Luffy: The Demon-Subduing Overlord of the Seas, the God of Water Margin!

The writing is good. From the perspective of the characters, the characters are well integrated with Three Kingdoms memes or other memes. It doesn't feel like the characters are just other people who share the character's name. It doesn't feel like some characters are just taking up the character's hanging thread. The plot follows the original work. The author has a good grasp of the flavor of Water Margin. With the charm of the characters, it promotes the desire to read even though everyone knows the plot.

The writing is quite interesting [Thinking] But if you want to see a major change in the plot, don't think about it. This is just a change in Luffy's personality, and he learned martial arts in Water Margin. He is mentally mature and flexible than the original comic, and his fighting skills should not be lacking. The current shortcomings are physical fitness, domineering, and fruit ability development, which should be at least second or third level. Also, Luffy's learning ability seems to be higher in this book than in the original.

It's well written, I feel it's better than the book Water Margin Naruto Naruto's speech was too unnatural. The story itself was good, but the writing was a bit poor. This is much better, the words are naturally not artificial, and the killer will show no mercy. Especially when Usopp and Nami were held hostage, I really liked it👍🏻It didn't look like a mother-in-law and a mother-in-law directly killing each other. The attitude of "I will let him pay for it if you die" is particularly to my liking, and it is also in line with the character of Water Margin. The only reason for four stars is that there are too few authors and it would be better to update it more.

It's just that the strength hasn't changed much, it's only slightly stronger than the original, a little boring, but the writing is good.

In the Water Margin style, the speaking style is stiff at the beginning. It is considered as another perspective to review the plot of One Piece for the first time while deepening Luffy's time travel character. As the time goes on, the author's writing style gradually improves and improves, leaving only simple spoken dialogue. It becomes more comfortable to watch. The plot becomes more interesting and fresh. Luffy does things neatly and neatly without being sloppy. It is very comfortable to watch. The same plot opens up different branch adventures. , The pace is tight and the plot is not messy. I personally think that the best part is that each character is written to enrich their personal habits and personality. Especially Usopp, a small inventor in the early stage and other characteristics of lying and bluffing, are not just a coward. There are also events where other crew members unite and trust each other and have personal shortcomings. This adds a lot of details that are missing in One Piece. Starting to develop new plot lines on my own is very interesting. Encourage and support 🤟

The writing style of Water Margin is very interesting, and even more rare is the Pirates fanfic. The Naruto fanfic I read before was also good, but I am not a Naruto fan, and the plot is always a bit confusing. This one is just right for me.

It's very good. I don't understand how those people who commented that it is no different from the original are reading the book. Are they reading the book and only reading the main plot? Then why not read the story and condense it into one episode. I can write it now. Luffy grew up and joined the pirate navy or the revolutionary army and overthrew the world government. It is gratifying. Do you like to read it? Just read the main plot and not the middle process. What is the difference between reading Rick Morty and not reading the adventure? [What] It's awesome, the characters are really vivid, and they all have traditional Chinese virtues [smile], and the changes in the plot look very comfortable, removing the misunderstandings that made people feel stomachache in the original work, and adding a lot of interesting plots, it's awesome, this is what I love to watch [staring]

Hero! What a pair of smiling tigers, two black dogfish! My dear lords, if I hear Shinzo's nonsense again, I will pierce my ears to become deafened. But being deaf is a sign of an emperor. You want to congratulate me on being able to proclaim myself emperor. This should be a big deal. But please don't rush to congratulate me. I am still a kind person and remind you all to consider what you will eat when I am gone, so it is best for me to proclaim myself emperor and you to proclaim yourself emperor too. On the cool summer night, everyone drank and sang together. During Guan Yu's song, everyone continued to play music and dance. No matter how reckless you are, I will not retire and return home. [Praise]

Yes, I like the character of Luffy after Water Margin very much. At least he is much better than the original hot-blooded idiot. He kills when he wants, doesn't talk nonsense, and has brains. I haven't read the heroine's words yet, but the update is a bit slow. The author updates three chapters a day. [Wronged]

It's nice to look at, especially Luffy's speaking pattern.