Bengtie: the Envoy of the Immortal Boat's Fertility, the Incarnation of Nothingness

I don't understand what the author is writing about, the protagonist's life story? In the story of Luofu in Cangcheng? The relationship with Jingliu? Will you cooperate with China? Especially the life experience of the protagonist. When describing the story of Bengtie, you inserted a tribe, which was never mentioned from the beginning, and also had a single surname. Do readers like your story? Adding this tribe to the main chapter will greatly reduce the coherence of the main chapter and the perception. Regarding the relationship with Kage-ryu, the protagonist's character is a semi-cheerful and crazy character on the surface according to the author's setting. He is not so much a lonely little boy who has lost his family. He wants it but doesn't want it. He wants to sever ties with Kage-ryu. As the Envoy of the Order of Abundance, he has a hundred ways to hang on to Kage-ryu. This makes me feel very uncomfortable. This is just my personal opinion. Especially the identity of the protagonist. I know what the author wants to write about the protagonist's life experience. You are not Sanjiu, you are not Tutou, and you are not Jiangnan. The writing is not enough. Writing it will only affect the perception. It is only a personal opinion. Overall it's still very good, and I gave the author five stars, but this book no longer makes me want to read it. Although the author does not lack me as a reader, I am just expressing my opinion. Well, I wish the author great success and better and better [Like][Like]

The protagonist can have a full sense of humanity and machine

How honorable and honorable, the author is different

The writing is quite good, with a faint sense of madness, which is quite touching for readers.

It's good, be sure to read it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It feels okay, mainly because it is different from others

Indescribable [Smile] No swordsmanship, no relationship development, just like a good person who doesn't ask for anything in return, so I'll deduct one star. There are also few fighting scenes. I don't know what the author is writing about. The daily emotions are not developed and the protagonist's fighting ability is not written. Just wipe someone's butt without leaving a name I feel like the author doesn't have the strength to write those things, which makes this novel very uncomfortable to watch. There are inexplicable changes. The first tens of thousands of words are about daily life and then the whole story is cut off. There is no balanced transformation. From the perspective of the heroine, it is not clear why he left, and from the reader's perspective, the protagonist's reluctance is not clearly written. I can even say that I don't feel the protagonist's feelings for the heroine at all now. I think the author should write about his feelings for the heroine and then have to leave, instead of the reader seeing a question mark on his face when he leaves. Obviously, he wrote tens of thousands of words very well in the early stage, and when it came time to jump to the timeline, he also jumped to the heroine.

It's very nice. I really like this faint sense of madness. Can you update ten chapters in one day? Otherwise it won't be enough [crying]

It's really good [Adoration], the plot is okay, please give me more chapters

The protagonist's feelings, or personality, are somewhat uncertain, but this is also one of the major features of this book.

After skipping 30 chapters, it's finally confirmed! [Like] 78 reunion

I think the author has a family connection, so I must give it five stars. It's really good-looking, so I must give it two five-stars! ! ! Ghana~~~

Although the previous writing is quite messy, my daily writing is good.

Love to watch and watch more

It's interesting that the needle doesn't prick

Beautiful, very interesting, recommended