The Heartthrob Is Also Keeping His Vest Tight Today

Well, the reasons why I gave this book four stars are as follows. Those who want to get into the trap can refer to it. I also hope that the author can read and adopt my opinions. But they are all innocuous questions. The first one is that the plot is relatively dull. I have read more than 10 chapters so far, and the overall feeling is that it is too bland. I really like to read the Ma Jiawen with this theme. In comparison, the plot of this book is not so compact, and there are too many trivial things described. Secondly, I personally think the emphasis on psychological description is a bit biased. I can also understand that the author probably wanted to write a less-than-perfect protagonist. However, I personally think that the perspective of the description is a bit broad, and it should focus on the psychological description of the protagonist himself and the analysis of others. Rather than the other way around. Keep supporting characters appropriately mysterious. This is also a cool point, as it will make readers feel that the protagonist has a sense of grasping the overall situation, and the supporting characters will also surprise readers when they shine. The third one is that the simplicity is not appropriate (I personally feel it is a little bit, but it does not particularly affect reading). This type of article is basically a category of cool writing. The multiple protagonists and the process of losing the horse are a plot that makes readers' adrenaline soar. As for the plot, it should be concise and appropriate. The daily trivial matters should be sketched out, and the main line description of the superpower should be highlighted. In summary, that's it, it's not a big problem. It won't affect reading very much. Babies can read a dozen chapters first to appreciate it. [Love][love]

. . After tying the score, I didn't say anything but just reminisced and said it was delicious😋. Xu Yi invented this gadget😋It's so cute😋 The transition of the plot is very smooth ~ I like it very much, and the character's personality is also super distinct. How come Xu Yi keeps releasing his charm. . . I like it very much. This is a petty thing, the male mother is here, what are you talking about! Xiaoyi, who is roommate with the three protagonists, turns out to be the dormitory chief. What did you say! This little guy not only had a high IQ but also created some superpower props, and also maxed out his force points? System: How to play 666 Yougui [the talent comes from the monster]. What did you say! It doesn't matter if you use the sickle to cut wheat. Your sickle can also kill monsters just like chopping vegetables, and it also has its own cleaning function. . So high-end. What did you say! You are also a computer whiz. . Like it more This Xie Yu and Jiang Xu opened their eyes and opened their eyes and opened Gui Gui's identity guessing process, and the results were correct. They also talked about the intuition system (bus). There is also Shi Jianxing. Under the messy colored hair is the heart of a golden retriever puppy. It's from Total Sunshine Puppy. It's so delicious. I'm the first person to fall in love with Xu Yi. How come you, a handsome dog, fell in love with an ordinary-looking passerby? (The protagonist has changed his appearance.) The plot is not cliché, the rhythm is tight, and the God of transitions comes👍 Xu Yi, the last person in the world who doesn't like eating strawberry cakes Xie Yu, the last person in the world who dislikes busy work Jiang Xu, the last person in the world who doesn't like to test When I see the stars, I am the most honest and heartless person in the world.

Tianguo's writing style is really comforting!!! Highly recommended!!! Tianguo's choice of words and sentences reminds me of the comfort I felt when reading Mr. Lao She's works. Lines of simple text contain humor and philosophy. It gives people a sense of plainness mixed with excitement, but without the accumulation of gorgeous words. From time to time, a paragraph of thinking and reasoning will appear, so that your reading will not be too boring or too tiring. This book is both friendly and harsh for a book-hungry person like me. Tianguo's writing style is really suitable for my taste, and the subject matter of this book is also right in my heart. But! Why are there only more than thirty chapters? (T▽T) It's not enough to read! Closer to home, this book is too short to boast about it, so it can only be based on the current situation. The plot is now smooth, and the emotional line between the protagonists has also been slightly revealed. Everything unfolds with Xu Yi as the center. It is probably a 50/50 split between warm daily life and combat (?). Those who are afraid of being frustrated don't have to be afraid anymore. This is one of the most cool protagonists I have ever seen. OK, let me talk about my own understanding of the characters. The three original protagonists all have their own shortcomings and have their own logic in doing things. They even have some minor conflicts sometimes due to family environment (abbreviation: children, have you ever seen people communicate with each other) (bs) It depends on the individual's understanding of what he means. I think he should be kind and neutral. He will not change his initial plan (retire after graduation, yes, it is really cool) because of what he sees and hears. He will not be too ruthless (? Forgive me for not describing it) and sometimes he will have his own little bad taste (hehehe) Personally I want to ask: 1. Tianguo Tianguo, can we write more, maybe two chapters a day?

The plot is good, the writing is good, the rhythm is well grasped, the vest is covered well, and it falls off a little when it is time to fall off, without being too hanging on me. I like Xiaoyi's character design very much. The protagonist has his own thoughts, and in terms of dealing with people, you will feel that he is really a gentle and elegant person, with a stable mood, and he also enlightens the protagonist group. As a passerby, he is also helping the protagonist group and promoting the plot in his own way. Xiaoyi has a pair of loving parents, and his life is very human. When you read it, you will feel very friendly and you will like him more and more. Reading between the lines of this book, you sometimes feel like reading prose. This feeling is a plus, and it feels very comfortable to describe a peaceful campus life. In fact, as the protagonist grows up, I also understand something. The author's writing style is really good. Love, friendship, and family relationships are all described, and it is full of various aspects of life. I'm really looking forward to Xiaoyi's true appearance [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]

It's very delicious, and the interaction between the protagonists is also very interesting, but 1v1 is 1v1, don't be aIl, okay? The protagonist needs friendship, needs love, love is not the only friendship, it is very, very beautiful, and for comics like this, there are really 1v bul It's very rare. The author's writing really moved my heart. If you want to read All Xiang's article, can you read All Xiang's article? [Crying] [Crying] [Crying] In short, the author wrote that my Simba is in trouble. Author, I want to express my love to you [Blow kiss] [Flow kiss] [Flow kiss] [Flow kiss]

Please, how can you be so beautiful? [Send my heart][Send my heart] I am still more accepting of a large number of psychological descriptions. This method is equivalent to writing the analysis process of the characters and taking us readers to experience it personally. [Blowing Kiss] The characters are all smart, their IQs are online, the descriptions are very delicate, and the rhythm is also very good. The process analysis is really well written. [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] It feels so good to wear a vest [Note] The only thing is that sometimes I will be given a long section that is connected together, especially the analysis process, which makes me a little dizzy. But for now, I can still accept it. Everything else is pretty good. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] Write quickly! ! Produce food quickly! ! Love you author [][][][][][][][][][][][][] Hey, hey, brother Dao, when will they discover all the vests? I'm really looking forward to this 1v1~~

Absolutely divine, a bit biased toward group portraits. What surprised me was the description of the characters. The protagonist's heart-throb characteristic is not his appearance but his words and deeds. The supporting characters are also very successful in shaping. They are not like the emotional promoters between the protagonists. Their personalities are very distinct. The writing is quite good. Rather than knowing the emotional development between the characters through the writing, you can better feel the spirit of the characters and the thoughts the author wants to express (to put it simply, at first glance, it is not much different from other books, but the writing is very distinctive)

The author has been updating a chapter every day, so far it is full time. The writing is delicate and calm but also touching. There are just too few people and the ratings are too low. Xu Yi's character is also in line with my xp. He has a strong personality and brings a sense of security.

Super super super super beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Blows a kiss] I also read the teacher's last book! It's also a very good piece of work! The author must keep writing, okay? ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Sending Hearts]

It's a very novel setting. I was attracted by it at first glance. However, there are still too few new books and I can't get enough of it. I'm looking forward to the cooperation and confrontation between Xu Yi and the protagonists in the later period (?, I hope more people can read this book after it is updated and it will get better and better😇

The subject matter is very novel and quite good-looking. However, I don't really like the part after Jiang Xu, which gave me an uncomfortable feeling. I can't describe where this dislike comes from. I always feel that Xu Yi's CP is Xie Yu [Thinking]

It's a nice plot with smooth flow and good writing. It's more of a group portrait. I like the characters. You can actually mark the main attack. If you don't read a few times, you won't know who it is. I want to know when the horse will fall off and the true appearance will be restored. It would be great if they met in JJ. This book is really well written.

It's so cool. The author's writing is very good. It's very interesting and the main character's IQ is also very good. Others are also very smart and very good at shaping characters. It's just that I came too early www. . It didn't take long to tie TAT. Looking forward to the follow-up plot, please give your best to the author [shy]

It looks really good, the setting is very interesting, the protagonist is really a very charming person, the love line is very well laid out so far, and the storyline is also very interesting. As a person who doesn't like to write book reviews, I want to write one. , The author is great, this book will definitely be popular, it is really good to read [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore] [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I really love you, I will definitely be popular.

The setting is interesting and well-written, the characters are very cute, and the style feels like a movie storyboard. There are some transitions, but the text format is a bit abrupt and you can't understand what is being said at the first time, which affects the viewing experience. The transitions are smooth, but the reading flow will be interrupted, which is quite uncomfortable.

