Reincarnation Without a Job, Plug-In to Make Enough Food and Clothing by Oneself

In fact, I think the writing is pretty good, but there are many female protagonists in the label, but not all the three primary colors are included. In fact, I feel that if not, you can mark it.

There are no shortcomings except for being a bit bookish sometimes. For example, the protagonist clearly engraved the name of the forger on the magic sword, but every time he was surprised that others knew who forged it. Another example is that the protagonist is different from Rudy. Even though he knew that his family members were involved in the transfer incident, he still spent two months in the library maze unhurriedly. In the end, he wrote a plot about dreaming about his family members, which seemed to be both sentimental and ungrateful. Although he is a time traveler who has read the original plot and knows that his family will be fine, are he really not afraid of the butterfly effect caused by humans and gods seeing him? Old Rudy's experience is vivid in his mind. Finally, if you are writing a fanfic, it is better to deviate from the main plot and write it shorter. The current progress is that two original characters are adventurers in the Demonic Continent. It feels like it has become an original novel [laughing and crying] Overall, the flaws are not hidden, it looks great, I urge you to update it!

Overall it's okay! (After all, there is a shortage of books) But I feel like there are some problems [thinking] 1. It's okay to expose myself in Chapter 12, but at least I exposed myself more clearly. It feels a bit confusing. For example, further strengthening the relationship with the original protagonist. 2. And make defensive talismans (why not give one to everyone) 3. We all knew there would be a big transfer, so why didn't we inform in advance? (Even if they don't believe it, they can still make some preparations in advance) 4. The big transfer happened, and I didn't worry about my loved ones at all (even if I knew the plot, I would still worry about the butterfly effect?). I feel that the main reason for the above problem is that the author may not have adopted the perspective of the protagonist. It's written from God's perspective.

Delicious, here is the big transfer. It is obvious that the protagonist is secretly determined to protect the family and rewrite the tragedy. At the critical moment, even if he is shameless, he should guard Janis and survive this dangerous big transfer. After all, the transfer to the maze becomes a curse. Even the Dragon God cannot reverse this process. Let's see how to save Janis later. At present, the protagonist has no role in the turning point. The transformation of everyone in the original work has not changed.

It's a very good book. Why are there so few reviews? It's obviously good to read more. Everyone should also comment on the author and give some suggestions [laughter]

A good new book. Other no-job fans can't read it, but I can read it this one.

The content is good, I look forward to the subsequent plot, but the updates are slow. I hope the author can stick to it. I really look forward to you.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that it has multiple female protagonists. I prefer no female protagonist, but it doesn't affect it.

I didn't look carefully before, but I only accepted blue fur. The author wishes you good luck. I'm leaving now.

Not bad, I hope there are Luo Qixi and Ai Xia as the heroines.

Just average, not outstanding, not ugly either

I feel that it is very interesting, one of the few good job-less articles

The writing is very beautiful. I just don't know why so few people read it. Dear author, don't give up.

My evaluation is that it looks good🤤🤤

Edible, you can look at it

It's not bad for a non-professional fan, the author is Sangbie Eunuch [please take a closer look]

The author is awesome. Although the front part is a bit similar to the original work, it still has many stories of his own.

Generally speaking, it's good. Just eat it.

Emmm, what do you say? It looks pretty good so far [eating melon]

There will be a plot about Ai Xia later. Remember to be nice to Ai Xia [crying] [crying] [crying] I hope Ai Xia can live for herself here [almost crying]

There is no cheating. The protagonist's strength is steadily improving and the writing is very detailed.

Who are the heroines of the author?

It's okay, the pace is slow, I'm not asking you to update slowly [angry]

Not bad, but why don't the fellow countrymen explain it?

It's the most delicious among the jobless ones.

Can it be completed?