[Stealing fanfic with two male protagonists, CP black blind man + chaotic timeline + extremely OOC + extremely poor writing + all members are evil + extremely slow progress] + [The cheat is a cute and reliable system 19]
[Supplement: Maybe not very friendly to Jiumen, lots of conspiracy theories]
Qiu Su'an felt that sometimes God couldn't understand people's words. For example, he wanted to ask God to let him go, not to ask God to let him go!
Qiu Su'an, the unlucky guy who died suddenly while staying up late at home, looked at the system in front of him and cried without tears.
Bad news: he's dead
Good news: A system called Daily Flow 19 took the initiative to come to your door to bind.
Bad news: I'll have to keep digging notes from now on
The worse news was that he was stabbed in the back by his boss as soon as he took on a mission, causing his brain to twitch and he died again.
In Nineteen's indignant eyes, Qiu Su'an... Qiu Su'an was also puzzled: How do I switch back and forth between daily flow and combat fun? Do you have any clue about the system?
Nineteen: I also want to ask you how you changed from a Gu Master to an Evil God!
The black blind man who didn't know that they were all quarreling smiled and said nothing at the dumb and accusing gaze, hehe, who made his brother love him so much?
Reader comments
A surprising work that rekindled my confidence in Heiye fandom. It deserves a long review to celebrate [shy][shy].
To be honest, I have read too many of Hei Ye's articles, but most of them can't escape those stereotypes: beautiful and strong, stingy, shameless, haunted by female ghosts, all kinds of bankrupts... It seems that an old guy who has lived for hundreds of years has only these few labels to write. If you watch too much, you will really get bored.
I almost missed this article initially. One is because it is not directly labeled as "Little Notes fan", and the other is that many people in the comment area said it was a "nanny article" and said, "Even Hei Ye's parents were saved, that's too much." But because I was really short on books, I clicked in anyway.
After looking at the results, I just want to say: Dada, what a fucking genius.
Let's talk about the character Hei Ye first. The original work doesn't really portray him much. We all know that he is a noble man from the sky. Once he was crushed into mud, he crawled out of the mire and eventually became one of the two poles on the road, "blind in the south and mute in the north". But what happened in the middle? Those struggles, transformations, brokenness and reshaping have always been filled by fan authors. The most touching thing about this article is that it truly describes the growth trajectory of Hei Ye - currently he is still the innocent little prince, like an ignorant little milk dog who has just learned to show his teeth, but because of the support of the protagonist, you can clearly see the foreshadowing of his transformation step by step. Especially the marriage letter, the kind of growth is really fascinating.
He is not the lone wolf in the original book who plays with the world from the beginning, nor is he the tragic stumble seen in many fans. Instead, after being properly caught, he has the hope of growing into a real jungle wolf king. This sense of "happening" growth is more powerful than writing a finished product directly.
Let's talk about the protagonist. I'm really annoyed by the kind of "redeemer" who obviously accepts the task and gets the reward, but still has all kinds of pretentiousness, pickiness, and high-handedness to point fingers. The protagonist of this article is completely different. He is not a born virgin or a redeemer, but a person who works down-to-earth - if the system asks him to give Hei Ye the truth, then he will take the task seriously and do it well; no matter what identity or golden finger the system gives him, even if he is not even a human being, he will accept it calmly and complete the task in a down-to-earth manner. This kind of "qualified cow and horse" attitude makes people feel that this is true respect: not condescending pity, but accompanying and fulfilling through actions.
For those comments that said this was a "nanny article", I think they didn't understand the article at all, nor did they seriously feel the thickness of Hei Ye written by Dada. Not all redemptions have to be written in a substitutionary way, and not all help has to come with a sense of superiority like "I know your future." This article does not have that kind of arrogance in the bones, but uses a level-headed gaze to explore the deep charm and scars of the original characters.
All in all, this is the most satisfying one among all the fanfics about Hei Ye that I have read so far. Recommended to friends who are also tired of routine fandom.
Finally, I'm really looking forward to Zhang Qiling's chapter. I believe the flow of inspiration will definitely surprise me. Refill.
As of now, the type of this article is a nanny article (I don't know if it will change in the later development, such as torturing the original protagonist). It is not recommended to read the protagonist who is controlled and controlled.
When I first read the synopsis, I thought that Mengnvwen was meant to be a sweet love story that focused on normal feelings, but later I discovered that this article was more of a one-sided nanny story (no irony meant, everyone has their own favorite genre). The protagonist is a very typical giving personality, giving all kinds of things and sleeping with him (the key point is that after giving a lot of things, the protagonist still feels very humble, which makes it a bit difficult for people - mainly the protagonist to control). Of course, the protagonist has also done some small counterattacks, but It feels like washing underwear with a cold face (?). In contrast, the original protagonist Hei Xiazi did not give anything that I think is equivalent, such as substantial help or a contract that can restrain himself. He only gave me sweet words that were not painful or itchy. Of course, from this point of view, I think it makes sense to create the image of the black blind man. After all, he is not a good person to begin with. He is ruthless, heartless, unreasonable, and pretends to be selfish (as far as this article is concerned. Because the personal emotional color may lead to a biased evaluation, please forgive me).
Of course, if you don't mind this, I think you can still read it. The author's writing style is quite good.
The above are all personal opinions, I hope everyone enjoys reading the article!
The overall feeling for me is that it is leisurely and relaxed, not very dull or very exciting (I just watched it, not much), and it depicts the protagonist's life quite well. The subject matter of this book is very novel, and it seems to have jumped out of the strange circle of pen-stealing fan circles. This book does not make people entangled in force, traps, etc. Hei lived in Germany. When I saw someone saying it was like a nanny article, I felt like I was living with my family, and I felt very relaxed while reading it. Overall, it's sweet, but I'm not someone who is very receptive to non-fixed CP. . . While I was struggling with whether to have a fixed CP, I also felt that it was rare to see such a good-looking book. I am Hei Ye's only fan, so I am a little worried about it, and at the same time I am also looking forward to what the next world will be like. The two babies getting along made me super happy, and it was very sweet. However, some of the dialogues between the protagonist and the system made me feel that the protagonist was just doing the task. Most of them are progressing very fast, and the stereotype is that they are cheap people who can do anything as long as they are given money. There is also a part that is just torture for the sake of torture, portraying Hei Ye as being able to do anything. I was very angry when I saw those articles. This book has relatively few clear works in it, and it is rare that it was written from the late Qing Dynasty. (I went to other places and talked a bit too much (´∧｀) I am a bit wordy when writing book reviews) I really like it and overall I recommend it.
The author was very obedient and kept replying to me when I asked questions, which surprised me. The atmosphere in the book circle is great 🤤 They all have fixed CPs. I hope the protagonist also has a few friends or family members. When I saw Abu and Eji arriving at the village, and when I saw them getting along with Mr. Hei, I always felt that the protagonist was a little lonely. I hope some friends will come
It's a fairy product! Most of the mainstream fandoms that steal pens are at the beginning of the plot. The timeline of studying abroad is really very small. It will be novel and bright. I also saved Blind Blind's parents. Are you so doted on Blind Blind? It is also too good for Blind Blind. I am really looking forward to the following tasks.
[Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it] This is an imaginative work that contrasts the "flow of life" and the "stealing fandom". It completely does not follow the routine of conventional adventure writing. The most interesting part is that the self-positioning is extremely candid. The author directly wrote "extremely OOC, extremely poor writing, all staff are evil, and extremely slow progress" into the introduction, which has become the most distinctive style label. The interaction between the cute and reliable System Nineteen and the unlucky protagonist Qiu Su'an is full of contrasting cuteness. The scenes where one person dominates and fights against each other in daily life are full of laughter, and the sense of separation between "daily flow" and "combat excitement" is uniquely interesting.
The story jumps out of the main adventure line of the original work and uses a chaotic timeline to reconstruct the worldview of the Nine Gates. A large number of conspiracy theory settings directly break the traditional Nine Gates filter. Characters such as Black Blind Man and Zhang Qiling break out of their inherent labels. Qiu Suan's growth path from an ordinary social animal who died suddenly to a Gu Master and then to an evil god is ridiculous.
