Jockey Girl: Shining Star

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This is the first time I read Ma Niang's article, and I feel it is quite novel, but when writing, can the author add some pictures of Ma Niang that only appear in the game? I don't play games enough

It's good-looking, very good-looking. The descriptions of Ma Niang's character and various aspects are very good. In my impression, all Ma Niang are unharmed and in their heyday, Oguri Hat has absolute first-level strength except for those phantom gods. Personally, I feel that Oguri Hat is even better when it comes to Tamamo Cross and Oguri Hat. Should the author consider using spring urala as a pistachio?

It's okay, it would be better if the soul wears it (for example, let the three goddesses have their entire identities and so on). It feels a bit strange.

Starting from an unusual time shows that the author is a very ambitious and experienced Ma Niang fan, and I like it very much (I once discussed with others the story of Tamamo Cross, Fujimasa March (gene mutation version), Oguri Hat and Inari teamed up to break through Treson Central and then opened the bay to win the Heisei Year). First of all, I would like to express my encouragement here. However, as the plot of Emperor and McQueen appears so early, it seems that the author does not intend to only write the story of one era. That requires the author to have a long-term plan and the writing power to persevere. I look forward to it [laughing]

It's really good. The rare initial role is Tamamo Cross. It can be said to be the first one in Tomato. I look forward to the follow-up.

I have read a lot of strange books, this book feels a bit refreshing [like]

The pacing is good. I want to ask if it's a romantic scene with multiple female protagonists or a purely friendship-oriented one (I love watching both).

It looks good. If you like it, buy more.

It's very interesting. Ma Niang's novel about the passionate bond of friendship has not been published in Tomato for a long time.

You can take a look at it. It's very well written, without any bad points. The author also puts pictures at the end of the chapters, and the plot progress is reasonable.

So is it friendship?

The writing in the Jockey Girl fanfic is quite detailed, and the content is less about emotions and more about competition, which is quite to my liking.

It's relatively rare. I've seen it in the past and it's all from the Golden Age. This is the first time I've seen it in the Heisei period.

The author is from Xiaoleiyin Temple, right? [Laughing]

Come on, come on, come on

Very good. Very hard work, come on!

It's beautiful, especially the ones that make up for the memories.

Well written, the plot is reasonable, and there are many original characters

It's very beautiful. This kind of dream and friendship is the best!

It's very interesting, good luck to the author [laughing]

It's so beautiful, you have to savor it😍😍😍

It ranks among the best among the Ma Niang novels I have read. Have your own understanding

It's so beautiful that no need to say more, good luck to the author