Armed Assault from Scratch

There is AI polishing, but most of it is hand-made. I like this theme very much. Three college students with modern equipment come to the anime "A Different World Starting from Zero". Ang doesn't have to suffer so hard. At least there are fellow travelers who are also time-travelers. But it depends on how the author writes later. After all, the top combat powers in RE like the Jealous Witch may not be affected by modern equipment, right? 🤔🤔🤔

Well, when it comes to AI polishing, if you think the AI ​​flavor is too strong, that's the part? In fact, it can be deleted and re-conceived. You can come up with your own ideas. After all, it's only one paragraph. That's it. Protagonists can have their own tempers. Meet those gods. No need for some two-dimensional or anything. Well, star chasing. After all, everyone is a normal person who has received nine years of compulsory education. It's time to scold. There is no need to be too polite to them. It is normal to have conflicts, and Cai Yue Subaru can be used as a peacemaker through conflicts. Well, the three protagonists can have their own characters. Of course, this character cannot be too perfect. Only in this way can there be soul and space for the growth of mind.

It's okay, but there are too few updates. Alas, I feel like the protagonist group is weird. They are like tool men and have no independent opinions at all.

It feels very comfortable to read. There are some minor problems, such as the explanations are not clear, but the pace is very smooth and not draggy. It is a good book. But there is a problem. The sense of AI is quite obvious. For example, when the Sausage Hunter first appeared and Reinhardt hunted the Sausage Hunter, a syntax that DeepSeek liked to use very much appeared, "It's not..., But...", And this kind of words appeared and were repeated before. For example, here, Reinhardt first said "Reinhardt cuts", and then repeated the sentence "Not to chop, but to chop" in the next paragraph. The use of AI is understandable, and many Tomatoes now use AI assistance. But if you want to stand out from so many AI-assisted books, you'd better go through it yourself. It would be better to change these places.

I like it, it looks good, I love watching it. I pay more attention to the development of the plot. If there is no problem with the plot, it doesn't matter if the AI polishes it. I particularly like the characters of the protagonist group, and I don't know why I feel a different emotion every time I see the protagonist group die and pretend to be miserable. Especially the few chapters in the new update where I kill my teammates with my own hands are amazing. In fact, I personally really hope that the relationship between 486 and the protagonist group will be better. No matter what he does, others can be merciless and have a truly trustworthy backing. There can also be more daily descriptions. I feel that sometimes 486's emotions are light. The family really loves Ang. In addition to the relatively large mental impact caused by the tragic death of the protagonist group, 486 feels like he is very happy and not so painful at least. I hope that in the future, the local bumpkins will be able to see what it means to be a despicable foreigner. I want a nuclear bomb to clear the air! I want to see rivers of blood! (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴

The subject matter is very good and very creative. I was attracted at first glance. Both the cover and the title are perfect. The next step is to polish the content. So far, the characters of the protagonist and the others in the first meeting with the Sausage Hunters have been well portrayed. In terms of writing style, other people in the comment area have mentioned AI. Indeed, some scenes and details are "obviously" used in AI. The paragraph is too long and wordy, but this is the beginning, and it should be improved in the future. I hope I can keep writing. The original work was too miserable 😢

It's nice to look at, and the characters have distinct characteristics, but modern thermal weapons appear too few times, and Pang Pig and Rhino only appear once. I want to see dimensionality reduction strikes 🤔, but this kind of thing is not easy to grasp. It's difficult to develop the plot if it's too strong. If it's too weak, it will collapse. Come on, author,

It's still good-looking at the moment. AI is a good assistant and can improve production capacity. However, AI will ignore some settings. The author needs to look at it more. For example, problems such as characters knowing things they don't know or obvious OOC speech will make people unable to read.

The writing is good, come on, keep updating. Although some of the writing is unreasonable and should be written by AI, most of it is consistent with common sense and makes people want to read more. The subject matter is very novel, come on!

Very good, but a little too polite to those gods.