Become Xi Lian and Lead the Straw Hats to Open up the Sea

When I first saw the introduction, I thought it was a cliche nanny cam article, but recently I was thinking about getting naked and tasting it first, and I discovered that I had struck gold. The protagonist San Guanzheng shows no mercy to pirates, and educates Luffy into a man who wants to become the "King of Pioneers" (after all, pirates are really not good people, most of them are villains who burn, kill, and loot). The substantial changes to the original plot make up for many regrets. The fan-original plot is a test of the author's writing skills. From the current point of view, even if the iron-collapse element is thrown away, it is still a masterpiece. With the iron-collapse element, it is even more ecstatic for me. I hope it can continue to be wonderful

Nanook ~ I have brought destruction to you ~ 🎵 Speaking of which, when I first met you, I was even a string of virtual electrical signals. For this destruction, I specially dressed up and changed into a handsome new form. How about it? Isn't it very charming? Sure enough, whether it is the gentle and cheerful Bai E, the mysterious Fire Walker, or the now full-blown Kaeslana, their charm remains the same~

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How can I put it this way? From what I have seen so far, there are no surprises. The characters are in line with the character design and plot logic. I also respect the original work. Whether it is the characters of Pirates or Bentie, the characters of the past are also very delicate. Hey, this thing invented is so cute. Anyway, I enjoy it. Well, in the era of big AI routine templates, there is still this kind of frequently updated writing that is as refreshing as drinking a glass of lime juice after eating fried skewers. It can save people in the literary wilderness... Boss, you must keep writing. 😭What will we eat without you?

The plot is original and the character creation is up to standard. In my opinion, it is a good work. However, the interaction between Xi Lian and Bai E or everyone can be written more to make the characters more vivid. Of course, the author will do his best and update it soon. I will do anything [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It looks good, certified by Fufu, non-toxic and OOC-free

It's rare to experience the ecstasy of Iron Breaker + Pirate Chef! ! ! The story has just begun. There are no shortcomings except that it is not interesting enough. The characters seem a bit OOC. Anyway, it's not Xi Lian himself. Personally, I think the plot is okay.

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I have to say that this is the Pirates fanfic that I am most satisfied with. The pace is very good. Unlike other fanfics, the plot development is too slow. Most people who read the fanfic have watched One Piece. It would be really bad if the plot is still inked. It still follows the original plot, but it has been greatly changed. For example, the Straw Hats are no longer even pirates, and their goal has become the pioneer king. Many unnecessary plots have been skipped. The pace is very enjoyable. Many interactions are inserted into the plot. This is really praiseworthy. Daily interactions will not be suddenly added on the road to slow down the pace and word count.

Good review~ How come no one reads a book that is so thoughtful and beautiful and updated four times a day? ! ! Teacher, you must continue writing [please update] [almost crying] Judging from the current situation, Xi Lian and Bai E who appear are not very OOC, and the interaction between the two is also very heart-warming, especially in Chapter 21 and later. The mutual enlightenment is really like the bond between the golden descendants! Looking forward to the subsequent appearances of other golden descendants! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart] There are some questions: Will Luo save the adopted son of Warring States? (Damn it, I forgot the name) After saving Nami, how many plot points are there left to reach the main plot? (Urgent, urgent, urgent) Of course, I don't intend to provide writing guidance, but I have some expectations! The teacher can do it at his own pace🉑! There are a few final points. One is, should the teacher say in the introduction that he will summon other golden descendants? The term "gathering partners" is a bit vague. I initially thought it was referring to the plot of "Follow the Boat" to gather the Straw Hats. After I started watching it, I realized that it would be a character with a strong character (). If the introduction is more clear, it may attract more people! [Laughs] Secondly, I saw in the article that Teacher Tibao was mentioned as "having a big smile can infect other people" (I may not remember it clearly in this way). The word "careless" does not seem to be a complete compliment, and it does not seem to fit well with Teacher Tibao. Would it be more suitable for Ti'an? I'm not sure whether it's because the teacher and I have different understandings of this word or different understandings of the characters. I hope that Teacher Tibao won't be OOC if she appears in the future. I just mention it here as a reference for the teacher! [Shy][Sending Hearts] I will update after seeing that the teacher has replied to other comments with 80,000 words. Four times a day is a good tradition! Don't forget your teeth! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] Finally, I can't find the copy of Transformation Diva. . I really want to see it! [Almost crying]

