I don't know what the plot will be at the moment, so I'll give my best to the four-star [shy] author.

It's awesome. The writing is no problem and the descriptions are very detailed. Especially the characterization of the characters is very detailed and flexible. However, there are a lot of explanatory narrations. It's probably like a single explanation that can be seen many times in different places. It may feel cumbersome. Everything else is very good. The rhythm is smooth and well controlled. In fact, I had a strange feeling when I watched it before. I felt that the smell of the bean buns in the narration was getting stronger and stronger.

The writing is quite good, and it makes people want to read on. However, the plot progress is a bit slow, maybe because of the multiple female protagonists. So far, there has been no substantial emotional development between the male and female protagonists. Considering that there are three female protagonists, the plot of this book may be longer. I want to give up. The flaws in the author's writing are becoming more and more obvious. In terms of emotional description and behavioral logical description, the author always has a tendency to explain everything too clearly. He repeatedly reiterates that in fact, there are some things that the author does not need to write at all, and readers can understand them themselves. It is too verbose to write. There is a lack of appropriate white space in emotional description and psychological description. There is a suspicion of a high word count. The writing rhythm is very poor, the plot advances slowly, and the information density is low, which is devastating to the overall reading experience.

We walk alone in the darkness, but fortunately we become each other's light. Heal the pain of the past with love, support each other with tenderness, embrace and redeem each other in the mud, slowly walk out of the haze over the long years, and find peace of mind and destination. Covered with scars, he was reconciled when he met someone. Love is not about saving out of thin air, but about two people slowly opening their hearts, healing each other's regrets and cowardice, redeeming each other, and no longer fighting the sufferings of the world alone. Once trapped in the abyss of the past, it was difficult to escape, and an encounter broke the silence. They heal each other, illuminate each other, use their long-lasting love to dissolve despair, and complete the double redemption of self and emotion.

Definitely five stars. Whether it's the right mood, scenery or vivid characters in the book, the author's book gave me a sense of delicacy like "children's literature". They always touch me when I read it. It has a "sense of all living beings". It is crushed and broken to describe the pain of the two female protagonists, and it is also carefully mixed with the indescribable loneliness of the male protagonist. It reveals the ordinary atmosphere. The "Yao Ji" stall of the protagonist group sells the sweet and bitter. This article is about three female protagonists, but I only wrote about two of them at the beginning. I was also worried whether the addition of a third person would break the balance or be toxic, but it turns out that I thought too much. The addition of Zhong Ling was very smooth and even careful, and then she was painted under the old tree with the rest of the people, as if she was already there. Although I chose this book because of the yandere and the plot of this book is still unclear as of the time I posted the review, I can say that this book is worth reading slowly. Whether it is for the yandere novel or the quiet corner, I once mistakenly thought it was an online article. Check it out and laugh out loud. Unexpectedly, I put it together with "Children's Literature" in just two nights. It gave me a "Children's Literature"-like touch. Although it may not be comparable, at least in my opinion, it was included in the "Children's Literature" in my heart (first time writing a book review website Haihan)

It took a relatively long time to see Lin Luo and Shu Yao quarreling from the beginning (which is where the current update is). Overall, it's pretty good. The protagonists are portrayed with flesh and blood, and you can feel that they are alive. But some places always feel uncomfortable. Feeling a little unhappy Shuyao was afraid that the two people would come and influence Lin Luo, so she kept silent and wanted to take her sister away after paying off the tuition. As a result, You Ning was afraid and Lin Luo was angry. After Lin Luo found the heroine's parents, what he wanted was for them to go home, because he could find a better doctor and no longer have to worry or run around for money. As a result, the two had a quarrel and stabbed each other in the most painful place. It's all for the good of the other person, but I haven't told the other person. There is one thing that I think is right, but the other person may not necessarily feel it. From a certain perspective, the problems of both are the same. On the one hand, this makes the two characters more three-dimensional, because people are not perfect, but it is always depressing to read. I know it is for the development of the story later, but I still want to say that I am unhappy [crying] I hope the author will update it soon and bring the relationship between the male and female protagonists closer, come on ^0^~

Although it is a harem, the male protagonist in this book is not a romantic, but is actually kind to the female protagonist, and the care hidden in the details is also full of love. I really like the author's writing style, and from time to time, he will be abstract and make readers break down. In short, come on, author!