As a fan work that focuses on self-entertainment, it does not pursue a high degree of restoration of the original work. Instead, it uses free imagination and vivid character interactions to provide a new reading experience that completely escapes the oppressive feeling of the original work. It is a niche treasure for book lovers who like Heixiazi fan fiction and prefer evil ideas. Looking forward to the follow-up [Sending Hearts]
The writing is very good, I like it very much, thank you to the author!
I see that I really like the pairing of the protagonist and the system. I want to see the protagonist appear more, although the plot needs to change the perspective and develop in multiple lines.
I can understand that the protagonist will have to pay a little more for the first time to do the task, but it still feels a bit unequal (the protagonist is also acting in order to complete the task). I don't want to see the protagonist suffer hardship and abuse, but there are few protagonists who are not miserable, and the background of the era is there. If this unit doesn't develop to the point where the protagonist has to endure more damage than the original character, you should still watch it. No matter which character has a skill that can bear damage (some fan protagonists are constantly being tortured and miserably, which is a bit annoying).
If failing the mission is a bit too painful, the current development feels like it can have a good outcome. I hope Su An's mission is successfully completed and I'm looking forward to the follow-up missions.
It's rare to see such a unique style of Pirates fanfic, which doesn't take the hard-core route of killing and decisiveness, and has a unique life-stream player setting that is particularly eye-catching. The partner interaction between the protagonist Qiu Su'an and the system is very vividly written [send heart] [send heart], the rhythm of the plot is relaxed and moderate, the author's writing is smooth, and the group portraits are carefully portrayed without forcing the protagonist. It is very comfortable to watch. On the surface, the protagonist just lives his life casually, but in fact, every seemingly idle choice has a hidden plan, and the plot foreshadowing is very clever [you savor] [you savor]. The rhythm of the story is tight and appropriate, the tense mission crisis and the relaxed daily scenes switch naturally. The characters are delicately portrayed. The temperament of the original characters is well grasped. The suspense is layered. The deeper you go, the deeper the plot is. The more you taste, the more interesting it is.
The rice is so fragrant, refreshing and sweet! Why is the author so great? The narration is so logical, the writing is super good, the emotional lines are shocking and delicious, the system is a good system, the protagonist is a good protagonist, and the black blind is also a good black blind. It is really good to read, and it is a book that makes me happy. I recommend everyone to read it!
It's so beautiful. The various parallel world settings really hit my xp [angry] Xiaoqi is really blessed to have such a powerful and beautiful wife [crazy] Xiaoqiu is really a character design of a protagonist that I like very much. He always implements the light and everything will go smoothly. The system is also very good. It is a very benign partnership.
Looks beautiful, looks great, love watching it
It makes me happy, how can I be so beautiful?
I just want to comment on this fairy tale, people's hearts are so full of calculations!
It's so beautiful. How come the xp of the author and us overlap so much? Is this right? Hahahahahaha
I feel that Qiu is a super beauty who is gentle and generous to blind people. This character design is great. The portrayal of Zhang Qiling is also great.
Looking forward to updates from the author❤️
It's just that the title of the book is too abstract. I originally planned to read Fast Travel or Infinite Streaming? It's a life-player type article, and when I clicked in, I found out it was a tomb robbing fanfic.
Super beautiful🤩Thanks to the author٩(๑^o^๑)۶👍
I like this very much. I recommend it. I will follow the book. Come on, come on, come on.
Boss, Boss, the writing is great. When will we start the second unit? Excited heart, trembling hands.
It's beautiful and I love watching it, but the very bad thing is that it's not enough to watch👀
Oh my god, Hei Ye's fan fiction is so delicious [sending my heart]
Looks good, okay, okay
When you see someone getting married, leave a 5⭐️
Very delicious! There are cute emotional lines and plot lines, and the characters are well developed. The more you watch, the more comfortable you become. People who are cute will have a smooth career!
