Honkai: Star Rail: Xianzhou's Emanator of Abundance, Incarnation of Nihility

The problem with this book is not the writing style, but the author's structure. It's really bad. The author has great ideas, but when writing his own story, the first purpose is to make it easy for readers to understand what you are expressing. The story is good, but it's unnecessary if everyone can't stand it. I hope the author can improve and be more coherent in the connection of plots. When focusing on expressing his own emotional core, he should also pay attention to the readers' feelings and not let readers accept emotional outbursts all the time. At this point, the Lord of Mysteries does a great job. Only in this way can readers feel the charm of this story. This is the first time I have posted such a long comment, because the author's story really moved me.

I don't understand what the author is writing about, the protagonist's life story? In the story of Luofu in Cangcheng? The relationship with Jingliu? Will you cooperate with China? Especially the life experience of the protagonist. When describing the story of Bengtie, you inserted a tribe, which was never mentioned from the beginning, and also had a single surname. Do readers like your story? Adding this tribe to the main chapter will greatly reduce the coherence of the main chapter and the perception. Regarding the relationship with Kage-ryu, the protagonist's character is a semi-cheerful and crazy character on the surface according to the author's setting. He is not so much a lonely little boy who has lost his family. He wants it but doesn't want it. He wants to sever ties with Kage-ryu. As the Envoy of the Order of Abundance, he has a hundred ways to hang on to Kage-ryu. This makes me feel very uncomfortable. This is just my personal opinion. Especially the identity of the protagonist. I know what the author wants to write about the protagonist's life experience. You are not Sanjiu, you are not Tutou, and you are not Jiangnan. The writing is not enough. Writing it will only affect the perception. It is only a personal opinion. Overall it's still very good, and I gave the author five stars, but this book no longer makes me want to read it. Although the author does not lack me as a reader, I am just expressing my opinion. Well, I wish the author great success and better and better 👍👍

Hmm... After reading for so long, only about 50 chapters, let me tell you the most direct feeling. Annoyance is the same as the protagonist's feeling. I can't tell if others have this feeling when reading it. I listen to the book. When I listened to the story, I listened to the protagonist's complaints, and I also became annoyed. Why are you annoyed? What is the reason for being annoyed? Why don't you just sleep like the person who is sleeping without form, and either live a valuable life, or live a boring life? Living itself can prove your value. The universe will not add you for no reason. You will think for yourself and ask who you are? Why don't you ask someone else if you don't understand something? You are already in the game, how can you see clearly the fog in the game? Self-righteous and arrogant people have become bound to others, and they have to break up like this later. They deceive themselves and others, and they are just deceiving themselves when they say they will slowly fade away. If they can be disconnected in this way, the development will be gone in a few hundred years. Hmm... The above is some of my analysis of this character (maybe?). Anyway, it should be a pretty good story. Keep reading. Come on, author.

The protagonist can have a full sense of humanity and machine

How honorable and honorable, the author is different

The writing is quite good, with a faint sense of madness, which is quite touching for readers.

It feels okay, mainly because it is different from others

Indescribable 🙂 No swordsmanship, no relationship development, just like a good person who doesn't ask for anything in return, so I'll deduct one star. There are also few fighting scenes. I don't know what the author is writing about. The daily emotions are not developed and the protagonist's fighting ability is not written. Just wipe someone's butt without leaving a name I feel like the author doesn't have the strength to write those things, which makes this novel very uncomfortable to watch. There are inexplicable changes. The first tens of thousands of words are about daily life and then the whole story is cut off. There is no balanced transformation. From the perspective of the heroine, it is not clear why he left, and from the reader's perspective, the protagonist's reluctance is not clearly written. I can even say that I don't feel the protagonist's feelings for the heroine at all now. I think the author should write about his feelings for the heroine and then have to leave, instead of the reader seeing a question mark on his face when he leaves. Obviously, he wrote tens of thousands of words very well in the early stage, and when it came time to jump to the timeline, he also jumped to the heroine.

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