After Being Abandoned by the Immortal Lord, I Became the Heartthrob of the Immortal Sect

This book is very nice😋 When will the Avengers kill Xie Qinghan? When will Xie Qinghan be offline? I think so. Can I brutally torture Xie Qinghan? Actually. I don't understand. He was standing on the edge of the cliff. Not even moving. At least he moves. To show that there is even a little bit of affection for Shushu in his heart. I have nothing to do this time.

It has been tied, and it is generally good. The author has dug a lot of holes. The description of the environment is good enough to be excerpted, but the emotional line and character creation are a bit thin. It depends on whether it can be filled in later and completed, and the plot will be rounded out. I just have no feelings for Xie himself, but some readers are very enthusiastic about him haha [awkward laughter] Basically, when I see someone who hates Xie, I will post a few short essays to refute it. It is not said that they hate Hai Qingtian, but I don't see that most of them are farmers and snakes. If you still don't agree and The person who said he disliked Xie very much started to attack the author and this article (I read all the posts and posts where that person was arguing with others), but that person made some remarks in defense of Xie, based on speculation about the author's subsequent plot and the author's description of Xie, which gave a very bad impression. There are people who have a good impression of Xie. He is the only one who will force you to accept his point of view if you don't accept it.

Bland, love and hate all have a bland feeling, unknowingly they are even. I'm convinced, so it turns out that Xie is officially married? ? Seeing how the protagonist was so miserable and hated in the past, he collected all kinds of geniuses at all costs just to get revenge on Xie. However, when he was brought here, he seemed to have forgiven Xie. Those people mentioned before were directly defeated. After reading the introduction again, it turned out that the protagonist did not cause Xie any real harm, and was treated as a part of the couple's play.

It's very delicious and I like it very much... During the bottleneck period, it was like meeting a close friend. A beauty like Shu Bai should practice the orthodox ruthless way. If you want to stand by Bai Bai's side, work hard! We strictly implement a queuing principle. The non-1v1 mode is very comfortable. Let's continue to compete! From what I've seen so far, I feel like Li Hanyuan and Bai Bai have a very parental feel, especially when facing Xiao Long Dan, and Mu Jiu. Such restrained and affectionate characters paired with the dog sculptures are really cute! It's more important for you guys to live a good life than anything else. The dialogue between Taishang Xianzun (so they seem to be called) and Sect Master Wen protecting the calf is also very good. They are kind-hearted fellow disciples... The two protectors look very powerful and gentle, which makes people feel warm in their hearts. As for Xie Qinghan... I personally think this character is well created. His indifference is not only reflected in his attitude towards Bai Bai, but also from his personal way of dealing with things. It can also be seen that this person has questionable emotional intelligence. It can also be seen from the description of inner demons and other related things that he is actually an avoidant attack type (?) And has a very rough way of dealing with feelings... The author is awesome! Looking forward to the update.

I just read it on a whim at first, but after reading a few chapters, I felt good. The story is quite compact, the protagonist is sober, and the author grasped some parts that I thought should be embarrassing very well. Coupled with the protagonist's own personality, the plot is not embarrassing. Moreover, so many children of luck appear, and the dominant one is still Shubai. Of course, the protagonist's story line about Taishang Wangqing needs to be advanced. Now the author is mainly writing about the main plot of revenge + winning over the son of destiny. However, Taishang Wangqing and another (I forgot what the other one's name was) only appeared in the previous few chapters. The protagonist's cultivation line should also be written. The protagonist is not I still have a lot of free time for alchemy for the time being. Even if Xie Xianzun is here, can he control what kind of exercises a "taoist couple" casual cultivator practices? The cultivation of the three sons of destiny needs to be restored, and the protagonist also needs to improve his cultivation. I feel that the cultivation part does not need to be written too much, but it must be written. The current content is generally good. I really like reading it. I hope the author will keep up the good work!

I hope you won't forgive Xie Qinghan, and it's best to kill him. I really didn't expect his reason for not taking action. Oh my God, what kind of strength are you? If you don't even try to save him, why are there so many "do you think, do you think"? You'll torture him to death! !

It's really beautiful and beautiful🥺Men are menstruating when they see it🙄Women are going crazy when they see it💪This is the nemesis of depression😎It's the alarm clock for vegetative people😭It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and become the tide of the Qiantang River 😱So handsome😘God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony on the 0th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist in me The world is no longer short of water. It is the nemesis of depression. It is an alarm clock for vegetative people. It is so cute that the Qiantang River tide in Yancheng is so cute. It sounds so good. God is my rose. It lights up my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I must torture Xie Qinghan hard, the life we ​​lived together in the early days was really warm [crying] Xie Qinghan disappeared as soon as he came [crying] [crying] [crying] I really like Li Hanyuan, I don't know if Xiao Shubai is his CP, I really hope they are [sending my heart]

Okay, author, you'd better not let this Xie Qinghan come to the table. [Smile] He has no Taoist companion. He deserves it. He deserves it. [Smile] If he does this kind of thing, don't let me come to the table. [Smile] Give us Shubai a heartthrob with no CP. I really beg you. Author, don't let this Xie Qinghan come to the table. I don't care if he has any difficulties, he just deserves it.