Finally I saw a novel written with care, not using AI. Recently, I am almost bored to death when I read and listen to novels with AI in mind.

It's beautiful. It's the first time I've seen such a normal book. I have a good outlook on life, not dictatorial, and I don't have any ambiguity with the characters in One Piece. I have a warm feeling, and the body is warm [crying] [crying] I'm so touched. I finally read a book that's normal enough for me to read. One Piece

It looks good. The only problem is that I haven't watched One Piece, so I can't understand it. They always talk about the plot, but I don't know. What is the Grand Line? What are the Four Kings? Where does the new world refer to? American continent?

It's very good-looking and quite good. I haven't seen One Piece so I don't know the relevant characters, but I like Bentetsu. At least Bentetsu's characters are very three-dimensional and non-ooc, and the subject matter is also very novel. I didn't expect that Bentetsu could be combined with One Piece. Logically speaking, there shouldn't be so few people? Damn it! Why so few people? Why is there no traffic? Please, the author [crying][crying][crying], please don't stop updating. There are several discontinued books in my bookshelf, most of them are due to traffic [crying][crying][crying]

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Teacher, you must persevere [I'm about to cry]. I haven't watched One Piece much, and I haven't played Bengtetsu much. Reading your novel is like watching another anime. I feel like I've watched a different One Piece. I must keep following it until it's over [Sending my heart] Looks good, don't stop updating meow [sending heartfelt messages] I want to ride the wind back, but I'm afraid of Ciallo~(∠ω< )⌒★Yuyu If you want to see a thousand miles away, take a ciallo~(∠ω< )⌒☆ I ask you how much sorrow you have, cia is like a river of spring water flowing eastward llo~(∠ω< )⌒☆ People in the past have gone to the Yellow Crane, but there are still yellow cranes left here llo~(∠ω< )⌒☆ A house with dead vines and old trees, a small cia llo~(∠ω< )⌒☆Shui people's house Qingqing Zijin is still in my heart, but I am for you, cia llo~(∠ω< )⌒☆so far A hundred battles on the yellow sand, cia golden armor, can't break llo~(∠ω< )⌒☆Lan will never return it Chao cia Bai Di cia among the clouds, thousands of miles of river llo~ (∠ω< )⌒☆ Return in one day The water in Peach Blossom Pond is cia feet deep, not as deep as the barking llo~(∠ω< )⌒☆Send me love A little cold light arrived first, and then Cia appeared like llo~(∠ω< )⌒☆

Yossi, the quality is still very good, I can give it a full score, and the author's updates are not bad either, ensuring at least two chapters a day. Since I am used to watching other One Pieces, I did not directly skip the coexistence part in the early stage, but went to the Navy Headquarters, which is a bit surprising. However, what I did later really attracted attention. The current middle and early stages, that is, around Chapter 1 to Chapter 80, are all daily fragments. For those who are used to daily life, it is a very good book. As for combat, there is not too much fighting in this article, maybe because the author is not good at it, so readers who like daily texts can get into this book. Now we have entered the main line and are about to go to the Grand Route. The pace should pick up quickly.

This book is surprisingly good-looking. Don't look at the score of 8.0. I suspect it's a good intention on Rotten Tomatoes. The content is very distinctive and respects the original work. Even those who haven't read One Piece can enjoy it. The plot is in-depth, has foreshadowing, is well connected, the setting is interesting, and the characters are complete. As a romantic story that grows up with everyone, it is one of the few masterpieces that can be read at present. The only regret is that the golden descendants do not all come out at the same time, but are summoned one by one, and the author's updates are a bit slow, which is not enough.