Not to mention other people, I personally really like this book. The love story in this book is very detailed. He doesn't have a more classic one, where the heroine suffers, the hero helps save her, and the heroine immediately falls hopelessly in love with her. The sister of this book can be said to be sober in the world. The elder sister knows that she likes the male protagonist, but due to her own reasons, it can be said that she does not dare to expect this relationship. She has a lot of self-esteem and doesn't want to accept the male protagonist's kindness for no reason. Although some friends here may think that my sister is a bit naughty after watching it. I personally haven't seen the place where I completely open up my heart later on, but based on the current relationship development, I personally really like it. I hope the author will maintain his standards and strive to get the rating of this novel up to 9 points. Personally, I quite recommend this novel. [Like][Like][Like] I listened to the book all morning when I was at work today, and I found a problem. The author emphasized the same thing too many times in the article. For example, the sentence "Parents are something the male protagonist never dares to think about" appeared no less than four or five times in the article, as well as several other sentences. I hate to say this, I know the author may want to emphasize the theme, but it's a bit naive. I felt a little irritated when I was talking because I kept emphasizing those points. I hope the author can pay attention to it.

The author's portrayal of emotions is very delicate, with a touch of warmth lingering between the lines, and the mood is soothing. The disadvantage is that some realistic depictions are not very rigorous, but overall they are for the development of the plot. I will abandon these when reading novels. After all, I am here to read the male and female protagonists [Sending Hearts]

Overall, the emotional lines are well written, and the ordinary writing is better than sincerity and harmony. The plot is quite satisfactory, but it seems a bit typical at the moment. The plot of a big family's daughter being taken away is really... The writing style is average, often re-explaining the characters' actions and language, and likes to use various metaphors and borrowed objects to express emotions, but it is actually very slow and too cumbersome. My suggestion to the author is not to add a bunch of voice-overs when writing dialogues. The dialogues should be smoother and the characters' emotions should be felt by the readers themselves. It would be a bit of a drama when written. But the emotional description and changes are good

I don't comment easily, but for this book, I think the author's writing style is very good. Regarding the narration parts, the expressions are very sweet. Hehe, and the author also listens to readers' suggestions. This is one of the few better authors I have met. It's really good. For the subsequent plot , I think I can partially elaborate on Lin Luo's life experience. At the same time, I think I should also write a little bit about Dean Shen (the old man in the orphanage). After all, he is also the person who raised Lin Luo and was so good to Lin Luo. I remember in the novel There shouldn't be a plot where Lin Luo goes to see Dean Shen. I think the author could have written that after You Ning's condition gradually improved, he could have taken them to see Dean Shen to pay tribute to Dean Shen. Dean Shen also helped the two sisters, and at the same time, he could have focused on them this time. When traveling, I will include the parents of the two sisters. As parents, I saw that Dean Shen also helped the sisters find Lin Luo. Their parents will definitely be grateful to Dean Shen, and both parties redeemed each other. Also, the author's big book title can be changed. I think it can be changed to 1. "Give them a glimmer of light, paranoia also rushes to me" or 2. "The glimmer of light embraces each other, and we depend on each other year after year" meaning: Everyone is a lonely glimmer of light, when we meet and embrace each other, we illuminate each other and stay together for a long time. By the way, there is the last one, which is to add a plot and let Lin Luo learn powerful skills or knowledge. After all, if he becomes a son-in-law later, he must have the real ability to help the sisters manage the company. Hahahahaha, the male protagonist will definitely not be able to just write novels [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I hope the author can see this

