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It's pretty good. I feel like the author has referenced the character design in Han Qiu's book. Master and Bai Rou are CS, and the world view seems a bit problematic. Why the two monks attacked the protagonist is not explained clearly. The system presence is also a bit low. When improving the appearance, it is best to add the panels quickly instead of starting to mention them in the next few pictures, but it is still pretty good, so go for it and don't leave it unfinished.

What a great book! ! ! It's so beautiful. There are many details in it, such as male arms corresponding to thighs, and your mother changed to your father. It's so interesting. But there are places in the article that obviously rely on traditional female novels, such as stealing elixirs, silly and sweet, etc., And the characters are too stereotyped and could be enriched. Also, I think we can add settings like walking through books, or add character psychology, funny settings, and make the male protagonist's character stronger, so that it's in line with the logic of male videos.

Pure duck soup, all relying on the protagonist's psychological activities to add some fun

Finally there is a heroine who can watch it again. Come on, it's so good-looking.

Anyway, it suits my taste very well. Everyone knelt down under Qing'er's clothes. I can't wait to see Ning Chun go to the top. I love Shura Field [sending my heart]

The character description is very good

The author of Miscellaneous Fish will update soon [laughs]

Come on, come on, come on

Will Su Qing be a good boy?

It looks good, please give me praise and encouragement.

Non-non-non-non-non-non-non-non-non-very very beautiful [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Five-star support. I'm looking forward to the follow-up. I think among the books I've read, this one is better.

Good book, good book, a rare masterpiece of a female immortal cultivator, the protagonist's complaints are so interesting [laughs]

Blessed are those who like Han Qiu, he is very beautiful [Adoration]

It's beautiful, it's just like the one written by Mr. Owl [Admiration] [Shy]

Master of God and Disciple of God

Awesome, well written

NB author please write quickly

Nice looking, quite abstract

Senior Sister Ning is the ideal type O_o...

The heroine doesn't have many tomatoes, and the plot is not bad either. I'll give it 4 stars.

I love watching this kind of stuff. I'll take a nap first and then wake up and continue watching.

Very beautiful, very beautiful, every pair is very cute, and very interesting.

It's quite interesting, but why does a review book need 5 words?

It feels like an owl book

To be honest, among the many articles about female heroes that I have read, this one is quite good. I don't know why no one has read it.