Those Years When I Was a Weapon Spirit

Can the track of changing marriage produce such fine chaff? Currently more than thirty chapters have been updated. The writing is delicate, the plot is relaxed and immersive, and the characters of the hero and heroine are vivid and vivid on the page. I think the most basic thing about a good-looking fairy tale is that the reader knows what kind of fairy the protagonist is cultivating and what kind of Tao the protagonist is cultivating. The author knows it, the protagonist knows it, and the reader knows it. It may not be clear at first, but as the protagonist searches for his own path, it becomes clearer and clearer to the protagonist, and so does the reader. In this process, the protagonist is growing, perfecting the Tao, and growing flesh and blood. This novel is just such a novel so far. I hope that the subsequent author can maintain the current level and not go off track. The emotional line is very delicately written, and the emotional development of the male protagonist and female protagonist tends to be smooth and steady, which is different from 99.9% Of novels on this subject. It feels a bit like a family at the moment, but it will not make people feel bored, because the author's current plot is quite interesting. I hope the author can keep his own rhythm and not lose his own characteristics and be eager for success. It is also very warm to take his time. It depends on how the author handles the subsequent emotional changes and transitions. I hope the author can grasp it well and not appear too abrupt. If we maintain the current level, there will definitely be no problem with a score of 9 or more in the end. Five-star praise, support the author! Come on!

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It's very smooth, the plot transitions very smoothly, it doesn't focus on the love affairs between men and women, it has a somewhat noble temperament, and it cultivates the mind more than the immortal. There are still many problems. The female protagonist is the real protagonist. It may be difficult to write about a child's body, but no matter what, she must be placed in the main position and not like an accessory. There is also a violation of the male protagonist's character. He treats the protagonist rudely at the beginning, but then he tries to create a kind character. So what does the opening scene count? Clown?

Come on, author, the writing style is very good, especially the three chapters on politics, which reminded me of my experience when I was in school. It was exactly the same as in the dormitory after lights out. I always liked to discuss some national affairs, even though I couldn't change anything...

The writing is very good, especially in the debate chapters where the heroine's scenes are too few. I hope more heroines' scenes can be added. In addition, there are very few Qi Ling novels. I hope the author will not stop updating. Come on. [Laugh]

I don't think there's anything wrong with the male protagonist's perspective, and the writing is very good. I really enjoyed the part where I was discussing court affairs with those people. In addition, maybe I saw too many protagonists who were decisive and decisive. When I saw the Taoist from Fuhu Temple framed them, I wanted to kill them all as soon as they had this idea in their hearts. What kind of ultimatum? Debate in court, cross-examination. In the chess match between the two forces, it is the common people who suffer, and some of the witnesses who falsely accuse are poor people. Although the protagonist wanted to go down the mountain to realize Taoism, to understand himself, to experience the world of mortals, and to use less magic power, in the end he still used his magic power to defeat Fuhu Guan. Just imagine if they had been defeated earlier, what rumors would there be, and what evil people would come over to cause trouble. With a sword in your hand, you should cut the crooked into straight. Immortals don't fight and fight? If you really don't fight for it, why pursue that eternal life? What's more, he hasn't ascended yet, he's just a cultivator. Perhaps this is why the male protagonist needs to go down the mountain to experience - to transform into mortals and gain experience. (Maybe the author... Hmm) Overall evaluation of this article (currently reading around 30 chapters, the latest): Tentatively considered to be the best grain. I hope there will be more interaction between the two. After all, the theme you set is not about chess and fate. (If you have a complete outline or ideas, you can still follow your own ideas.)

The quality is okay and it is certified as qualified grain and grass. The writing is delicate and comfortable to read. The number of chapters is quite large. It's just that the pace is a bit slow, and the element of marriage change in the early stage is like a stick, which is not very friendly to some readers who come here for marriage change. Quick update, can't sleep at night😭

After reading some, let me share my opinion. I personally feel that this subject matter is very novel. The male and female protagonists are not brainless, but the pace is a bit slow. It can be seen that the author has used AI to polish some places, but the overall feeling is still good.

It looks great. I've seen the Qi Ling style and the Bian Jie style. This is the first time I've seen these two together. Compared with other online articles, the language is more suitable for the background of ancient cultivating immortals. It doesn't feel like a drama, which is rare.

The writing is very delicate, and the rhythm is well advanced. It is written manually, it is very emotional, and the psychological activities are just right. I saw someone in the comment section saying that there were fewer scenes of weapon spirits, but I didn't think about it. Now the protagonist and Chu are considered one body and two souls. They have no legs or feet and have not yet transformed. Can't they follow Chu together? I think it can become a long novel in the future, with more than a thousand chapters, which is the best starting point for literature hahahahahaha! But don't use the word "water", keep to the current rhythm, work slowly and carefully, it's really delicious, it's very suitable for workers to eat it carefully! Come on, I really like this kind of article that is very down-to-earth and pragmatic. It is written very delicately and with great details. It has a strong sense of immersion. It is amazing! Compared with the previous book, I read The Poor Fairy Who Dances Lightly in the Red Dust. Now that I see this, I finally found a book that suits my taste!

