[Hogwarts, male protagonist Harry Potter, single world, no female protagonist, not following the original line, Hufflepuff, wizards' combat power is strengthened]
Voldemort, Death Eater, pure-blood noble, vested interest who desires dictatorship.
Dumbledore, Order of the Phoenix, defender of the fragile order in the wizarding world.
Muggles, goblins, rebels who are unwilling to be discriminated against and enslaved.
The seemingly peaceful wizarding society has surging undercurrents. Harry Potter opened his kaleidoscope and returned from the world of Naruto, using his pupil to control all negative emotions.
When the subconscious sea of a single human being is integrated into the spiritual abyss covering all living creatures, the supreme will will eventually set off the most terrifying tsunami.
Ps: The introduction is weak, please move to the main text.
Reader comments
It's very tiring to read. If you like Dumbledore, you can buy this book. The protagonist is called to the office by Dumbledore all day long to give lectures on "what is justice". Dumbledore almost slaps "You will pursue power again" on Harry's forehead, but Harry actually listened to it and seriously reflected on it. This should have been called "Dumbledore and His Boy 1, 2, 3".
The writing is very good, the assignments are well-written, and the character of each Harry Potter character is well grasped, especially Harry's character and life. It is not like some fan fiction that can only follow the original plot because of the author's limited storytelling ability. I have read the original work 4 or 5 times. Rather than completely repeating the original plot, I prefer to see the direction of the story that can bring changes to the world of the original work.
So far, the combination of Harry Potter and Naruto content has been excellent.
Secondly, in terms of plot, it also surpasses many fan works. It does not follow the original plot, but creates its own plot based on the cool selling points.
It looks good, the story is very good, although the subject matter is a little bit small, but only a little bit. According to your situation, if there is no procrastination later, if you keep it like this, no procrastination, no watering down, and sometimes think about the story carefully, your book or your decimal can definitely reach about 8 points. Anyway, my guess of yours is about 8.9. But you don't need to be discouraged. After all, you have just started 8.9 10. My upper limit for you is that you are fully capable of becoming a 9. Although I think now, you may only have 8.5 Or 8.2.
It's creative, fast-paced, and fun. But one point is deducted because it feels like it conflicts with the original world view. In the original world view, using black magic will pollute the soul. The more you use black magic, the more serious the pollution will be. Actively murdering people will cause the soul to split.
I haven't finished reading it, but at least the protagonist's attitude towards Severus after knowing the truth is pretty good. [Learned] But it's very difficult to write HP like this. I hope I can finish it. It feels a bit difficult, and I can't see the future of this book. [Think]
Very good. The protagonist has his own opinions and is not a machine to promote the plot. He has made a second creation based on the content of the original work. The plot is also reasonable. It is considered to be of high quality among fan fictions. I hope the author will continue to maintain it.
It's quite a novel idea. It's the first time I've seen HP novels add Naruto's abilities. The plot is okay, and I don't feel like I can't go on talking about it. If there aren't any big mistakes later on, this book should be pretty good.
I like this kind of protagonist who thinks about power
I don't know how to better support this book. I feel like it's a pity that the author abandoned it.
Gold mining in Xiangli is not only gold but also silver. It's not easy.
Yes, if it is written normally with this quality, it will be a good fanfic.
This is a good fanfic. It doesn't have as many cliche and cliche formulas as the same type of fanfics. The main character does things neatly and quickly, and annoying and annoying characters are removed quickly. It's very satisfying.
Very nice, please continue to update. Thank you [laughs]
It looks good, please comment and support it
Excellent, well put together.
This one looks better
Very good 👍 good good good good
Is it broken? It's actually quite well written, but it's a pity
It's okay, at least it's not procrastinating, but a lot of things are not explained clearly. But based on the current progress, will it be over in less than 200 chapters...
It's well written, I didn't see any bad points
Well written
The author put his heart into it 👍
It's very well written. Please keep on finishing it.
Overall it's pretty good, just update it soon, it's been 8 days.
Okay, it's a mid-to-high quality HP fanfic.
Looks good, please post more soon, thank you
The writing is okay. I have the strength to not wrong myself. I would like to give it a good review.