For me, parts of the plot may have been a bit abrupt. Overall, it's pretty good compared to most other Star Iron fics I've read. The plot development is quite reasonable, and the author updates it every day. I would like to support it with five stars.

Very immersive, no OOC, good quality book, I feel that if there are too many five-stars, it will be easy for the official to think that the review is fake, and it is easy for the official to manipulate it, so I will give it four stars first and then follow up with five-stars. Needless to say, the more you taste, the more exciting it becomes😋😋😋, a must-see every day😋😋😋

I almost haven't read the latest chapter yet, but I think it's quite interesting so far. I wonder if the author has this plot [laughing] Xi Lian: Luffy, do you know that in the story of Ompharos, Mi Mi, who lived in the same village as Bai E, was not called this name at first. The name Mi Mi was later given to her by the savior from outside the world. Her original name was Xi Lian.

Sorry ♪ can't ♪ take you ♪ forward ♪ I can only regret yesterday♪ I believe in ♪ romance ♪ as in ♪ first meeting ♪ Say goodbye to each other with a smile♪ The adventure poem ♪ has not yet come to an end♪ One day ♪ our reunion will come true ♪ Prophecy ♪

It's so beautiful that I can't stop watching it. How come I'm so fat and so fat that I'm almost catching up with the rest of the army [crying], I need to support it with full-star reviews! I beg you, the teacher, to continue to update your mouth and teeth [Bird Food Masterpiece] [please give me more updates]

This is a really good book, and many of the plots are very fascinating. The most attractive thing to me is the fierce collision between the protagonist group and Blackbeard's fleet. When Blackbeard launched the Queen Anne's Revenge to defeat Luffy, my ❤️ was entangled for a moment. Fortunately, General Feixiao came to the rescue in time. A followed by W, then A, then the ruthless iron hand, the outer circle, the shaved green fairy boat, the guillotine, and the guillotine took away Blackbeard's head. No, However, it would be troublesome if he shouted "First Master, please mold me" with his remaining blood. Furthermore, Xi Lian's ingenuity replaced the bomb in the jade suitcase given to the aunt from Mermaid Island with the 8848 Xuanfeng mobile phone. The man-machine was separated by ten meters and automatically pacified the world. It directly smashed the world into Haidilao. It really made me grow ginkgo leaves from laughing. In short, this book is really amazing, don't ask me where God is, God is behind the original, the original is behind ☁️, hehe hehe, let's play together ☁️Original God, Jiao Jiao Jiao🤪

Good luck to the author! The book feels okay. I hope the author will continue until the end. The students are about to start school in the recent school season. I hope the author will not give up because the number of readers has decreased due to the start of school. Come on! Gold will always shine.

The suspected victim of the god-making plan has been seen a long time ago, but the introduction and the like are indeed not very clear. Mainly at first, I was a bit suspicious that it was a completely original plot that brought Luffy and everything to the navy. But now it has actually just passed a small part of the dungeon in advance, and then continued on the original route, but not as a pirate. It has really become a Straw Hat adventure group.

A high-quality Xi Lian fanfic, but the transformation element is dispensable. Ah... Forget it, the environment here at Tomato doesn't allow me to be picky. Little Xi Lian is super super cute! ! !

It's great! I love reading it! Although the pace is a bit slow, the daily series and happy ending plot are very attractive! I hope the author will continue to do so!

It's okay, although I feel that the storytelling is a bit awkward, but it's okay. When reading a fanfic, you just want to see what impact the addition of the protagonist will have on the original story, and the author did a good job in this regard. Other than that, the characters don't seem to be OOC at the moment.

It's so cool, even a person like me who has never read One Piece can like this novel [Please update] [Sending my heart] [Sneaky smile]