Girl Band: Youth and Smile Forbidden

I enjoyed reading it. Although there are flaws, such as the arranger of the C group is Xiangzi, the book is written about Lixi during the Go group, and the lamp can actually talk normally without being nervous, and there are some minor problems, but this is still a good book worth savoring. Anyway, I am full.

The first five-star review of this book was my own 55. The book is updated with 6 to 9k words per day on a steady basis. I try my best to write every emotional line well! In the beginning, the tempo was indeed a bit too fast and the writing structure was a bit scattered, but it gradually got better (right?). I tried my best to write each song including the instrumental score and word analysis! Daily update of 6k ~ 20,000 words ~ I did it ~ Up to now, the update has been for 43 consecutive days! Guaranteed daily update of 6k words! The highest number is 20,000 words per day! On average, 8k words are updated every day!

Let's talk about the conclusion first: undoubtedly A+. Let's talk about the reasons ① The author himself is a nuclear-powered donkey, and he writes seven to eight thousand words every day, and occasionally he can write big chapters like fifteen thousand or fourteen thousand. ②The author himself listened to the advice and has been reading the opinions in the comment area. I added him to the bookshelf very early. To be honest, the initial experience was a bit OOC, but by the time I read it for the second time, the author had refined it and the reading was as smooth as Dove. ③The author's writing style is relatively beautiful, but it doesn't make people feel very literary and young when reading it. Everyone is saying that it is a bit like youth pain literature, but I personally think it is just right. ④The author's narrative is relatively smooth, things are orderly, and a certain amount of daily life can be interspersed in the middle to enrich the characters. It can lay a lot of foreshadowing, and the emotional climax is also very enjoyable (as expected, the band needs to use music to solve the problem). The remaining comments are for the author: after reading the latest one, the secondary transformation of the character's personality is inevitable and necessary for the story. It will not be particularly awkward to read. However, I still hope that the character's personality can be sublimated more quickly. I hope that more foreshadowing can be laid when dealing with the problem of group C, which will also facilitate subsequent creation. Overall it's very good to read, but the author has been quite conservative with his recruitment, currently only four, and Momoka may not even be fully counted, which may be a good thing for some people, having more experience to develop characters, but I am a bloodthirsty reader [Adore], and I can't wait to see our Lao Che get entangled. The author has a degree to the core of many characters. He also has something to say in the comment area or the author. Like Hongxia and Kita, they all have cores. When will they be brought out (sad~). Finally, I wish Lao Dashu can have more readers and be healthy. ♡ ᒪ∅ᐯᕮ ♡

In Girl Band, the description of the emotional line is top-notch, and it jumps out of the original work. Nowadays, when writing about Girl Band, they follow the plot step by step. It feels like a suspension bridge effect, but this book is definitely well written. It jumps out of the plot but does not deviate from their awkward characters. It is very good.

Delicious and delicious😋The portion is large and filling, but the first 30 chapters are a bit too literary. Although they have been changed, they still have a bit of a literary flavor, but it is still acceptable. Deng Deng's character is a bit OOC? At the front, I don't know if it's my imagination, but it's harmless. The writing is still very good, and the slowed down pace later is even better. It's a band article worth reading😋 It's been a long time since I've had a band article. Come on, I feel like it can still be seen by more people [Blow kiss]

First of all, let's take a look at my personal feelings. The author seems to want to create a melancholy atmosphere (I don't know how to describe it specifically), which personally feels weird to me. The word "literary youth" comes to mind (I have only a limited understanding of this word, so it may be wrong)

I'm still listening to the book, and a friend recommended that I come to Yangshizi to check it out. It's pretty good so far, right? Ordinary people don't start out as chaebols, at least they are serious about writing songs and running a band. The pace is a bit tight in the early stage, and there are a lot of characters, but it doesn't matter. I think it's just a matter of taking care of it later. Well, it's not bad. In July, it's like 10,000 updates a day.

The previous writing is indeed not very attractive, and the author is also very active, and he will refer to it if he has any opinions. However, as the author's writing skills improve, it gradually improves and gets better. Generally speaking, it is okay.

I haven't caught up on the latest yet, but for now I think the characters are close to each other and are very good. The male protagonist's background story and personality are quite good. Each chapter is quite long and enjoyable. The game also likes to be interactive, so I'd like to be a generous investor.

It's a very good book. It's very filling.

Although your routines are a bit formulaic, the good feelings plot and detailed descriptions make up for this. Too fast development of the love line is a problem, but the writing style, description method and the content of the good feelings plot are indeed quite unique.

I like it, it's great, the author's writing is really good, I want to match the author with [adoration][adoration][adoration] This is one of the many band books I've read, and it's one of the very few that Pochijiang has to eat first. It's so rare [Adoration]. The emotional descriptions are very delicate, and the author is also very generous. After reading it in one sitting, the male protagonist is portrayed very well. What I like most is the different positioning the author gives to each female protagonist. Ryo, Pachi, and Nina are all my favorite female characters. They are all written so well [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]. The best work in Tomato Band's book[lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

It's very delicious [savour it carefully] Comment in five words [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I don't know what to say [laughs evilly]

Articles that are more responsive to radio waves, please come on the author [exploration]

Very good! It turns out that the main plot is Porchi's victory [][][] I really wronged you. The author [][][]

The emotional description is very delicate, the writing style is also very good, and the song quality is also very good. I like it very much [blowing kiss]

Very good novel, made my mind spin wildly

It's very well written. It's a relatively detailed book about the band. The protagonist is not annoying. Overall, it's a very good book.

It feels okay... (A bit like AI...)

It's really enjoyable to watch! The author has ideas [Like]

There are so many characters, and I really like everyone's spirit and attitude in making music.

I was really moved by the friendship and dreams inside.

It's a book that suits my taste, and the pace is quite fast [][][]

Getting better and better It is developing steadily, has its own plot, and has an average of 10,000 words per chapter. It is updated steadily, which is also good food.

I'm full, invincible

It's beautiful and you wrote it well! ! !

Very good, I'm full

Yes, the author is a living person

Greatness needs no words