Wow, it looks beautiful, but it's five o'clock and I can't stand it anymore. See you again tomorrow
It's a fairy tale. It's interesting to see the reminder button. Why haven't more people discovered this treasure? [Crying] Could it be that the title of the book is not obvious?
Shocking and delicious, this is in line with the intelligence and methods that a family patriarch who has survived for so long should have.
It's very beautiful. The setting is very novel.
Has it become the only part of the black blind man? ! Will there be another main story about Zhang Qiling that I am so looking forward to? [Fear] @Chongyu
A surprising work that rekindled my confidence in Heiye fandom. It deserves a long review to celebrate [shy][shy]. To be honest, I have read too many of Hei Ye's articles, but most of them can't escape those stereotypes: beautiful and strong, stingy, shameless, haunted by female ghosts, all kinds of bankrupts... It seems that an old guy who has lived for hundreds of years has only these few labels to write. If you watch too much, you will really get bored. I almost missed this article initially. One is because it is not directly labeled as "Little Notes fan", and the other is that many people in the comment area said it was a "nanny article" and said, "Even Hei Ye's parents were saved, that's too much." But because I was really short on books, I clicked in anyway. After looking at the results, I just want to say: Dada, what a fucking genius. Let's talk about the character Hei Ye first. The original work doesn't really portray him much. We all know that he is a noble man from the sky. Once he was crushed into mud, he crawled out of the mire and eventually became one of the two poles on the road, "blind in the south and mute in the north". But what happened in the middle? Those struggles, transformations, brokenness and reshaping have always been filled by fan authors. The most touching thing about this article is that it truly describes the growth trajectory of Hei Ye - currently he is still the innocent little prince, like an ignorant little milk dog who has just learned to show his teeth, but because of the support of the protagonist, you can clearly see the foreshadowing of his transformation step by step. Especially the marriage letter, the kind of growth is really fascinating. He is not the lone wolf in the original book who plays with the world from the beginning, nor is he the tragic stumble seen in many fans. Instead, after being properly caught, he has the hope of growing into a real jungle wolf king. This sense of "happening" growth is more powerful than writing a finished product directly. Let's talk about the protagonist. I'm really annoyed by the kind of "redeemer" who obviously accepts the task and gets the reward, but still has all kinds of pretentiousness, pickiness, and high-handedness to point fingers. The protagonist of this article is completely different. He is not a born virgin or a redeemer, but a person who works down-to-earth - if the system asks him to give Hei Ye the truth, then he will take the task seriously and do it well; no matter what identity or golden finger the system gives him, even if he is not even a human being, he will accept it calmly and complete the task in a down-to-earth manner. This kind of "qualified cow and horse" attitude makes people feel that this is true respect: not condescending pity, but accompanying and fulfilling through actions. For those comments that said this was a "nanny article", I think they didn't understand the article at all, nor did they seriously feel the thickness of Hei Ye written by Dada. Not all redemptions have to be written in a substitutionary way, and not all help has to come with a sense of superiority like "I know your future." This article does not have that kind of arrogance in the bones, but uses a level-headed gaze to explore the deep charm and scars of the original characters. All in all, this is the most satisfying one among all the fanfics about Hei Ye that I have read so far. Recommended to friends who are also tired of routine fandom. Finally, I'm really looking forward to Zhang Qiling's chapter. I believe the flow of inspiration will definitely surprise me. Refill.