The author is not stuck in writing, and will finish everything in one chapter (he will not suddenly stop writing at a critical moment). He has a beginning and an end, and a chapter is at least about 5,000 words, and the most is about 10,000 words. It is enjoyable to read! The author's writing is good. It tells the story of a male monk and a sword spirit (the heroine was and now is a girl). The storyline is plain and mixed with contradictions, just like there must be some conflict in a drama, but the characters' IQs are online, and the descriptions are flesh-and-blood (suitable for reading when you are in a bad mood, you can gradually adjust your mentality in the slow pace of the book). The writing is also very good, and there are some famous quotes and inspiring philosophies! Come on, author, I really like this kind of slow-paced but still like the happy time with my childhood friends [crying] But after all, no one is perfect. This book also has shortcomings, that is, there is too little written [shy] Although it is the subject of changing marriages, it is not as sweet as putting a big jar of sugar for you, but at the end of the twigs of things. The light sweetness that I chew over and over, the joy of childhood and the sadness of wanting to retire and return to my hometown in old age... This is the first time I have written such a long comment... Because this article really touched me a lot, especially when the protagonists were living in the mountains, my emotions really burst out.

The author himself writes beautifully. Judging from the current progress, the focus of the article is on the cultivation of the male protagonist. Those who are rushing to change the relationship and get married can wait and see. I feel that this audience positioning is a bit biased, but it is still very interesting to read. Come on, author.

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In the era of AI articles, there are not many people who write as seriously as the author. There must be many suitors for a heroine who is so cute and beautiful.

It's very well written. It's totally from Xiaochun. When I saw this book, I felt that it was worth buying it on my mobile phone. [Like] Because it's a new book, the rating will be a little low. But the quality is very good. Although the author is a student, he is able to update it stably, and each chapter is guaranteed to be 5,000 words long. One chapter is as good as others' four chapters, so I can't help but praise it 😊 The writing style is smooth and not embarrassing. To be successful, a cultural worker must be educated. Although it is a story about changing a marriage, the protagonist will not make dirty jokes or be disrespectful or anything like that. I am very satisfied with this [Send Heart] This article is more of an everyday style, focusing on things that come naturally. I feel that the relationship between the protagonists is more of a long-lasting love. Cultivate slowly. In terms of combat power, it's quite normal. It's not like Long Aotian soars into the sky and kills in battles. If you prefer to watch the kind of beibei who falls in love immediately after seeing each other or the kind of beibei who enjoys fighting, you can exit in the upper left corner [I'm about to cry] Judging from the plot that the author has updated so far, this book is expected to be quite long and can be read for a while. All in all, this article is really delicious. Come and see, come and see

Good looking, quick update, keeps me awake at night. There is just one thing, the character behind the male protagonist is a bit conflicting with the beginning. Maybe it's because the plot has not developed yet? Hope it can be handled better later. Also, the heroine is the protagonist, right? Why is it that all the scenes are on the male protagonist, and the female protagonist feels like a supporting role, which is a bit uncomfortable. Overall, it is still very well written. Taking into account the fairy grass and fine chaff in "Bianwen", it tied the game in one night. Come on, author, don't stop updating!

The writing is quite good, but the length of "In the Mortal World" is too long, and some of the plots are written to give people a sense of frustration. After all, they are cultivators of immortality, and they should not be frequently trapped by these trivial things that can be easily solved. Even if the protagonist has the purpose of self-cultivation, it does not mean that he has to fight and kill all the way, but the appropriate use of force may be better.

The author's writing is really good. I haven't read such a detailed story for a long time. Although it is a fairy tale, it is not impatient or impatient. The two protagonists are also well portrayed. The other characters are also very detailed. It is really rare. Come on, author [Bird Food Masterpiece]

It is a very delicious orthodox fairy tale. The rating is low, probably because it has just opened the score [give my heart] and the writing style is very good. The descriptions of various scenes in the article are just right. There are a few paragraphs in the middle that are very like Journey to the West. It reminds me of the scene where I read Sun Wukong's search for the fairy mountain before. It makes people feel like they are there. In the article, I really like the description of the male protagonist's process of searching for the heart of the Tao. Many articles about cultivating immortals overly describe external forces and golden fingers. In the end, it becomes boring to defeat monsters, upgrade, change maps, fight monsters and upgrade again, but it loses the flavor. The change of marriage is more like a cute point of the author to embellish the article. The pace of the article is also very slow. I personally like the food. Some of the character descriptions of the heroine in the early stage are also pretty good, just like an ordinary boy who is a little naive. It has the bitch-like flavor of other marriage-changing novels, but Xianpin Xianpin [Bookshelf Plus 1] is just not enough. It feels like the battle line will be very long, and the world view is also huge. The author must not stop updating, it is really difficult to find such a novel that suits your appetite [cry] [cry] In short, it is delicious, very delicious😋Teacher, I will follow you forever! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Although I have only read more than twenty chapters so far, it has been a long time since I saw a fairy tale novel that has the feel of an orthodox cultivation of immortality. Moreover, the male protagonist is not a murderous, indifferent person, but a very real person, with his own powerful side, but also his shortcomings. Can't help but give a good review first.

