Delta Force: I Have a One-Haf-Coin Instant-Kill System!

We're recruiting, and the pay is good. Package travel, package rebirth, package delivery system. Due to the excessive number of new small worlds, there is a serious shortage of time travellers, so time travelers are now being recruited, regardless of gender, old or young, on a first-come, first-served basis. Click like👍🏻 and you will get the system. (Try them all, it doesn't cost any money anyway)

It's so pretty🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women get crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😱So handsome 😘It is God, it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist I was so cute that I burst into tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 I was so cute that tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and became the tide of the Qiantang River 😈 So beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, and I couldn't stop crying when I saw him

One thing to say, there is one part that really pissed me off. When GTI distributed special equipment, the protagonist directly revealed his shadow equipment because he did not need new equipment, and also mentioned the function of teleporting regardless of distance to any place he has been to. Later, he also mentioned the 20m³ space. I believe in the character of the protagonist's teammates, but the leadership of GTⅰ cannot let the protagonist live well 😂 😂 😂 😂

This book is really well written, and it can even be said that the author has specifically gone to understand the background story of the game. Whether it is all aspects of the plot or the protagonist's position, it is very clear. I like to read it very much. Mainly because the author is so kind and righteous

Overall it's okay, but the details can only be said to have a lot of room for improvement. The first is the issue of grammar, which is too much to go into detail. Then there is the logical wording in the context, for example, in the section where the protagonist fights with the red wolf, what is meant by "cannot react at all", "the body has reacted but the brain has not yet reacted", "the brain has reacted but the body cannot react". It is hard to imagine that these sentences appear one after another in the same chapter 🙂 In the end, it's just one little poisonous point after another, but it's not a big problem. Overall, take a look. Okay, now I see another problem. The data targets are too random and it feels very weird. Although it is a novel and a game world, at least it must abide by some worldview and scientific concepts. I feel that the author's labeling of data is very random, and the amount of data easily exceeds that of ordinary people by more than ten times.

Both the plot and the characters are realistic. The characters seem to have real self-awareness. Unlike others who focus on falling in love with female operators, everyone has their own ideas. They are not born to highlight the protagonist. Everyone is not a villain, they all have different positions. Nice. Thank you very much, hope for more

The plot design is very smooth and the characters are well created. It is pretty good among delta novels, but there are too few words.

It's a very good book. The plot and setting are very interesting. I really like the male protagonist's character that I won't offend others unless they offend me, but I will kill them off if they offend me. It's very bloody. I haven't read many chapters so far, so I can't comment too much. The front is pretty good, but I don't know if there are any particularly attractive highlights in the back. I'm looking forward to it.

The overall frame is good But from the palace fight at the end, I felt a little uncomfortable. I think these female characters should be smart and clever, not someone's accessory. I don't want to always see changes, but I think the framework of this story is particularly good, and it is more suitable for a refreshing article.

This is the best Delta fanfic I have read so far (some people may not like it after all, their tastes are different). It combines the equipment characteristics of Wa Lao and King of Glory (Baili Keeping the Promise). The protagonist solves things that I think are regrettable. First of all, Said, Desmulan and Raven If you like Delta fandom, you can check it out (you can check out a few pictures first to see if they suit your taste). Looking forward to more updates! Well, after I took off that helmet, I felt it was boring.