Luffy: Pirates Defeated the Demon Lord, Water Margin Tai Sui God!

The writing is good. From the perspective of the characters, the characters are well integrated with Three Kingdoms memes or other memes. It doesn't feel like the characters are just other people who share the character's name. It doesn't feel like some characters are just taking up the character's hanging thread. The plot follows the original work. The author has a good grasp of the flavor of Water Margin. With the charm of the characters, it promotes the desire to read even though everyone knows the plot.

It's well written, I feel it's better than the book Water Margin Naruto Naruto's speech was too unnatural. The story itself was good, but the writing was a bit poor. This is much better, the words are naturally not artificial, and the killer will show no mercy. Especially when Usopp and Nami were held hostage, I really liked it👍🏻It didn't look like a mother-in-law and a mother-in-law directly killing each other. The attitude of "I will let him pay for it if you die" is particularly to my liking, and it is also in line with the character of Water Margin. The only reason for four stars is that there are too few authors and it would be better to update it more.

It's just that the strength hasn't changed much, it's only slightly stronger than the original, a little boring, but the writing is good.

The writing is quite interesting [Thinking] But if you want to see a major change in the plot, don't think about it. This is just a change in Luffy's personality, and he learned martial arts in Water Margin. He is mentally mature and flexible than the original comic, and his fighting skills should not be lacking. The current shortcomings are physical fitness, domineering, and fruit ability development, which should be at least second or third level. Also, Luffy's learning ability seems to be higher in this book than in the original.

It's very good. I don't understand how those people who commented that it is no different from the original are reading the book. Are they reading the book and only reading the main plot? Then why not read the story and condense it into one episode. I can write it now. Luffy grew up and joined the pirate navy or the revolutionary army and overthrew the world government. It is gratifying. Do you like to read it? Just read the main plot and not the middle process. What is the difference between reading Rick Morty and not reading the adventure? [What] It's awesome, the characters are really vivid, and they all have traditional Chinese virtues [smile], and the changes in the plot look very comfortable, removing the misunderstandings that made people feel stomachache in the original work, and adding a lot of interesting plots, it's awesome, this is what I love to watch [staring]

It's nice to look at, especially Luffy's speaking pattern.

Yes, I like the character of Luffy after Water Margin very much. At least he is much better than the original hot-blooded idiot. He kills when he wants, doesn't talk nonsense, and has brains. I haven't read the heroine's words yet, but the update is a bit slow. The author updates three chapters a day. [Wronged]

The writing style of Water Margin is very interesting, and even more rare is the Pirates fanfic. The Naruto fanfic I read before was also good, but I am not a Naruto fan, and the plot is always a bit confusing. This one is just right for me.

It's very beautiful. The only drawback is that there are too few. If the author is faster, I will click to remind you every day. If it is more unpleasant, I will support the book. Author, you don't want to be supported by the book, right? [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's interesting to watch, but I can't tell the AI ​​content. It's worth watching.

Can you believe that the characters are more vivid than the original?

The writing is good, the characters are vivid, the bandits (Water Margin) and pirates are well integrated, and everyone's character is right.

It's not bad, it's really good, it's really good. It should be an imitation of the Harry Potter book over there. The taste is just as good as that one.

It looks great. The combination of Luffy and Liang Shan is very creative. I hope some new plots can be written in the future, and Armed Color Haki and Insight Color Haki can be released earlier.

It's better looking than Naruto of the Water Margin. It's the author's reason why he can't change the character and bond of the original character while maintaining Luffy's Kettle character.

Well written, weird yet reasonable

Very interesting, come on

You guy, perfect score!

Very beautiful, highly recommended! ! ! ! !

Can be more interesting

I definitely can't get it, but I can give it 8 points. I can even give it 9 points just for the plot alone.

The author is really a master at writing this kind of book. It feels like when I read Harry Potter.

It looks good. Is Luffy more influenced by Wu Song from Tianshang Star or Lu Zhishen from Tianguxing?

Water Margin and Pirates are pretty good [like]

The classical Chinese version of Water Margin, One Piece, is super good and really interesting.

The writing style is good, there are no loopholes in the plot logic, and the handling of the characters is also very good. It maintains the personality of the original characters, which is very good

I thought he was rubbish, but turned out to be a great master, awesome

It would feel much better if the protagonist's strength was greatly strengthened, but I don't feel that he is too strong. I feel like the author wrote it very well. The title of the book "Luffy, Return of the Water Margin, Fight Through the World of Pirates" is not contrasting enough. In the original book, Luffy kept doing sit-ups and was already fighting his way through the world. The contrast between Luffy's improved IQ and EQ and the original version could be emphasized to attract readers' interest in reading. "Luffy: The Water Margin has been around for eighteen years, and my strategies have crushed the pirate world" "Luffy: I have returned from the Water Margin and my strategies are unparalleled". Or the author could ask AI to come up with a better title (I almost missed this book because of the title at first). If you really can't persevere, it doesn't matter - if you try hard, you will be overwhelming, but if the times are not good, you will never fade away. Nothing can be done if the glory is not gone! In short, the author gives you a lot of support [love]

It's super interesting, but the updates are a bit slow and it's uncomfortable to follow.

The combination of Water Margin and Japanese passion, the characters are vivid and colorful, and it will be a masterpiece as long as it continues to be updated. I want to ask the author, will Nami be the heroine? [Cool]