To be honest, I thought it was okay when I first started reading it. The more I read it, the more I felt that the author's portrayal of the character's personality and psychological activities was really detailed. Some episodes were quite touching. Also, the idea of ​​not letting the two sisters confront these two beasts is really good. The first 19 years have been hard enough. If we try again, even if the outcome is good, life will still feel like it is too hard. Also, come on, the author, please update quickly. I read over 100 chapters in 2 days. [Laughing awkwardly]

Although, let me tell the truth I don't really like the author's writing style, it has a faint human-machine feel. But his plot and character psychology are handled very well. All in all, a very good work (If I don't like the author's writing style, I didn't say so) Come on, author [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I stayed up late yesterday watching this AI animation, and today I'm going to catch up on the rest of the novel. It's very interesting, but I have a problem that I would like my brothers to help me solve. I rarely read the Ice Cellar genre. Is this the case for everyone? Is this considered a positive role identity or a negative one? Is there usually a whitewashing process for a character like this? Is he going to regain his previous personality, or will he maintain his ice cellar state? I was a bit panicked when I saw the sudden change in personality. I feel that I still lack experience. I hope brothers can add more. The author will give it a big boost [Salute]

It feels very good and worthy of support [smile] The male and female protagonists are very distinct. The male protagonist with banana emotional intelligence does not need to say much [face covering]. Both sisters are very good, but our Lingling always feels a bit pitiful [almost crying]. She is the most caring, active and intentional about the male protagonist. Fortunately, the author changed it so that Lingling can intervene naturally, otherwise it would be a pity [shy] It's a bit abrupt to write the current plot, but there's nothing you can do about it. You can't drag on bad data all the time, and the author can't drag on the plot anymore. The overall impression is okay and worthy of support. Looking forward to a happy ending [smile]

[Smile] The writing is very good, whether it is the plot or the creation of the characters, but the author has 100 to 150 words of emotional expression at the end of each time. It is not bad, but it looks awkward. Once or twice is okay, but I have seen it too many times. [Smirk] Of course, it may be that everyone has a different opinion, but the overall story is still very novel. Keep it up, author. And the last point, it must not be an autobiography.

The writing is relaxed and relaxed, the words are exquisite and concise, there are no redundant modifications, and every description is just right. The story unfolds slowly in the text, and the artistic conception is far-reaching. After reading it, the lingering lingering feeling still lingers in my heart, which shows that my writing skills are very profound. The author's writing style is delicate and full of aura, and the characters and scenery are vivid and three-dimensional. The words and sentences are natural and elegant. They are not deliberately carved, but every word is moving. The narrative rhythm is very well controlled and the immersion is very strong. It is easy to be brought into the world constructed by the text. The writing has both character and tenderness, the narrative is smooth and silky, and the description is full of layers. A few strokes can outline a complete picture, the emotional expression is restrained and deep, the writing style is unique, and the reading process is a complete enjoyment. The book has solid foundation and clear writing style. It abandons the accumulation of flashy rhetoric and uses simple and powerful words to describe the content. The emotions are sincere and full, and the appeal is strong. The more you read, the more you can feel the ingenuity behind the words.

The portrayal is very good. The last yandere novel that made me feel good was Xiao Cheng's and Tomato's popular book. But just because the portrayal was so good, the relationship progress was very slow, because their characters did not support the rapid improvement of relationships. In fact, I had read this book before Zhong Ling came out, but at that time Maybe it's because of the introduction, but I haven't read it yet. Although I support Zhong Ling's joining, I don't know why, but I still want to see the two sisters and the male protagonist. Maybe it's because of their experiences. I really don't want to see them being wronged, so I'll just watch it here today. Good night, everyone.

Like, like, I don't know about others. Anyway, I really like this book. I love you so much, the author. The subject matter is great, and the author also promised a happy ending. If you want to get into it, come and read it. It's really well written. The descriptions in some places are so amazing that it makes people watch. It makes me so happy. It's the author, please update it quickly. I feel so uncomfortable. I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body when I can't read your novel. Please update it quickly [crying] Author Update soon Update soon I will generate electricity for you

Very, very beautiful. The protagonist is very, very good to the twin sisters, and his daily life with them is also very good. . Although there aren't too many emotional scenes with Zhong Ling because Zhong Ling appeared a little late, I feel like it should be very sweet later on.

