I Become Xilian and Take Luffy to Conquer the Seas

When I first saw the introduction, I thought it was a cliche nanny cam article, but recently I was thinking about getting naked and tasting it first, and I discovered that I had struck gold. The protagonist San Guanzheng shows no mercy to pirates, and educates Luffy into a man who wants to become the "King of Pioneers" (after all, pirates are really not good people, most of them are villains who burn, kill, and loot). The substantial changes to the original plot make up for many regrets. The fan-original plot is a test of the author's writing skills. From the current point of view, even if the iron-collapse element is thrown away, it is still a masterpiece. With the iron-collapse element, it is even more ecstatic for me. I hope it can continue to be wonderful

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How can I put it this way? From what I have seen so far, there are no surprises. The characters are in line with the character design and plot logic. I also respect the original work. Whether it is the characters of Pirates or Bentie, the characters of the past are also very delicate. Hey, this thing invented is so cute. Anyway, I enjoy it. Well, in the era of big AI routine templates, there is still this kind of frequently updated writing that is as refreshing as drinking a glass of lime juice after eating fried skewers. It can save people in the literary wilderness... Boss, you must keep writing. 😭What will we eat without you?

Very good novels, which made me think about Originium Disease, Pamish Infection, Rainstorm Syndrome, Vocal Cord Infection, Collapse Syndrome, Abstraction, Money Infection, Radiation Infection, Cyberpsychosis, Fear Gas Inhalation, Homesickness, Urban Disease, Distortion, Slow Shock, Living Corpse Transformation, Witch Transformation, Madness Transformation, Honkai Disease, Demon Body, Extraordinary Person Loss of control, hypothermia, Karabacteria, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, dark ether erosion, star scar syndrome, corpse cycle, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, ghoul infection, laughter virus infection, Flood infection, anti-life equation corrosion, and warp corruption are all cured

It looks good, certified by Fufu, non-toxic and OOC-free

I have to say that this is the Pirates fanfic that I am most satisfied with. The pace is very good. Unlike other fanfics, the plot development is too slow. Most people who read the fanfic have watched One Piece. It would be really bad if the plot is still inked. It still follows the original plot, but it has been greatly changed. For example, the Straw Hats are no longer even pirates, and their goal has become the pioneer king. Many unnecessary plots have been skipped. The pace is very enjoyable. Many interactions are inserted into the plot. This is really praiseworthy. Daily interactions will not be suddenly added on the road to slow down the pace and word count.

The plot is original and the character creation is up to standard. In my opinion, it is a good work. However, the interaction between Xi Lian and Bai E or everyone can be written more to make the characters more vivid. Of course, the author will do his best and update it soon. I will do anything 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢

It's rare to experience the ecstasy of Iron Breaker + Pirate Chef!!! The story has just begun. There are no shortcomings except that it is not interesting enough. The characters seem a bit OOC. Anyway, it's not Xi Lian himself. Personally, I think the plot is okay.