The writing style and vocabulary are very good. The first part is average, but the second part is very good. It feels like watching Water Margin. It's very bland. If you like the grand and ups and downs of the front, you probably won't be able to stand it. It's good for those who like blandness. I haven't seen the back yet, so I don't know how the "change of marriage" was handled.

It's good-looking, the writing style is very comfortable, and the subject matter is very rare. I also like it very much. I seem to have read a similar book in the early years, and I liked it very much. From the comments section, it should be the same book. The author must stick to it [please update]

It's rare to find a fairy tale with less AI flavor and normal content. Book a high-quality product. The more I read, the less interesting it becomes. No matter how good the writing is, the author has no grasp of the plot and has seriously deviated from the main line.

From the perspective of changing marriages, it is admittedly not a good book. The main point of view in the early stage mostly revolves around the male protagonist, but the protagonist is a little downplayed. The emotional line is not described very much, and the progress is slow. However, the author's superb writing style makes up for these shortcomings. The description is delicate and it is very comfortable to read. The male protagonist goes down the mountain to experience the world of mortals. The author really allows readers to experience the feeling with the male protagonist. I rarely write a book review after reading a book for so long, but this book is indeed excellent now. Although I also have the selfish intention of reading about changing marriage, it is a pity that this book is about changing marriage. If it were about other themes, it would definitely be many times more popular. Maybe many people would just leave after seeing the changing marriage in the introduction.

There is only one small problem. He was sweating when cutting bamboo in Chapter 9, and he moved it very easily when moving iron tools. So far, it seems that this small problem is not mindless. This book is very daily, and the character of the child is also written realistically. Yes, you can really see this image of the child Gou'er in your childhood. He is mean but kind-hearted. This is how I see it. I know why some people come, but regardless of the emotional line of the male and female protagonists, it is a very good novel in terms of characters, environment, and events. Everything comes naturally, unlike many other novels in this genre that forcefully shove something into your mouth and forcefully advance the plot.

This book is particularly beautiful, with rich and diverse content, ups and downs of the plot that captivates people's hearts, and deep thoughts that are thought-provoking. The text is beautiful and smooth, and the reading experience is good. It is a masterpiece worth reading again and again.

General comments: The writing and plot are acceptable. This novel is still growing. It is not considered a fairy grass, but it can be described as fine chaff. The author has his own ideas. This novel is not like the fixed-style novels about immortality and marriage. To be accurate, it is a slow-cooked fairy novel. It is suitable for readers who like to read slowly and slowly. This novel is not suitable if you just want to see the emotional development of the changed marriage. This novel gave me the feeling that the emotional line of the changed marriage is not the main body, but the fairy tale plot is the main body, and the emotional line of the changed marriage runs through it. Generally speaking, the characteristics of this novel are quite distinctive, and it is different from most of the novels about changing marriages. The writing skills are also good, and it can be regarded as fine grain. The only fly in the ointment is that because this novel is slow-paced, and it's about a fairy getting married, there is currently no obvious progress between the male and female protagonists. Even the male protagonist has been in the middle stage of foundation building since the beginning, and now the latest chapter, which has 300,000 words, is still in the middle stage of foundation building. The plot has just finished the first chapter [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] This is also a common problem in all slow-paced immortality or immortality novels, because the length is very long, and there is no obvious progress in plot and cultivation before a certain number of words. This novel currently has 300,000 words and is still in its infancy in terms of plot progress... Come on, author, maybe you can stick to it until the end and the popularity will gradually increase as the plot develops.

I went to the niche track of Tomato to withdraw money. This is a double-subject article. After reading around the comments, I concluded that most of them have been on tomatoes for too long and have no taste for stone. Normal people, don't be misled. This is a normal development of a long-term novel with two protagonists. Other articles are frantically pulled online later. This is definitely not the case. I hope the author can write a longer one.

The writing is particularly good. The author is very attentive to the portrayal of each small character, making each small character seem to be resurrected. The ancient flavor is also very strong. It is super friendly for someone like me who relies heavily on ancient style.

The author's writing style is good, the article has a purpose, and the protagonist is not a common peerless genius. But I personally feel that some places don't need to be so specific, as it will make people impatient after reading too much, so the details must be appropriate and the narrative omitted. Come on! Look after you!