As of now, the type of this article is a nanny article (I don't know if it will change in the later development, such as torturing the original protagonist). It is not recommended to read the protagonist who is controlled and controlled. When I first read the synopsis, I thought that Mengnvwen was meant to be a sweet love story that focused on normal feelings, but later I discovered that this article was more of a one-sided nanny story (no irony meant, everyone has their own favorite genre). The protagonist is a very typical giving personality, giving all kinds of things and sleeping with him (the key point is that after giving a lot of things, the protagonist still feels very humble, which makes it a bit difficult for people - mainly the protagonist to control). Of course, the protagonist has also done some small counterattacks, but It feels like washing underwear with a cold face (?). In contrast, the original protagonist Hei Xiazi did not give anything that I think is equivalent, such as substantial help or a contract that can restrain himself. He only gave me sweet words that were not painful or itchy. Of course, from this point of view, I think it makes sense to create the image of the black blind man. After all, he is not a good person to begin with. He is ruthless, heartless, unreasonable, and pretends to be selfish (as far as this article is concerned. Because the personal emotional color may lead to a biased evaluation, please forgive me). Of course, if you don't mind this, I think you can still read it. The author's writing style is quite good. The above are all personal opinions, I hope everyone enjoys reading the article!
The overall feeling for me is that it is leisurely and relaxed, not very dull or very exciting (I just watched it, not much), and it depicts the protagonist's life quite well. The subject matter of this book is very novel, and it seems to have jumped out of the strange circle of pen-stealing fan circles. This book does not make people entangled in force, traps, etc. Hei lived in Germany. When I saw someone saying it was like a nanny article, I felt like I was living with my family, and I felt very relaxed while reading it. Overall, it's sweet, but I'm not someone who is very receptive to non-fixed CP. . . While I was struggling with whether to have a fixed CP, I also felt that it was rare to see such a good-looking book. I am Hei Ye's only fan, so I am a little worried about it, and at the same time I am also looking forward to what the next world will be like. The two babies getting along made me super happy, and it was very sweet. However, some of the dialogues between the protagonist and the system made me feel that the protagonist was just doing the task. Most of them are progressing very fast, and the stereotype is that they are cheap people who can do anything as long as they are given money. There is also a part that is just torture for the sake of torture, portraying Hei Ye as being able to do anything. I was very angry when I saw those articles. This book has relatively few clear works in it, and it is rare that it was written from the late Qing Dynasty. (I went to other places and talked a bit too much (´∧｀) I am a bit wordy when writing book reviews) I really like it and overall I recommend it. The author was very obedient and kept replying to me when I asked questions, which surprised me. The atmosphere in the book circle is great 🤤 They all have fixed CPs. I hope the protagonist also has a few friends or family members. When I saw Abu and Eji arriving at the village, and when I saw them getting along with Mr. Hei, I always felt that the protagonist was a little lonely. I hope some friends will come
It's a fairy product! Most of the mainstream fandoms that steal pens are at the beginning of the plot. The timeline of studying abroad is really very small. It will be novel and bright. I also saved Blind Blind's parents. Are you so doted on Blind Blind? It is also too good for Blind Blind. I am really looking forward to the following tasks.
[Personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it] This is an imaginative work that contrasts the "flow of life" and the "stealing fandom". It completely does not follow the routine of conventional adventure writing. The most interesting part is that the self-positioning is extremely candid. The author directly wrote "extremely OOC, extremely poor writing, all staff are evil, and extremely slow progress" into the introduction, which has become the most distinctive style label. The interaction between the cute and reliable System Nineteen and the unlucky protagonist Qiu Su'an is full of contrasting cuteness. The scenes where one person dominates and fights against each other in daily life are full of laughter, and the sense of separation between "daily flow" and "combat excitement" is uniquely interesting. The story jumps out of the main adventure line of the original work and uses a chaotic timeline to reconstruct the worldview of the Nine Gates. A large number of conspiracy theory settings directly break the traditional Nine Gates filter. Characters such as Black Blind Man and Zhang Qiling break out of their inherent labels. Qiu Suan's growth path from an ordinary social animal who died suddenly to a Gu Master and then to an evil god is ridiculous. As a fan work that focuses on self-entertainment, it does not pursue a high degree of restoration of the original work. Instead, it uses free imagination and vivid character interactions to provide a new reading experience that completely escapes the oppressive feeling of the original work. It is a niche treasure for book lovers who like Heixiazi fan fiction and prefer evil ideas. Looking forward to the follow-up [Sending Hearts]
The writing is very good, I like it very much, thank you to the author!
