Wasn't This Supposed to Be a Warhammer Power Fantasy?

Everyone, please feel free to eat. 🍅This is an extremely rare T0-level Midnight Lord novel. The writing is passable and smooth, the plot has just the right ups and downs, and the writing is not laggy. It seems that there are no ooc surprises at the moment. I think the only shortcoming is that the protagonist Carl is killed by several evil gods at the same time. The reasons for watching and blessing at the same time are a bit inexplicable, and the explanation is relatively vague, but I believe the author will explain it later in the setting. Apart from this, other parts are very good - highly recommended by a hard-core bookworm who has read nearly 3,000 hours on Tomato👍 Alas, I was looking forward to it so much. The writing was very good, but suddenly it stopped. It's so uncomfortable [face covering]

It's well written and has a Hammer flavor, much better than the mindless Save Warhammer. There are not many dark spots at the moment, and the foreshadowing is good and smooth. The disadvantage is that the plot is relatively smooth, without many ups and downs, but overall the logic and setting are passable. It is recommended to practice group portraits and write more about the growth and redemption of mortals, so that you can take a dark style. I think he is a new author who has great potential and room for improvement and deserves encouragement. I think one of the possible lightning points is that choosing the five gods together may cause the protagonist to be too invincible, miss the growth, and make the plot difficult to develop. I can only say that there are fewer and fewer people writing articles with their brains. If there is a will, I hope the author can grow up.

It seems very interesting so far. The description of the immoral side of the empire is very realistic and the writing is passable. However, the score should not be too high. After all, tomatoes are brown and orange per capita. Chaos novels are generally given low scores for no reason.

I have a question for the author. Are those gene seeds used to transform new recruits but failed to be scrapped? Doesn't a Space Marine only produce a new gene-seed? Then if the success rate of transformation is less than 50%, and the failed gene seeds are scrapped, plus some battle damage, wouldn't the number of gene seeds become less and less?

The writing is very good, but it is recommended that before and after the protagonist shows his repair ability, add a Toton who knows that the protagonist has a little secret, but doesn't care. Otherwise, it feels a bit strange, as if Totten accepted that the protagonist has special knowledge, but did not notice anything unusual.

I'll give it five stars just for this standpoint. It's very upright. Many articles begin with the filial son of the empire. I put myself in the shoes of the protagonist. It's up to me to decide whether or not I want to die. If you recruit soldiers, you'll be willing to die. Why do you always have to choose between shitholes instead of becoming Nanook?

It's very good. There is no inexplicable deflation or the tackiness of street gangsters. The protagonist in the author's works is very vivid.

Good product, great, no love, good writing, but too little [almost crying]

No, I finally found a Warhammer that suits my taste, why did it end like this?

A person disappears 24 times a day. As a reward, you get 8 hours of sleep, 2 hours of entertainment, 8 hours of salary, and 1 and a half hours of meal time. You should still have 4 and a half hours to write a novel. If you are allowed to spend an hour collecting inspiration, you should also have 3 and a half hours to write, one second. One minute is 60 words, and one hour is 3,600 words. You should be able to write 12,600 words in 3 and a half hours, so it is not a problem to publish two chapters and three chapters in one day on working days. On rest days, you have 12 hours to write, so you should publish 10 to 12 chapters on rest days. The update was so slow that I saw the update reminder button, which really disappointed me [laughs]