Starting from the Eight-Pole Star, the Twelve Talismans Are Close to You

Star Travels is also a pretty big worldview. I haven't seen McDonald's final journey to the Rainbow Sea, nor have I eaten the fine chaff of Star Travels. I'm sentimental, and the writing is okay. I also control the details of the protagonist. I can really see that everyone in the comment area is reacting to the shortcomings of the author's characters. But no one is perfect. There is nothing to say. I urge you to update. (As an aside, if the author has the ability, he will go to Qidian to open a book. If you can eat tomatoes and write Star Travels and read it, you will be satisfied. My kid, have any ideas? Give the author a reward of thousands of dollars. It is not enough for you to say that the author will change it.)

The protagonist has now experienced eight planets. I really admire the kid who replaced Milon's name. He walked through it all by himself without any external force. What a fool.

It was the first time I saw Star Travels on Tomato. The writing is also very good, and the world view is great. Now there are Seer and One Piece (there are some signs of it coming out)

The plot is okay, but the pressure is too strong. Xiaoyu can travel through time and space at faster than light speed by using the rabbit charm.

The plot is also okay, it can be considered semi-invincible. And the theme of Star Travels is rare, come on

People who believe in miracles are as great as the miracles themselves On July 31, Star Travels, the original screenwriter and director Bei Shu, officially announced that it will be released in Chongqing. I can only say that good things will always happen when people are alive. After waiting for 15 years, I finally waited. I reviewed the original Star Travels again in the past two days at Station B. I couldn't wait any longer. I went to Tomato to find Star Travels fanfics to kill time. I found that this book is okay. Although the protagonist seems a bit dull in front of me, it may be because the original Star Travels has been too long and I can't remember many details clearly, which is reasonable. I hope the author can work hard and write well, and don't leave it unfinished like the first season of Star Travels, so I'll give it a break.

It's very, very good-looking, with a male protagonist and a female protagonist. The point is here, the point is here. The male protagonist is as strong as the female protagonist hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha

My sister-in-law's quality is very good. The merchant came to install it in person. The service is really great. It is comfortable to use and well-dressed. It melts in the mouth and is not irritating when washed. Children especially like to eat it and the elderly can also use it. It is very loose and does not pill at all. It is also very clean when washed. We all like to eat it. The shape is very good, the size is standard, it does not stick to the cup and lasts a long time. The hair is very smooth after washing and is not oily. It is stress-free for sensitive skin. The grip is comfortable and does not hurt the gums. I will put a few drops every time I cook. The quality is very good and consistent with the seller's description. The quality of the underwear is very good. The merchant came to install it personally. The service is really good. It is comfortable to use and well-dressed. It melts in the mouth and is not irritating when washing. Children especially like to eat it. Elderly people also use it. Very good, consistent with the description of the seller. The quality of the underwear is very good. It is really easy to use. It is comfortable to use and wears well. It melts in the mouth and does not stick to the pan when washing. Children especially like to eat it. The elderly also use it. It is not lint at all. It is very clean. Children like to eat it. The fit is very good and the size is standard.

Star Travels, I'll give it five stars first.

The pressure is very serious, but I am encouraged by the Star Travels I wrote.

A very good Star Travels fanfic, I hope to continue to make more

There are not many Star Travels written, and most of them are unfinished or discontinued. The author is very good at finishing it. It is indeed very difficult to write Star Travels because the plot is indeed very serious, so the author [Like]

Update quickly, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this!

Alas, such a good Chinese comic has been discontinued. After so many years, it is still a pity to think about it😭

Very good, there is no loss of consciousness at present. The biggest drawback at the beginning was that I didn't draw any prizes in three years. Later, the system bugs were basically fixed, and I was considered to be semi-invincible all the way.

The author will update quickly and send you some [Please update] [Please update] Master Ma is awesome, he deserves to be the Patriarch of Bajitian.

It's been a while since I saw Star Travels, come on👏

Looking at it now, overall it looks good. After all, the theme of "Star Travels" itself has a little plot and the subsequent theatrical version. It is really good to be able to fit it in.

Dog - Seal of Immortality: Gives others the power of immortality. (Quantity: 1) (Used targets: Bai Xue, Dia, Lingling) Lingling itself is a robot created by the protagonist, why do you still use this?

It's really ok, it's semi-invincible, mainly because this is the first Star Travels fanfic I've read or the only one I've seen. I'd like to give you some support. Of course, if you want to say there are some bad points, there are also some. For example, the early stage is almost the same. It seems to be more than 20 chapters. It's obviously only the second planet of the eighth-level star, and then it jumps directly. Why jump? , How did you finish writing the plot of the eighth-level star? This one is still the second planet, and the next one is three years later.

It's okay, quite novel.

Come on, there are few Star Travels fans who hope to finish it

It can be very good, but there are very few writers on this subject.

The plot is coherent and enjoyable to watch

Full marks for sentiment, but the writing and details need polishing. I'll give it four stars first, I'll make it up later depending on the situation. Five stars for you, please come on, the author, Star Travels is so rare.

The writing is very good. I loved reading Star Travels when I was a kid.

Come on, I think the writing is pretty good so far.

It's pretty good, just don't stop updating it

It feels like the update is a bit slow

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking