Juetang: Starting from Taixu Sword Qi

[Laughing evilly] Are day and night equal? Are the righteous and the sinners equal? If man is born weak, from which god should the weak find peace? O triple-faced soul! Please listen to my question. If the power and wealth of the powerful can cover up their crimes, who can judge them? If the weak need to survive at all costs, who can guarantee them? If even the most pure and good souls make mistakes, who can comfort them? Highly praised tuner, fantasy class So update quickly

Good. There are just two points. First, the protagonist's combat power is unclear. The author needs to explain more about the circumstances under which the protagonist has combat power comparable to several levels of titles or thousands of years of ferocious beasts. Second, regarding Xuanyuan Sword's soul ring issue, I don't agree that Xuanyuan Sword follows the nine-element style. The sun, moon, stars, mountains, rivers and trees should be the eight soul rings. On the basis of this, it would be better to add a reasonable ninth soul ring. The Nine Elements School is the Silver Dragon King's way, not the protagonist's. In other words, the protagonist should use ring condensation or find the corresponding eight kinds of soul beasts

Hello dear readers, I am Han Chunmeng, the author of this book. I would like to thank you for your support and recognition. I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you. I have received everyone's comments, and I understand many of my mistakes and shortcomings, so I will make a deep review here. I haven't been writing for a long time, and I have a lot of writing experience in the past, but most of them were short stories or short series. This is my first time writing a long novel, so I am considered a newcomer in this field and I still have a lot to learn. During this period of writing, many friends pointed out problems for me, such as the unclear combat power of the protagonist and the vague world view. I will also improve these problems in subsequent writing. I hope readers and friends can give me a chance to express them. This is also the first time I have written a novel that combines two world views. It is a relatively bold innovation. Although the logic may be full of loopholes and some descriptions are vague, I also really want to tell the story. I hope everyone can encourage me as a newcomer. I also carefully read the questions raised by many readers and friends, and had serious discussions with many friends who follow me in the group. I will adopt your opinions and suggestions as appropriate. After all, I am just an ordinary writer, not a very powerful person, and I cannot make everyone like it. But please don't attack me based on these minor issues. I hope everyone can understand. With the development of technology, many online article authors have chosen to embrace technology and use artificial intelligence to assist or directly replace writing. This is understandable, but it does greatly squeeze authors who rely on traditional methods to write articles. I will not accuse this phenomenon of being unreasonable or having any other contradictions, but I can guarantee that my works will not use any AI products to directly assist or replace writing. Although there are many contradictions and shortcomings, I hope everyone can bear with me. Thank you again for your readers' attention and support. I also hope that more big guys and colleagues can give me pointers. Thank you all.

The writing skills need to be improved. This book is about a single female protagonist, but there are too few scenes about the protagonist in the early important plot. It is not recommended to compare this book with real moral standards, because if you compare it, you will find a lot of slippage, so it is not recommended to compare it with real moral standards. After all, the original work had a lot of slippages. Summary: The characters are vividly described and the writing style is meticulous, but the storyline needs to be improved.

How can I put it, the person who wrote Honkai Impact III is the best I have ever seen among this type of fan fiction in Douluo Dalu. The main reason is that I personally believe that, like fan fiction, first of all, the plot cannot be delayed, but it must be reasonable, and the plot must be promoted on the premise of integrating the two world views, so that the protagonist's current world background has a sense of existence. For example, if you directly write about the use of Honkai energy like this, you will have to write out the subsequent erosion and so on, which will be very troublesome. Moreover, the protagonist of this article does not have the Herrscher Core and has no reason to connect to the cocoon, so it is normal that there is no Honkai function. It is good to combine it with the soul power setting of Douluo Continent. When it finally comes, I feel like there is nothing to write about, unless the writing is particularly good, otherwise it will be uninteresting and the combat power will be too high. However, it is recommended that the author explain the combat power in detail in the later stage, even if it is a separate chapter, explaining the combat power level so far, or you can write it in the article, for example: Ling Shuang felt something (no matter where the feeling came from, you can set it yourself) He thinks that with his current combat power, how many levels of soul beasts can he fight with all his strength? How about changing to a soul master or a magician? So far, it's pretty good. I'm quite picky when it comes to reading. I usually don't read ordinary articles. I feel that this article is quite promising. I hope the author can write some extras in the future, such as the reaction of Tang San, God of the Sea and others when they discovered Ling Shuang, and the interaction between Hua and other people in Honkai Impact 3. I think it will be very interesting♪