It's okay, but you can't use your brain while watching it. All the settings written by the author have been thrown away. It's not fun enough, and it's not sad enough. The protagonist seems to be able to do this, that, and cheats, but it's actually very frustrating.

All I can say is that it's so beautiful🥺 Men are menstruating when they see it 🙄 Women get crazy when they see it 💪 This is the nemesis of depression 😎 It's the alarm clock for vegetative people 😭 It's so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😱 So handsome 😘 It's God, it's my rose, it lights up my darkness Life makes my world meaningful😊I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It made me realize that God does exist😋I was so cute that I burst into tears. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water🥰Although there are a few typos, but overall it is very beautiful👀 Good looking [crying]

Ok ok ok But can the author count how many words he said when he was writing? The character said 3 words, but the narrator actually said 4 words. I felt like I couldn't count them all, which was a bit disturbing. Many things were written directly without any foreshadowing.

Looks good... After Tomato changed the push mechanism, there were a bunch of messy and ugly things on the list. This book is really an unexpected surprise. The characters are very distinctive and have distinct personalities, and the ambiguous pull feels really good and refreshing😋

It's very good-looking. I feel like everyone is nice. I really like Shu Bai's character design. Bai Bai is very cute. Except for Xie Qinghan, I hope he will go offline. In my heart, he is completely a villain. It's okay to say that he was controlled in the past. Then he will be cured so quickly? I went to find the master again for no reason. I hate him very much. I couldn't accept it at all, watching Shu Bai being killed without moving, and not looking for Shu Bai afterwards. Then Shubai almost died and opened a secret realm, but he still only glanced at it. If Shubai didn't have a system or something, maybe everyone was just a ghost. He didn't want Shubai to forgive him. Well, what he couldn't get was the best. I hope Xie Qinghan never gets Shubai's forgiveness and his body and mind.

Overall, it's okay, but some of the emotional lines may not be well-shaped. After all, I quite like it. It's a very good baby. However, that person named Xie really can't be soft-hearted to him, not even a little bit soft-hearted. Although Shubai has always refused, he still gives medicine and other things to the person named Xie. Emm, it really makes me feel a little silent.

The really good-looking Shubai baby is really cute! ! ! Love this one! It's just that I haven't finished the update yet. When I read Chapter 30, I still haven't figured out who is Shu Shu's cp🌝🌝🌝🌝🌝

Oh my god, this fast pace is so exciting. The pace is so fast that my lips can't move. ^-------------^ ( @ • W • @ ) | >❤< | |☆ ( nnn ) ( nnn )/ ===== =====

It's so pretty. Four men looked at menstruation. This is the nemesis of depression ( The woman looked crazy The fourth is the alarm clock of a vegetative state, from thunder to tears. The water flowing out from the corner of the mouth is flooded into the Qiantang River. The garden is so handsome③ Gold is God and my rose The rose illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I ran, I jumped, I danced tango four on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so cute that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression ④ is the alarm clock of a vegetative state. Tears flowed from the corners of my mouth and flooded into the Qiantang River. It sounded so good. It's God. It's my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful.

Judging from the current viewing experience, the writing is very smooth, and the plot has no obvious inexplicable flaws. In the past, the few at the top of online articles were like this. The smooth and natural look and feel is really something you can't find. I don't know if it's my problem, I feel like I don't look that good now.

Xie Jian's reasons for refusing to save him were vague and too thin, so that his later behavior was like a battle between the left and right brains, and even if he described the reasons according to his inner demons, he would not be able to establish it. I couldn't tell that there was something hidden and then tried to make amends, which confused me (Ò ‸ Ó||). The descriptions collected by the remaining male guests are plain and straightforward, and cannot support the change in favorability. I like the overall direction of the book introduction (the above personal opinions are not malicious) and I wish the author better and better.

It's good-looking, but I didn't expect there to be so many women's clothing plots in it. Chapters 10 to 32 are all in women's clothing (I only saw that there are more after chapter 32)

Oh wow, I have an extremely excited woman screaming from behind the screen. Limbs crawling in darkness. It's still awesome, so what else can I say? Little finger points. La la la la la la. Come for leisure and entertainment. More care, more love. .

Ahhhhhh! ! ! ! Really good-looking! It's been a long time since I've seen a book that suits my liking. Teacher, as long as you keep updating, I will follow you forever! ! [Top post][top post][top post]

I like the character Shu Bai very much and feel a little sorry for him. Xie is a white-eyed wolf control freak. Although I feel sorry for him a little bit, compared with my Shu Bai, he shouldn't get involved, okay? I can accept np (..)

It's really, really good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! .

This book is really amazing. It's a daily read at the moment, but it makes me go crazy [crying] [crying] [crying]. It's perfect. I only regret that I came too early. It's actually being serialized [blowing kiss] [like]

I have a question. Is it more or 1v1? There is another question. Author, have you used AI or something to assist you? There are a lot of small bugs.

Although, what is the development in Chapter 35? Why does the protagonist's relationship suddenly take a U-turn? Isn't there still revenge ahead? Why does it feel like the lingering feelings are still lingering [Chigua]

This book is very good, but can I keep torturing Xie Qinghan (self-view)

So far it looks pretty good, I like this character very much! ! !

Looks good! Recommend