The writing is very good, Harry with brains is just beautiful.
Chapter 30 was so enjoyable for me to read, I can skip it and read it before deciding whether to pursue this book or not.
It's a medium-to-high quality hp and it's a good fan fiction that combines the situation of Naruto. It will be really good to keep this level in the future.
Finally we have a normal protagonist, it's so fun to watch
It's very tiring to read. If you like Dumbledore, you can buy this book. The protagonist is called to the office by Dumbledore all day long to give lectures on "what is justice". Dumbledore almost slaps "You will pursue power again" on Harry's forehead, but Harry actually listened to it and seriously reflected on it. This should have been called "Dumbledore and His Boy 1, 2, 3".
The writing is very good, the assignments are well-written, and the character of each Harry Potter character is well grasped, especially Harry's character and life. It is not like some fan fiction that can only follow the original plot because of the author's limited storytelling ability. I have read the original work 4 or 5 times. Rather than completely repeating the original plot, I prefer to see the direction of the story that can bring changes to the world of the original work.
So far, the combination of Harry Potter and Naruto content has been excellent. Secondly, in terms of plot, it also surpasses many fan works. It does not follow the original plot, but creates its own plot based on the cool selling points.
It looks good, the story is very good, although the subject matter is a little bit small, but only a little bit. According to your situation, if there is no procrastination later, if you keep it like this, no procrastination, no watering down, and sometimes think about the story carefully, your book or your decimal can definitely reach about 8 points. Anyway, my guess of yours is about 8.9. But you don't need to be discouraged. After all, you have just started 8.9 10. My upper limit for you is that you are fully capable of becoming a 9. Although I think now, you may only have 8.5 Or 8.2.
It's creative, fast-paced, and fun. But one point is deducted because it feels like it conflicts with the original world view. In the original world view, using black magic will pollute the soul. The more you use black magic, the more serious the pollution will be. Actively murdering people will cause the soul to split.
I haven't finished reading it, but at least the protagonist's attitude towards Severus after knowing the truth is pretty good. [Learned] But it's very difficult to write HP like this. I hope I can finish it. It feels a bit difficult, and I can't see the future of this book. [Think]
Very good. The protagonist has his own opinions and is not a machine to promote the plot. He has made a second creation based on the content of the original work. The plot is also reasonable. It is considered to be of high quality among fan fictions. I hope the author will continue to maintain it.
It's quite a novel idea. It's the first time I've seen HP novels add Naruto's abilities. The plot is okay, and I don't feel like I can't go on talking about it. If there aren't any big mistakes later on, this book should be pretty good.
I like this kind of protagonist who thinks about power I don't know how to better support this book. I feel like it's a pity that the author abandoned it.
Gold mining in Xiangli is not only gold but also silver. It's not easy.
Yes, if it is written normally with this quality, it will be a good fanfic.
This is a good fanfic. It doesn't have as many cliche and cliche formulas as the same type of fanfics. The main character does things neatly and quickly, and annoying and annoying characters are removed quickly. It's very satisfying.
Very nice, please continue to update. Thank you [laughs]
It looks good, please comment and support it
Excellent, well put together.
This one looks better
Very good 👍 good good good good
Is it broken? It's actually quite well written, but it's a pity
It's okay, at least it's not procrastinating, but a lot of things are not explained clearly. But based on the current progress, will it be over in less than 200 chapters...
It's well written, I didn't see any bad points
Well written The author put his heart into it 👍
It's very well written. Please keep on finishing it.
Overall it's pretty good, just update it soon, it's been 8 days.
Okay, it's a mid-to-high quality HP fanfic.
Looks good, please post more soon, thank you
The writing is okay. I have the strength to not wrong myself. I would like to give it a good review.
The writing is very good, Harry with brains is just beautiful. Chapter 30 was so enjoyable for me to read, I can skip it and read it before deciding whether to pursue this book or not.
It's a medium-to-high quality hp and it's a good fan fiction that combines the situation of Naruto. It will be really good to keep this level in the future.
Finally we have a normal protagonist, it's so fun to watch
Pretty good, Harry kills decisively.