The Immortal Cultivation Clan That Began by Stealing Dao Companions!

This paragraph is really interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. Hundreds of people gathered together in the battle, but Xue Baochai was indeed too strong. If Nuoshou hadn't used an outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six-fold strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain: "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes are as immersive as they are, and the character descriptions are spot-on, making it easy to watch.

Objective evaluation: It's indeed pretty good. You can compare it with Tomato's other immortality writings, and the quality is much higher. It mainly lies in the characterization of the characters and the layout of the story. You have to look carefully at the many places in it that are very detailed. Unlike other novels about cultivating immortals that rush to write about those realms, his descriptions of realms are very detailed and reasonable, and some of the laws of the world of cultivating immortals are also described very deeply. But after writing it, I guess the author's own mentality changed a little. Maybe because there were too many negative reviews, the author started to mention the protagonist's strength. I obviously felt impetuous after reading the book. I have read the entire book, including the latest one, and the latter part is obviously not as good as the first one.

So far, it seems to be okay. The plot is quite coherent and the characters are well created. It clearly describes the attitude of the protagonist as an immortal towards mortals, as well as the role of the furnace and his attitude towards the furnace. We are now at Chapter 43, and it also describes the pride of mortals who soar into the sky. I will give it four stars for now. I will review it later if I change it.

It's very interesting. It's been a long time since I read a novel about cultivating immortals. It's rare to find a book that can make me immersed in it. This book is full of highlights. It's interesting, the author is an experienced driver, he drives fast and steadily, and the character of the protagonist is also quite unique.

Four stars, not bad. I just don't have any feelings for Taoist companions and children. I don't mind him being cold-blooded, but there's nothing else poisonous about him.

It looks good, although it is a bit overwhelming, but it is acceptable. I saw someone in the comments saying that the protagonist should not rob, and I also laughed. With this world view, how can he become stronger without robbing? If he does not become strong, he has been a cow horse for 20 years, and he is still at the fifth level of Qi training. Why should you find it among mortals? The mortal territory has an owner. What else do you want to do with a fifth-level Qi training? Excellent female cultivators can't look down on the male protagonist before he cheats, so grabbing is the only way, [blowing kiss]

This book is different from what I imagined. I thought the protagonist would fall in love with a girl and bring her back to the island and let them have children to develop a family. I don't know what I was thinking. I always felt that the protagonist was at a disadvantage. It was his sons after all, and they got such talented children for nothing. But if I think about it carefully, he was quite happy to do so. Haha, it can be considered mutual use. This book is quite interesting. It really puts your own interests first, not like a holy lady. Sometimes I really admire the things the protagonist does [Like] I'm looking forward to the scene where when the children grow up, they all know who their father is, and they get together [laughing evilly] It will be very interesting. The most awesome thing is that this world of cultivating immortals is really too real and realistic, and it is worthy of the word "cultivating immortals".

Let's talk about the conclusion first: The author's writing skills are excellent in Tomato, and the plot development is reasonable, but the book tends to be dark, and the protagonist has a cold personality, or it's not an exaggeration to say he was born, so read with caution. The protagonist's golden finger is that he can copy his offspring's talent. In the article, he basically treats his offspring as a drawing card and doesn't pay much attention to it. He is considered a father in vain. (Of course, this is actually barely understandable. After all, the protagonist is just an ant and a casual cultivator, and he really doesn't have much ability to raise heirs) There was one main thing that made me feel a bit uncomfortable. The Wen sisters were probably just a minor nuisance to the protagonist at that time and could just be taken away. However, the pregnant Wen sister was caught and tortured. It does feel too cold-blooded or too cold-blooded. But it is not easy for the author to create, so I still give him a five-star praise.

The subject matter is novel and the world design is more realistic. But there are several poisonous points: 1. You can be calculating, selfish, and despicable. From the beginning, it's okay to treat the offspring as a power bank or a tool for reincarnation. But because of a meaningless shot, his innocent son was born without a mother, but on the other hand, since he enjoyed the glory he brought, he had to bear the corresponding risks. The problem is that Wen Zhiwei has not enjoyed the glory you brought (she was kidnapped by you), and the risk is also brought by a meaningless shot. It is just as uncomfortable as Cao Cao's shot that killed the three sages. 2. There is also the plot about the spiritual root and the golden elixir. The spiritual root is the same as installing GPS positioning. Every time someone with qualifications above A is born, everyone knows that another pill has been ordered, and things can develop in predictable ways. I think the methods of the Golden Elixir Immortal can be slightly restricted, such as distance restrictions or close physical examination. The relationship between the two is like a predator and a prey. The former is too excessive. The intensity should be balanced to increase some game space and highlight the dramatic tension.

The writing of this book is delicate and smooth, the story rhythm is relaxed and moderate, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the plot is progressive and immersive. It has a long aftertaste after reading it. It is a good work worth calming down and reading carefully.