Comic world view or anime world view?

So the protagonist is from Honkai local to Douluo

It looks good, but I always feel like there's something wrong with it "Honkai Impact III" + "Peerless Tang Sect" fanfic, with a single female protagonist, the protagonist Ling Shuang (not Fu Hua), there may be some problems with the early combat power, but the author is really changing it. If there is no combat power, it will be directly crushed at the beginning. The two world views do not crush each other, and the logic is self-consistent. The heroine is not Fu Hua, but she and Fu Hua were companions in her previous life. The pace in the early stage is slow, and some of the fighting descriptions are straightforward and lack of visual rendering. The protagonist will grow up step by step and will be injured and run away instead of fighting brainlessly. There is no delay according to the situation. There are costs and bottlenecks in upgrading. It is not like the previous fans who "started with full equipment, but were not invincible in the early stage, which caused the combat power to collapse, and hated Tang San at the beginning. I don't understand. Honkai Impact III should be entered with caution, and those who pursue the ultimate cool writing. Summary: It is better among previous fanfics. It should be able to be written for a long time without fighting, and it is still worthy of recommendation. I am about to start breathing (airplane ears) (breathing) (jumping on the computer desk) (knocking over the water glass) (being frightened by knocking over the water glass) (jumping up and knocking over the mirror and TV) Breathing from the fallen water cup and mirror) (provoking and hissing at the hacker) (scratching the bleeding marks) (slapping the ground with both claws to intimidate) (arching) (exploding hair) (breathing and threatening) (punching forward) (falling) (struggle hip-hop) (breathing toward the ground) (rolling) (biting the data cable) (growling viciously) (scratching the sofa) (breathing) (crawling cautiously) (twisting) (breathing) ( Growling) (breathing) (arching back) (furling) (breathing) (stretching claws) (breathing) (growling) (rushing forward) (breathing) (stretching claws) (falling) (breathing) (struggles back) (growling) (arching back) (furling) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing) (breathing)

Wait, I suddenly discovered a problem! Where is Huo Yuhao's other cheater?

Not bad, looking forward to the follow-up

Ling Shuang's second injury is too rare

There is a problem but not a big one (for me), I just hope that there will be more updates and more updates Da☆ze

Delicious 😍 Mrs. Perfectly integrates the two world views

After watching it, I feel like there's nothing wrong with it, it's quite nice👀

I think it's okay. The plot is coherent and natural. It depends on the situation. I'll see if I continue to follow it.

Overall it looks good, keep it up ^ω^

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It's pretty good, but I somehow mistook the protagonist for Fu Hua

If only I had some knowledge, Yu Duchen could also be the second martial spirit.

I've only seen 6 pictures. The first six pictures are fine for the time being.

How to play when you fall into the trap and get Xi'er (current card pool)

How shameless, the teacher doesn't have enough to eat

It was a bit rough in the early stages, but later on I felt like the writing was pretty good.

I think it's pretty good. All the elements I like are blended together. I feel like my combat power was a bit broken in the early stages. I personally don't like watching memories very much.

I feel like the protagonist is a bit weak, but overall it's okay. I give it five stars.

It's so interesting, you must taste it carefully

I finally found Honkai Sanjia Peerless Tang Sect. To be honest, it was well written, but maybe not many people read it, so the rating was a bit low.