The Invincible Young Man: the Grandpa Next Door Is Conquering

Hh who was attracted by the thunder cover It's delicious. I love eating delicious food. It's friendly to people who haven't watched the original manga. It's fun to play with. You can tell it's made by hand. Of course it's got good reviews.

Surprisingly, it's not bad. More and more people will read it. I hope the author can improve his writing skills and try to write a complete outline for the long-term plan. Many good novels first set up a specific outline (such as the specific direction of the story, opportunities for character changes, etc.) And then fill in the story bit by bit.

There are a lot of mistakes, but there are still too few books about Invincible Heroes. To give you some comfort, you can read the comments. Readers will help you find some mistakes and correct them. Invincible Heroes fan fiction is still a blue ocean. As long as you work hard, it is not a dream to get 9 points for your book~ Besides, your writing is also very good and you don't look like you are using AI [Blow kiss] [Like]

This book uses a multi-perspective narrative, and the writing is quite good, especially the fighting aspect. In my opinion, the overall character design is not collapsed. I don't know if AI is used, but I can't see any traces of AI. The psychological description and entry point of the conquest are very good, and I feel that the rhythm is also well grasped. I can give a rating of 9.2. According to the current description, after the conquest Maybe he will be with a wife who has had a child before (as for whether to get married, I haven't seen it yet, it depends on the author). To be honest, I feel a bit strange in this aspect. I feel that if Conquest is a good fall, it should be surrounded by a lot of children, rather than reorganizing a family like Nolan, but I feel that it is within my acceptable range.

Don't miss it when you pass by, brothers, you'll find something nice to look at. If you like it, please leave a review. If you like it, praise the author and tell her how happy you are. If you find anything you don't like, you can tell me. The author will read every review carefully!

I want to laugh when I see this thunder cover

It's pretty good. There's no OOC at the moment. The writing is pretty good and there's almost no AI flavor. But the introduction is a bit too rough. Just by looking at the introduction, I thought it was an assembly-line AI article. Another bad point is that there is a lottery system. I hope that there will be no situation where you will draw whatever is needed for the development of the plot.

This book plays Conquer in a lively and wonderful way, and it can also make people clearly aware of the process of Conquer from the original tyrannical old man to the existence of an ordinary old man with human emotions. It does not violate the original work, but also turns the character of Conquer into a kind grandfather. The evolution process is also very well written.

It's good to read. I like to read this kind of hero's growth story. Unfortunately, I'm still in school, so I can only read it every week. Please do your best to update it. [Send heart][Eat melon][Eat melon]

It's very interesting, and the AI ​​flavor is not strong. It's the best-looking Invincible Young Heroes fanfic on Tomato. Stick with it. The subject of Invincible Young Heroes will become more and more popular compared to the Black Robe Pickets. I hope you stick with it until that day.

It's still pretty good. The only thing that makes me think it's funny is that Conquest actually has an emotional line.

It looks good, please hurry up and type.

Absolute strength, the loneliness caused by this, what does it teach you to love? (No)

That's fine. I just can't accept being the receiver. Dorgon gives you a thumbs up.

The plot is coherent, the writing is solid, and there are no lethal personal settings and OOC. It is a rare masterpiece of fan fiction. [Love]

It looks great, why doesn't anyone comment? [What]

It's okay. When the author wanted to comment, I just gave it to him.

The characters are described with flesh and blood, whether they are Conquest or other protagonists, and what can I say, it is really good anyway

It's quite interesting. Although it has been changed a lot compared to the original work, the accelerated plot has caused some people to come to the earth super early.

What a joy! At present, the loneliness of conquest has been filled, just like the missing corner of the jade seal of the country is filled with gold. In this book, the author uses beautiful and heart-breaking words to portray the arrogance in the heart of conquest. "A thousand quick poems, a glass of wine." The description of the action is like taking a frame and weaving a piece of text into a very intense comic storyboard like Yusuke Murata. All in all, keep going!

The writing is delicate, although there are some typos, but overall it's great

It would be nice if there were more words, the emotions are described very well.

The plot is very heartwarming

It's ok, come on, author

Okay, okay, this tone is just right

A very good novel

Click to rate Meow, there are only 53 authors who cannot score and can't earn Meow Meow

Don't feed me this book [crying] It's beautiful, please read it.

There are no big problems so far, very good

It looks pretty good so far, come on, author