I Have Become a Candle Dragon, How Did Humans Come into Being?

There is a group of dinosaurs raised for no apparent reason, and there is an inexplicable emotional scene [face covering]. When the dinosaurs die, they either panic or clench their claws and bleed from scratching. There is no need. Also, I read the comments. I hope the protagonist can be written a little stronger. Don't always come out and overwhelm the protagonist. The author is quite active, so I'll give it a thumbs up.

After reading the whole book, there are no major flaws. The only thing that makes people uncomfortable is that the author's control of the rhythm of the book is not very good, especially the control of combat power. I always feel the power of the protagonist, and the next moment I encounter a powerful enemy and fall into a tense life-and-death battle, which gives me a feeling of obvious overwhelming combat power. The main reason is that the evolution time span is too large, and the plot of encountering powerful enemies is arranged too quickly, which makes the protagonist's evolution feel a bit useless. Also, the arrangement of the cool points after evolution is not very good. However, after the volcano evolves, the look and feel is much better, and the protagonist's level is also much higher. Much, I'm also looking forward to the protagonist's performance after this evolution. I hope the author can control the degree well and not lose it after just a few chapters to improve the protagonist's level. The protagonist can have some people that he can't beat. After all, this is an evolutionary novel, but he must also grasp it well, otherwise he will feel that the protagonist is very frustrated. The last book currently seems to be only about 3 stars. It cannot be said to be bad, but it cannot be said to be excellent, but I quite like this kind of subject matter. Let me add one star to it. I hope the author can improve it. The rating is as it is for the time being. I will decide whether to change it after seeing the subsequent plot development.

I really like this genre, and the author has done a good job in portraying the protagonist. Maybe it's my own fault, but I feel that the pace is too fast. How many chapters have it been and the protagonist has already evolved so much? Everything else is good. I just think I should pay attention to this aspect. The pace is so slow when I'm with the dinosaurs. The dinosaurs lose their rhythm and fly away after a while. I'm just giving some suggestions. I hope it can be changed in the future🧐🧐

A very interesting, very interesting and novel novel For Shen Nong, you can bear it. If you are not Shen Nong, don't eat it.

The behemoths in this book that are at the same level as or far stronger than the protagonist are super-ancient behemoths that have existed much longer than the protagonist. They existed before the age of dinosaurs, and they may have existed for hundreds of millions of years. In the planet's billions of years of evolution, it has been a long time, and it really doesn't evolve as fast as the protagonist. The protagonist evolves the fastest. It takes him tens of millions of years to surpass others by hundreds of millions or even billions of years. He is really not slow. These giant beasts appear for a reason. They didn't evolve at the same time as the protagonist. They existed a long time ago. Chapters 52 and 53 will explain why these giant beasts appear. In addition, The strength of the disguise monster is limited, and it cannot be replaced if it cannot break the defense. These have existed for hundreds of millions of years, and the disguise monster cannot be replaced. It has always been weak. As for human beings, the protagonist's attitude is that of a beast and his own believer. Not everyone can be a believer. The protagonist's identity is that of a dragon, not a human being, and he will not carelessly protect others. Because I was new to writing about exotic beasts, I thought people would like thrilling fights, so I had the protagonist cross levels to fight against enemies. Opponents at the same level are too weak. Now that I have figured it out, I am already changing it. …

It's really good-looking, but the main character gives me the feeling that every time he's about to reach his peak, he'll be hit. But aren't other creatures growing a little too fast? I feel like there are very few creatures that are older than the age of dinosaurs. You said there is a boss in the ocean, I understand. But there is also a boss in the sky, which I don't quite understand.

It's good-looking, and the setting is relatively novel. As long as the author doesn't write too many classic alien beast novels, I can keep reading. When I first read it, I thought it was a copycat of the Trilobite book. But after I finished reading it, I realized that the two books are completely different. It's just that there are too few chapters. I have to learn how to read books first, and I hope I won't be obsessed with this book. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The protagonist's cheating is no match for others [face covering]

It's like reading a useless fantasy novel

Oh yeah, oh yeah, oh yeah. Such a delicious thing can be tasted carefully. Although it has rough parts, it can be tasted. Readers commented that the author said: The author of the book progresses the plot very quickly. It is recommended to put down the butcher knife and work slowly and not to be impatient. If you are too hasty, readers will not be able to appreciate the beauty of the plot. If it is slow, readers can appreciate it and make them feel ecstatic. Summary: Currently updated to Chapter 63, I feel that the progress is too fast and the time span is a bit long. I won't change the first part, but just write slowly later. Otherwise, the author will finish it without writing much, and the results will be miserable. It was finished too quickly and there are few chapters. I suggest the author write more slowly in the later periods, writing more in the totem era and also in the era of spiritual energy recovery. As for modern times, we can mention a few dozen or twenty chapters: we will write about the time when we fell into deep sleep and then woke up. The world and the world gradually changed. Mortal animals gradually became irritable and awakened. Some humans also awakened, and then at a certain period of time, their spiritual energy revived. The author behind "Revival of Spiritual Energy" can write more. After all, this is easy to write. Just follow other articles about "Revival of Spiritual Energy". After the spiritual energy is revived, the way of heaven appears and the rules are suppressed. Those whose life levels between heaven and earth exceed the second level cannot be born, and it takes time. For example: the second level will be available after 10 years of recovery, and the third level will be available after a hundred years. But I don't know the combat power between these ranks. You wrote it yourself, so you should know [making a face], so you can decide the time for recovery, as long as it is reasonable [eating melon] The above are all suggestions, I hope they can be adopted [Salute] Overall, this book is by far one of the better ones [laughs] For those creatures with superior strength, it is recommended not to be born too early, otherwise I think they will lose their fighting power [shy] After all, it is the revival of spiritual energy, and I want to see the world compete with the heroes. After the spiritual energy is revived, the main perspective can be divided into one point and a point given to human beings. I think it's a bit interesting, hehehe😁 However, the role of the protagonist cannot be missing. I think the author can divide the period when the spiritual energy has just recovered into stages, the first initial recovery, the second enhanced recovery, and the third complete recovery (three acquired manifestations). It is recommended that the author wait longer during the recovery stage😁 I don't know exactly what happened before the spiritual energy was revived, but there should have been the end of the Dharma era when the spiritual energy was exhausted. However, after reading Chapter 63, it seems that there is no spiritual energy so far.

