Delta: Are You a Legal Operator?

Okay, okay, great. In addition, I think if there is a cute character who meets the boss, some interaction buttons can be added to hold him up and interact, or some third-person perspective descriptions of other people facing the protagonist's skills, so that the look and feel can be optimized a lot [thinking] [laughing]

I was undoubtedly excited to see such a rich novel.

It can be seen that the author has some writing skills, but some parts feel very or even 90% green, and even some details are not well written. However, the plot is quite normal so far, and the protagonist is currently well-written. At least he does not make a common mistake like many protagonists of live-streaming novels who love to exaggerate and forget their roots. That is exaggeration for the sake of exaggeration, making millions for the first time, and then immediately cutting off their original identities as soon as they get rich. They even like to cynicize some of the sponsors and do not treat people as human beings. I don't even think that you would be better off without the support of the system and the early sponsors. When you are full, you pick up the bowl and scold your mother and say yes. Those who don't know think that they are reading some kind of fairy tale instead of urban novels. The protagonist still knows to be careful about his words and deeds. It can also be seen from some content that the author should have done live broadcasts and been a "captain" and "financier". Combine some confirmed facts to change some interesting plots, and find ways to improve some new game character ability settings. It doesn't matter if the love line is not too outrageous or even if you don't have one, as long as you can handle the plot. The most important thing is that you must not follow the common mistakes of those live broadcasts, such as the treasure appraisal live broadcast at the beginning, and then I will give you a battle between cultivators, I will give you a battle between superpowers, I will give you a fantasy walk, and then you will be arbitrary for eternity... Guess what everyone wants to watch the live stream, the interesting content of the live stream, not everyone can like that set, basically it is either unfinished or cut off halfway. What you write is okay, keep up the good work

It's a good topic to read as a fun article. I personally suggest that the author should not just write about emotional lines in real situations. The reading is very low. You can write about other things. For example, you can also write about real-life cheating. There are also props and fixed cards, but I haven't seen any use for them. If you don't have any ideas, you can read the comment area. I thought of one that can integrate red pills into one game and lead two people to help the poor.

After that, you can draw some characters from Warhammer 40K, such as the green-skinned boss. In short, all races in the Warhammer world can be drawn and transferred to skills. The skills are described according to their background stories. For example, the green-skinned boss has a passive skill that can summon his younger brother to make a huge sound. After the battle, he can summon the green-skinned boy. If anyone comments under my comment what characteristics and skills are used by sports Warhammer characters, please comment and write in more detail. You must write out the names of each skill and each old creature's characteristics so that we can know each skill and each characteristic. The author of this drawing can see our comments on all character races in Warhammer 40K.

This savage is a demon, a demon.

It's a very interesting book, I hope it won't be discontinued. You can watch it

Although the cheating is not authentic, this book is quite interesting. It's mainly a spoof, quite funny. If you are beaten to death, at least you will be compensated, so you can protect yourself.

I am undoubtedly excited to see the new plot The front is undoubtedly good-looking, but the back is undoubtedly not good [laughing and crying]

It's indeed a blessing, author, come on

A rare good book

Let me go. I had thought about this type of novel when I was in math class before. I didn't expect that there were like-minded people666

I don't understand the characters in niche games, such as Lao Zu

It looks good, I love reading it, and I write more. It makes me happy to see

It's so beautiful, the author is still working steadily

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Very interesting, it counts as food and fodder

It looks good. I love watching it. Please order more.

It looks good, come on author (ง ˙o˙)ว

It's pretty and interesting.

Assad normalizes

Can you write about Lord Grim?

Listen to me, when facing this kind of wood, you have to go straight up

I just want to talk about why there are so few chapters [crying]

Oops, no, I'm laughing so hard, hahahahahahahaha, it's so much fun

It feels good, CC is also pretty good [I learned it]

I felt warm after watching the corpse. It turned out that the god fell into the sacred place.

Will the author consider joining the sharpshooter profession in DNF? You can also add characters and weapons from other gun games.

It's okay, but some characters have had their values ​​​​cut, such as Kai. Level 1 Kai has thousands of health points, and the damage of his skill is also quite high (if the opponent only has 100 health points), they have also been cut.

It looks great, but can it be updated faster, with more content and less daily content? By the way, are there any similar novels?