HP: the Sister of the Black Family

What impressed me most about this book was the background of the heroine. She is not the kind of cold and distant savior who stands on a high place and looks down on everyone. She likes to watch the fun and occasionally messes up, but every time she reaches out to pull someone, you can feel that she is using her little advantage of "knowing the ending" to desperately pull back, trying to pull everyone out of the established track. And she herself is also in this process, turning from an "outsider" to an "insider" bit by bit. She works hard to change the fate of others, but forgets that she is also part of the fate. The whole story is not a Shuangwen-style "I can do anything", but "I am betting that these people deserve to be changed." This way of writing that dissolves the heaviness into lightness gives her heartthrob line, career line, and friendship line more solid emotional support. You will really hope that she wins, and you also hope that those who care about her can accompany her to the end.

It's really amazing! Men see their menstruation, and women see their nerves. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. She is so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. She is so handsome that tears flow from the corners of her mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. She is so handsome. It was God and it was my rose that illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so handsome that I shed tears. From now on, the world is no longer short of water! Y(^_^)Y

Oh, let me go, you are so young and beautiful [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen] Next, I will use the most direct, the most truthful, the least roundabout, the most heart-breaking, the most hard-core, the most straightforward, the least ink, the most poignant, the most ruthless, the most to the point, the most straight to the point, The most straightforward, the least foreshadowing, the least polite, the least sensational, the least nonsense, the least roundabout, the least obtrusive, the least pretentious, the least pretentious, the least long-winded, the least procrastinating, the least tactful, the least disguised, the least hidden, the most straightforward, the most explicit, the most real, and the most understandable Transparent, the most vicious, the most refreshing, the most refreshing, the most superior, the most powerful, the most enjoyable, the roughest, the most effective, the most ruthless, the most accurate, the most stable, the most absolute, the most explosive, the toughest, the fiercest, the sassiest, the most reckless, the most aggressive, the fiercest, the most hard-core, the most vigorous, the wildest, the most straightforward, the most brutal , the least talkative, the least cliché, the least formal, the least fussy, the most practical, the most focused, the most results-oriented, and the most focused on key points, let me tell you: This is completely from a fairy [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration] [Shy]

Let me put it bluntly, this is a fairy product, do you understand? ![Adoration] The writing is smooth! Each character is very distinct, with very few and almost no occ!!! Perfect!! Don't think I am commenting blindly, you can tell by looking at my bookshelf, I have read a lot of HP articles, and the more female lovers there are, the more impressive they become!!! [Blowing a kiss] The author is a god!!!!!

It's really beautiful. The setting I came across recently, I didn't expect to see it here. Vera: If you are right, I will take your last name. Porter: (What? If Vera wants to marry me, is it going too fast [shy]) This kind of misunderstanding is really interesting [blowing kiss]

(Die Jia: I don't mean to find fault, because I really like this book, and I don't really want to abandon it, but it's really bland😭) We are currently in Chapter 45. The author is great. I came in after reading the introduction. I like the introduction of this book very much. But isn't this book too flat? There is no night outing that I am most looking forward to😭Although the heroine is a Slytherin, it is very likely that she will not go on a night outing with her, but it is okay to let Potter and Sirius share their night outing experiences with the heroine😭And I don't think they can be so honest, especially this Potter. Overall, it feels like there is no plot at all. I don't think the heroine is a cold person, but overall she gives me the feeling that she is actually quite cold... Can you add more sentences describing expressions and change the sentence patterns? You can also have psychological descriptions, there is no need to tell them all😭 What gives me the best feeling so far is the three extra chapters that Harry passed through. It's also too full. It feels like everything is full. Even the information after the necklace is warmed up a bit is given to us. It's not exciting😭😭😭Currently there is only a little description of the Potions class with Severus, which is not enough. I want to see the heroine show off her talents in all classes🥲

As the author of this book, leave yourself a five-star review. The original intention of creating Vera was to write a different time-travel heroine. She holds the memory of the plot and tries her best to save the tragedy of her own era, but she is also alienated from the people around her. For every character in the story, I tried my best to retain the original background. Sirius, who is duplicitous and secretly jealous, Regulus, who is quiet and introverted, silently longs for Quidditch and follows him wholeheartedly, Snape, who becomes acquainted with Vera through potions and cherishes each other, and James's pure and warm affection, I I don't want to write an assembly-line plot of a heartthrob. Every heartbeat has a reason, and every relationship has been polished. Daily scenes such as the Quidditch game, the cold war in the corridor, and the potion debate are all small interactions carefully designed by me. I just want to describe the day and night on campus at Hogwarts, the shackles of a pure-blood family, and a group of boys and girls trapped in the era. Readers have a special fate to look forward to. I will open up an independent IF parallel timeline separately. The subsequent main line will continue to promote Vera's transformation, and various independent extra chapters will be dropped from time to time. Thank you for your willingness to enter this magical world. Five-star retention, and I hope to be seen by more people.

What a delicious article, the author writes it very well. I really like the heroine's character. Powerful, indifferent, with a hint of warmth. The writing is also very good! The story is also very heartwarming! Love you😘

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Overall, what I like most is that the heroine loves herself most, and she doesn't sacrifice herself to save others. Help will be given, but the degree of control is very good. It seems like watching the heroine fight with Voldemort using top-notch cards. There are too few fighting scenes.

Fa az we won! I bought the cold 🥰 I'm a little confused 🥺 I'm a little drunk 😆 I bought the cold 🤗 I'm a little confused 😛 I'm a little tired 😩 I bought the cold 😘 I'm a little confused 😉 I'm sleepy 😥 I bought the cold 🤨 I'm a little drunk 😭 I want to sleep 😏 I'm tired😡😫 When I see you🤒try your best to stay awake😇

It's a very, very good book. I like it very much. I love you so much. I love you so much. I don't know why. This book is not very popular. I hope it will become popular in the future. The content is very good. You can leave more comments. I am very active.

The current plot has completely attracted me. It has that kind of campus style, plus a little humor, and I feel that it depicts the emotions of young people very well. I have been out of the book for a long time, and I accidentally clicked on it and found it so good😋. The heroine is very easy to interact with everyone. The author is like a god🥰🥰

The writing style is light and there are few particularly conflicting plots. The days are warm and everything is getting better.

It's super nice, super nice. The content is so sweet that my lips never dropped during the whole process [Adoration]

The writing is delicate, the heroine's character is outstanding, neither enthusiastic nor cold, overall it's good

It is the most heartwarming and beautiful among the many HP articles I have read [Adoration]

So far, it's very heartwarming, nothing sadistic about it, it's a baby novel, very good-looking, but not enough, so I give it a five-star rating.

Simply shockingly delicious! ! ! [Adoration] Finally, I would like to add that the author is great, come on, believe me, based on my judgment over many years, this book will definitely be popular! (Come from old bookworm)

Really super pretty

The author's writing is very good and the atmosphere in the comment area is very good

So delicious! ! ! It's not OOC at all, it's nice to watch, good luck to the author! ! !

Very nice! The heroine's mood is super stable, so nice🙀It feels so good!

Looks good, keep updating ❤️

Not much to say, just watch for yourself [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's okay. I feel like the whole text is light. If it's light, it will go smoothly.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

This is so cool! ! ! Baby Vera is very gentle. She heals everyone in this way. All the emotional lines feel smooth and warm. I like Riddle's crazy character more. It's so touching.

Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, I like it.

Look good, look good It's so cool, it's so beautiful, I went and checked my phone to see if it was out of battery [lick the screen]