I'm Looking for Extras in Modern Times, but the Ancients Are Really Here

So far, the first ten chapters have a good pace, the male protagonist is not obscene, and the plot and dialogue are reasonable. But the unnecessary details make the paragraph full of petty and violent male malice... I don't think that "because halal noodle restaurants do not allow braised meat and food related to religious objections" will make normal men angry. I don't feel the need to write about the twists and turns of the "female" salesperson and the classic stupid look down on her and the fantasy of being slapped in the face by "the actual protagonist is very powerful" as a cool point, so much so that the paragraph comment made the comment "beat her to death" Even as an author, this kind of vulgar routine of catering has long been outdated. Rigid and taken-for-granted contempt is not good. Removing this kind of description will not cause a cliff-like loss to your writing. Looking at the author's profile, there will be a description of women fleeing famine, so I don't think the author is simply writing mindlessly to cater to the text. The concept of the book itself has a certain positive heroism. I hope the author can be more refined. And when he appeared, "My name is Yang Wen, welcome to two thousand years later" and so on, emmm, Zhan Shenfeng? In fact, I feel that the author can refer to the Tarot Club of the Lord of Mysteries. Above, I hope to see the author's more refined writing skills and better works. Still can't expect too much from male authors…Abandoned book records

It's great. I've been short of books for a long time. It's rare to come across such a great one. The plot is relaxed and relaxed, and the logic is rigorous. Many details of the branch plots are well written, and there are no lengthy repetitions. It's great. The author keeps it up. I feel that it has a trend of becoming a big hit. I must stick to it. Gogogo's writing is also great.

Nice. The same type is now on the market. I'm tired of watching the emperor travel through time. Very few ordinary people travel through it. As a common person, I am. Reading this novel gives me a strong sense of immersion. The author's description is also quite reasonable. The update is just too slow. Only one update a day. Saw the latest chapter. It's almost finished. I hope the author can continue writing. Because this book is not recommended. So no one saw it. That is, I am classifying. You can only find good grass by looking for the same type.

The author has a misunderstanding. Compressed biscuits are not filling, but are high in calories. If you really eat them freely, they are not much different from ordinary food [laughs]

This book is so well written, I think it has the rhythm of a big hit [Like][Like][Like] I've seen enough time-traveling stories of emperors and generals. In fact, the emperors and generals have no shortage of food and clothing. It's still more fun to watch time-traveling with little people 👀 [laughs]

The rating is low! How could this book only get a 6 rating? It's so well written that I couldn't stop reading it before going to bed. I started reading it first thing in the morning and continued reading! It's really good-looking. I like the realism of the boss, the collision with the ancients, and the refreshing feeling of the ancients coming to modern times and being surprised and sighing. I feel like the author will write more to make up for the regrets later! I look forward to Ah Tu meeting the First Emperor!

This book is okay so far. I have read more than 50 chapters, but the number of words is a bit short. I hope the author can write better and better, and keep at it.

Update speed, 100,000 words per day, are there any similar articles [smile]

It's really well written, but I haven't seen any traces of AI for the time being.

Really beautiful! [Like] The characters are full of characters, and the protagonists, supporting characters, and even the minor characters who have only appeared are all vivid! I have read similar ones before, but none of them are as good as this one! The plot is not procrastinating or verbose. The collision between the ancient characters and the protagonist is quite fun. Haha, it is very spiritual. Anyway, I was attracted [send my heart]! It's just too short! Come on, author! [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] Looking forward to the follow-up [plus one for bookshelf]

Chapter 20 doesn't have any poisonous points. Let's test the water with five stars first. However, the four big men looking for trouble in Chapter 19 are too typical. It would be better to draw out the police and then design a conflict point for Ah Tu's identity in modern society.

Looks good! Is it possible to deal with Emperor Gaozu of the Han Dynasty without killing him? Let him go out and expand the territory! The world is so big, don't just focus on one third of an acre.

It's not bad, I haven't read much yet, it's okay, I haven't read a few chapters yet. I'll have to read it for a while before commenting, but I haven't seen the second ancient character appear yet. I haven't seen the specific direction of the story yet. We'll have to wait and see. [Eat melon]

Write more! I have only written two so far, Qin Tu accounts for 90%, is he the protagonist?

It's super good. It's not easy to find good books.

I originally thought that the first famous figure in history selected by the system would be a person from the Qin Dynasty, such as Qin Shihuang Yingzhi or his eldest son Fusu or General Mengtian. The result was Su Shi. Surprisingly, it was not the same Li Bai. It would be more interesting next time if it was a beautiful character, such as Princess Taiping, Empress Dugu, Yu Xuanji, Li Qingzhao, Shangguan Wan'er, Zhao Feiyan, Wei Zifu...

It's well written. At least the first part of the story isn't too poisonous.

I have seen a very novel track, and the book I read yesterday has caught up with me today. It is super good! Although it is systematic, it is not a big-system brainless article. I hope the author will continue to update more [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses] The overall writing style is well controlled.

It's a very novel article. I read it in one day and it really attracted me🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

The creativity is very good, the plot is smooth and exciting, and there is nothing poisonous about it.

So far, it's still pretty good.

The storyline is vivid and interesting, but too little. The author will add more.

It looks good, but it updates too slowly.

Nice! Wonderful! Fascinates me!

After reading it, 5 points of praise Waiting for follow-up

Very nice! Thank you so much to the author! Support you!

Nice! I couldn't find anything with the same theme. The author will update soon.

Looks good, looks good, more updates, don't force me to beg you

It's very beautiful. Why is the rating so low? It looks better than many other products with a rating of 9 or above, but it's just too short. Come on!

Looks good, support it