The writing is very good, the writing is concise, clear and neat. It doesn't feel too complicated and looks good. And I can also learn something from the article, and the characters have normal views. When writing about characters, one does not create them superficially, but writes from the inside out, so that one can truly feel the charm of the characters. Nowadays, many articles focus on the superficial appearance to highlight the charm of the characters. It seems that apart from the appearance, the quality of the person is not worth caring about. The point is that the protagonists have brains and are normal people. It's so good that I stayed up until early in the morning watching it. I'm already planning to check out the author's other works, they should all be good too.

Do you really want 1v1? They all smell good. This is just a novel. Can I have both?

The author is amazing and his writing style is awesome! Some scenes are also very warm and real. It was only the first time I read it. When I read this book for the first time, it only had more than 20 chapters. I thought this book had too few chapters. This is the second time I read this book. If you are curious, come in and take a look. I didn't expect it to be so good. [Love] Author, please update, we will support you [Like] Next are my thoughts: I can't stand it. I'm so excited after watching it. Is there anything else? The auspicious time has arrived! Resurrect my teacher! (How to do it) ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈ ቼ (Affix the charm) (Hold the mahogany sword) (Place incense) (How to do it) (Recite the words) (Dance to the Great God) ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ Come! Come! Come! ! ! (Burning incense) (how to do it) (reciting words) (jumping the great god) ጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ (jumping the great god) (turning around the stove) ጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ (burning incense) (how to do it) ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈ (chanting) (rotating) ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ (Ringing the bell) (Dancing Master) ኈ ቼ ዽ ኈ ቼ ዽ ጿ (Singing in a low voice) (Ringing the bell) (Flipping the flag) (Lighting the fire) (Practice) (Ringing the bell) (Reciting the mantra) ቼ ዽ ጿ ኈ ቼ ዽ The author updates, come on!

It's so good-looking [plus one on the bookshelf] [The masterpiece of Bird Eater] [The masterpiece of Bird Eater] [The masterpiece of Bird Eater] [Asking for more explosive updates] [Asking for more explosive updates] [Asking for more explosive updates] [Asking for more explosive updates] [Asking for more explosive updates] Delicious! ! ! Tasty! ! ! Tasty! ! ! The article is very suitable to my taste! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Screaming with excitement) Teacher, don't stop updating, don't keep begging, it's not easy to find the second one, don't make the same mistake again ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू )

It's nice to watch. The main character has a good personality. He likes sweet and spicy food. He has two vests. It's really fun to watch the protagonist get along with the people in the main group every day and prevent him from losing his vest. Hehehe, System 666 is also very cute ~ The writing is good. It's very comfortable to read all day long. There are no surprises so far. I look forward to the follow-up plot (-^^-)

How can you dare to enter prosperity when you are poor? How dare the gentle breeze on both sleeves mislead the beautiful woman? How dare you stay in high school if you don't have enough food? How dare you talk about home affairs when the four seasons are wandering? The five elements lack money and sorrow arises in the heart! If the six paths fail, everything will be worse than human beings! The seven exquisite orifices can be read all over the world! It's hard to know the beauty's heart from all the beautiful faces! The journey to the Nine Heavens is far away and difficult to reach in this life. The ten ghosts and gods do not bless the poor people. How dare you read it when it is so wonderfully written? Author-chan, Vadasi will follow you for the rest of his life.

The writing is really beautiful and delicious. The characters of every character in it are very, very delicious and very beautiful. The author, please don't be discouraged. Don't be discouraged by the score. It's really beautiful. [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

Awesome, so beautiful, but so young, I met you when I shouldn't have fallen in love with you...

I really found a treasure in this book. The content is written step by step, and it can be seen that the author is a master of details. Xiao Xu's charm is hidden in the text but it is more obvious and suitable for people like me who are not very flexible. However, if the author or smart readers didn't mention the process of Xiao Xu playing tricks with others, I would really think that they were just having friendly exchanges😭😭

It looks good, but who is the CP of the protagonist?

I generally feel good about the whole article. It can be seen that the author's writing is good and the rhyme is rich, but the connection between the scenes is a bit too convoluted. This can reflect the overlap and allow the brain to actively review the scenes, making it easier to use the brain to better experience this article.

Too flat and a bit hard to read. But there's nothing shocking about it. Those who are impatient may not be able to read it. It just looks a little tiring

I really like it, but there are too few, but I can't bear to keep it [crying]

When did you lose your horse? This is not enough. How can I live without your updates? [Cry][Cry][Cry][Already planted][Already planted][Ask for explosive update][Ask for explosive update][Ask for explosive update][Ask for explosive update]

The writing is so awesome, it feels like watching a wit show, everyone follows the plot with a shrewd brain. The protagonist has a very charming personality and has been working as a psychological committee member to help others grow. It is easy to fall in love with such a person. According to the current plot, the Adventists are the final villains. I am very much looking forward to the head-on confrontation plot.