I see that I really like the pairing of the protagonist and the system. I want to see the protagonist appear more, although the plot needs to change the perspective and develop in multiple lines. I can understand that the protagonist will have to pay a little more for the first time to do the task, but it still feels a bit unequal (the protagonist is also acting in order to complete the task). I don't want to see the protagonist suffer hardship and abuse, but there are few protagonists who are not miserable, and the background of the era is there. If this unit doesn't develop to the point where the protagonist has to endure more damage than the original character, you should still watch it. No matter which character has a skill that can bear damage (some fan protagonists are constantly being tortured and miserably, which is a bit annoying). If failing the mission is a bit too painful, the current development feels like it can have a good outcome. I hope Su An's mission is successfully completed and I'm looking forward to the follow-up missions.
It's rare to see such a unique style of Pirates fanfic, which doesn't take the hard-core route of killing and decisiveness, and has a unique life-stream player setting that is particularly eye-catching. The partner interaction between the protagonist Qiu Su'an and the system is very vividly written [send heart] [send heart], the rhythm of the plot is relaxed and moderate, the author's writing is smooth, and the group portraits are carefully portrayed without forcing the protagonist. It is very comfortable to watch. On the surface, the protagonist just lives his life casually, but in fact, every seemingly idle choice has a hidden plan, and the plot foreshadowing is very clever [you savor] [you savor]. The rhythm of the story is tight and appropriate, the tense mission crisis and the relaxed daily scenes switch naturally. The characters are delicately portrayed. The temperament of the original characters is well grasped. The suspense is layered. The deeper you go, the deeper the plot is. The more you taste, the more interesting it is.
The rice is so fragrant, refreshing and sweet! Why is the author so great? The narration is so logical, the writing is super good, the emotional lines are shocking and delicious, the system is a good system, the protagonist is a good protagonist, and the black blind is also a good black blind. It is really good to read, and it is a book that makes me happy. I recommend everyone to read it!
It's so beautiful. The various parallel world settings really hit my xp [angry] Xiaoqi is really blessed to have such a powerful and beautiful wife [crazy] Xiaoqiu is really a character design of a protagonist that I like very much. He always implements the light and everything will go smoothly. The system is also very good. It is a very benign partnership.
Looks beautiful, looks great, love watching it
It makes me happy, how can I be so beautiful? I just want to comment on this fairy tale, people's hearts are so full of calculations!
It's so beautiful. How come the xp of the author and us overlap so much? Is this right? Hahahahahaha I feel that Qiu is a super beauty who is gentle and generous to blind people. This character design is great. The portrayal of Zhang Qiling is also great. Looking forward to updates from the author❤️ It's just that the title of the book is too abstract. I originally planned to read Fast Travel or Infinite Streaming? It's a life-player type article, and when I clicked in, I found out it was a tomb robbing fanfic.
Super beautiful🤩Thanks to the author٩(๑^o^๑)۶👍
I like this very much. I recommend it. I will follow the book. Come on, come on, come on.
Boss, Boss, the writing is great. When will we start the second unit? Excited heart, trembling hands.
It's beautiful and I love watching it, but the very bad thing is that it's not enough to watch👀
Oh my god, Hei Ye's fan fiction is so delicious [sending my heart]
Looks good, okay, okay
When you see someone getting married, leave a 5⭐️
Very delicious! There are cute emotional lines and plot lines, and the characters are well developed. The more you watch, the more comfortable you become. People who are cute will have a smooth career!
Wow, it looks beautiful, but it's five o'clock and I can't stand it anymore. See you again tomorrow
It's a fairy tale. It's interesting to see the reminder button. Why haven't more people discovered this treasure? [Crying] Could it be that the title of the book is not obvious?
Shocking and delicious, this is in line with the intelligence and methods that a family patriarch who has survived for so long should have.
It's very beautiful. The setting is very novel.
Has it become the only part of the black blind man? ! Will there be another main story about Zhang Qiling that I am so looking forward to? [Fear] @Chongyu
Very beautiful and well written
Beautiful, sweet writing
Big cheers for the author
Super, super, super, super beautiful! ! ! ! ! !