Mushoku Tensei: The Reincarnated Magic Swordsman

In fact, I think the writing is pretty good, but there are many female protagonists in the label, but not all the three primary colors are included. In fact, I feel that if not, you can mark it.

There are no shortcomings except for being a bit bookish sometimes. For example, the protagonist clearly engraved the name of the forger on the magic sword, but every time he was surprised that others knew who forged it. Another example is that the protagonist is different from Rudy. Even though he knew that his family members were involved in the transfer incident, he still spent two months in the library maze unhurriedly. In the end, he wrote a plot about dreaming about his family members, which seemed to be both sentimental and ungrateful. Although he is a time traveler who has read the original plot and knows that his family will be fine, are he really not afraid of the butterfly effect caused by humans and gods seeing him? Old Rudy's experience is vivid in his mind. Finally, if you are writing a fanfic, it is better to deviate from the main plot and write it shorter. The current progress is that two original characters are adventurers in the Demonic Continent. It feels like it has become an original novel 😂 Overall, the flaws are not hidden, it looks great, I urge you to update it!

What a masterpiece. It's rare to see a non-professional fan of Ai Xia as the heroine. The writing is also excellent. The original characters are actually quite well written, and the plot is not obtrusive and the emotional foreshadowing is quite reasonable. The protagonist is not a mindless cheat, he has both fun and growth. The only shortcoming may be that the plot feels a bit clumsy. Since Luo Qixi is close to the protagonist, I can't figure out why the human god would find Rudy instead of the protagonist. Although the author's original plots are very good, such as the plot of Aisha in the Kingdom of Shillong after learning magic, and the original heroine's background and experience, they are all very reasonable. At the beginning, when I saw that the protagonist was adopted, I guessed that I would adopt Aisha. The author did a good job in solving the conflict between Lilia's teachings and ethics. The author must also love Xia Chu. I feel so happy to see so many scenes. Please keep it up, author ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Overall it's okay! (After all, there is a shortage of books) But I feel like there are some problems 🤔 1. It's okay to expose myself in Chapter 12, but at least I exposed myself more clearly. It feels a bit confusing. For example, further strengthening the relationship with the original protagonist. 2. And make defensive talismans (why not give one to everyone) 3. We all knew there would be a big transfer, so why didn't we inform in advance? (Even if they don't believe it, they can still make some preparations in advance) 4. The big transfer happened, and I didn't worry about my loved ones at all (even if I knew the plot, I would still worry about the butterfly effect?). I feel that the main reason for the above problem is that the author may not have adopted the perspective of the protagonist. It's written from God's perspective.

Delicious, here is the big transfer. It is obvious that the protagonist is secretly determined to protect the family and rewrite the tragedy. At the critical moment, even if he is shameless, he should guard Janis and survive this dangerous big transfer. After all, the transfer to the maze becomes a curse. Even the Dragon God cannot reverse this process. Let's see how to save Janis later. At present, the protagonist has no role in the turning point. The transformation of everyone in the original work has not changed.

It's a very good book. Why are there so few reviews? It's obviously good to read more. Everyone should also comment on the author and give some suggestions [laughter]

The author is awesome. Although the front part is a bit similar to the original work, it still has many stories of his own.

The writing is very good, but it's a pity that it has multiple female protagonists. I prefer no female protagonist, but it doesn't affect it.

A good new book. Other no-job fans can't read it, but I can read it this one.

The content is good, I look forward to the subsequent plot, but the updates are slow. I hope the author can stick to it. I really look forward to you.