It's really awesome. It's exactly my type. I hope the author will update it quickly, ten times a day.

[Bookshelf Plus One] Great! I just read this book today, and I personally feel that the author's writing style is very delicate. It can be seen that the author has been deliberately suppressing the protagonist's combat power in the early stage, allowing the protagonist to cross levels to fight against the enemy. He wanted to portray more combat excitement, but it was not so contagious. In the early stage, it can be said that he was frustrated all the time, and some people were persuaded to give up. However, after writing about the emergence of the human race, the protagonist's combat power increased sharply, and it began to feel like an invincible and exciting novel. Come on, author! [Please update] The protagonist's emotions are still very rich, he is affectionate and righteous, and he also has a certain degree of divinity. The most important thing is that there are no beauties, beautiful snakes, or beautiful dragons randomly involved. In terms of overall design, I personally think that every evolution of the protagonist will not be so abrupt. The system that does not mark the required energy also has a lot of room for error. The rough division of life levels is also in line with the style of the myth. "Aura" is actually the high-level energy radiated by giant beasts. This setting is quite reasonable. But if you follow this setting, if the life level reaches a certain height, will the energy radiated become "fairy energy"? [What] I'm really curious about this [laughs]

The setting is very novel, but the specific content just offsets this. There is nothing wrong with it, but I can't read it.

The previous solo adventure is well written, but it depends on whether the development of forces can be controlled later. The only problem is how dare you update the new book twice a day, it is not enough to read. The author tries hard to update it 10 times a day [angry], but even the donkeys in the production team dare not take such a break.

Come on, the writing is very good. What level is the protagonist now? You must be quite strong after sleeping for so long, right? Are the protagonist's Bai Yueguang dragons still there? You must live.

It looks good. I like this kind of thing. I hope the author will update it soon [Like][Like][Like][Like][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

The dragon's home field is water, and it is naturally able to control water. The results have not been written yet. The protagonist needs to slowly add some evolution. It is a bit overwhelming and has a lot of poison points, but it can be given in Tomato.

I finally found a book about traveling through ancient times and transforming into a dragon. The only drawback is that updates are too slow

The article is very exciting. Every time you evolve, your strength will jump. The ups and downs of the plot are very exciting. Moreover, the author's writing style is very good and the wording is elegant. The protagonist's goal is to transform into a dragon, not an adult. There are no surprises. Looking forward to more updates.

Unlike other evolutionary novels, he is not a pure glutton who only knows how to eat but does not know how to feed the world. There are plots that look very novel, for example: a planet hits the earth, the dinosaurs are about to become extinct, and a large number of dinosaurs spontaneously gather around the protagonist and migrate in order to find a way out. It's rare to see a protagonist who doesn't eat everything from heaven to earth. The author of Uncle Crocodile is the most respected author on the Internet. The protagonist relies on crocodiles for early development, and the food for dinosaurs to migrate depends on crocodiles.

A novel about the evolution of alien beasts that is worth reading. The logic is clear and the story line is also very good. There are some clever ideas in the description of the characters. The protagonist gradually becomes a human being in high school, and the changes in animality, divinity and bottom line are very good [Love] [Love] [Like] [Like] [Like]

Very good. Although the writing style is not amazing, the overall texture is very refreshing and pleasing to the eye.

It feels pretty good, there are seven female protagonists [laughing evilly]

The idea is very fresh and the plot is well arranged.

I will just say 8 words. Every time you evolve, you will be invincible and you will have enemies from heaven. It needs to be improved, but the author is quite active, so I'll give it a deduction.

Not bad, there are no obvious poisonous points so far (some of them I don't think are poisonous points, which is related to my loose requirements for novels, which are not so realistic). I estimate that the potential is 7 to 8 points, which is relatively good.

Halfway through reading, I felt a very strange and strong sense of AI [Thinking] I want to know whether it is pure hand rubbing or AI or AI-assisted

I stayed up all night to finish it. I personally feel pretty good about it. I haven't read a novel about alien beasts for a long time, let alone this type. Personally, I can give it five stars.

Very nice. Please update soon.

Not bad, not bad, much better than the evolution type I have seen before. I have finished it now and am waiting for the update. The five stars are stored with you first. If they don't look good later, I'll come and get them.