It's so beautiful! Although the design of the plot cannot be considered absolutely perfect, the writing style is very good and the atmosphere is also very good. It's so beautiful! Anyway, it is a book that can make people resonate and feel. Of course, it may seem a little noisy in some places, but despite its flaws, it can still be considered a masterpiece.

Recommend! ! ! ! Recommend! ! ! Recommend! ! ! ! Say important things three times The characters stand up well. Although there are multiple female protagonists, the heroine's character is very vivid. There are three female protagonists, three personalities, quiet, tenacious, and tolerant. Overall, it is not too toxic. The emotional aspect also slowly comes into the heart, which makes people feel comfortable watching it. Recommend! ! ! I will follow up on the rest and comment on it The author will update soon

The writing is really good, so much so that I cried while reading the latest one from the middle. The plot between the two sisters meeting the protagonist was so well written, Zhong Ling, it was written too suddenly. But the author wrote Zhong Ling so well that I felt like it wouldn't work without this one. The nineteen years between the two sisters is very exciting. Some people may think it is nothing, but to me it is really very exciting. It's a bit slow to warm up. When can the protagonist and heroines know their feelings?

It's quite good-looking. The character of Zhong Ling is so good that it makes people feel that it is really abnormal not to choose her at this stage of her appearance. Although it is a bit off-topic, I hope it will have a good ending and at least make people feel comfortable to watch.

In fact, there is nothing particularly good to comment on, and spoilers are not good. To put it simply, it is a pretty good novel. It has some minor flaws, but not many. It should be a multi-girl novel that focuses on emotional development and is more about daily life. It is worth reading.

It looks good. The author writes well. The writing is not bad and the content is not cliche. It's just that I personally hope that the author can write more plots about my sister. I feel that my sister's emotional line is a bit slow now. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. The author doesn't have to worry too much and just follow his own pace. I hope the author can continue to work hard and not stop updating.

Author, I cried while reading your book. I lost it. Very important person. Push them all out with your own hands. I closed the door in my heart and sealed it all with chains. There is no keyhole. There is no way to open it again. I thought these memories would remain forever until I died. A novel opened up those memories for me, gently opening a gap. They should have grown up by this time. It turns out that it wasn't the me who hated them, but the person I was at that time. Without the ability to protect them, I will once again dust my memory. This time I'm going to soak it… This novel is really good, super good, and the author did you cry when you read it? [Laughing]

It's very good, and the author is also very capable. I've read a hundred chapters so far, and I'm not impressed at all. On the contrary, it's so sweet to me. I really recommend everyone to watch it. One more mention, L, I win!

When I first read this book, I thought it was very bland, but the emotional expression and the awkward temperaments of Shu Yao and Lin Luo fully reflect the complexity of East Asian love. The author very delicately portrays the sensitivity of the characters when describing daily life, but the author's own writing style is not enough to support his own ideas, making some of the content a bit cumbersome to read. But the most exciting thing about this book is the outbreak of the conflict between Lin Luo and Shu Yao (the knife). The author writes about the knife like Wen Quxing coming to earth. The emotional expression, the impact of words, and the impact on the people around him after the conflict breaks out are almost consistent with reality. Only those who are most familiar with it know how to stab people with the knife the most. The plot in the book is deliberately tragic for the sake of being tragic, such as the identity gap between the Wen sisters (and such identities can be abducted), and Wen Shuyao's psychological and physical trauma (she has been with Lin Luo for so long but will distance herself when the relationship just heats up, and even uses accounting to measure sincerity. PS: I personally think it is a bit contrived, but in reality, if you suffer long-term psychological damage, you may not trust everyone). To sum up, it is a work that you can watch, but the male protagonist is a bit cheesy, the female protagonist is awkward, and the plot is bloody.