[Multiple heroines] [Campus beauties] [Tycoon] [Not a simp] [All heroines are adults] [Slow pace at first] [The fun really kicks off after college begins]
After finishing the gaokao, Chen Mo watches Douyin short videos of luxury mansions and supercars, feeling envious.
Just then, a voice suddenly rings out in his mind: “Ding! The Pleasure-Seeking Tycoon System has been activated.”
Every time Chen Mo indulges himself, he receives a reward. Winning over highly rated goddesses can also earn him mysterious rewards.
Chen Mo orders a cup of milk tea. “The Host is feeling happy and relaxed after drinking milk tea. A reward of 10,000 has been deposited into the Host’s bank account.”
He passes his driving test. “The Host is a Tycoon with a driver’s license but no personal car. Reward: one Ferrari SF90 sports car.”
Chen Mo takes in a petite livestreamer in white stockings. “The Host has taken in a top-tier goddess with a rating of 86. Reward: an 80% stake in Wuchou Media.”
And so begins his life of carefree Tycoon indulgence! When Chen Mo drives his Ferrari supercar to register at college, the female upperclassmen go wild.
Black-stockings big sisters, white-stocking cuties, aloof career women, sweet and innocent upperclassmen: I want them all!
(Novels these days are all fast-paced wish fulfillment, and they can easily raise readers’ pleasure threshold. This novel starts slowly, and only gets really exciting once college begins, to bring that threshold back down.)
(The protagonist will spend money on the heroines, but that doesn’t make him a simp. A simp gives without getting anything in return, but the protagonist’s generosity is always reciprocated. Besides, with the System, he’ll never run out of money, so he can do whatever feels good. If you don’t like this kind of plot, feel free to skip it.)
After reading Chapter 90, the following is my personal opinion. The writing is okay, the food is fast, and the author's driving skills are very good. This is a big advantage, but there are too many female protagonists. In fact, generally speaking, if you can write 10 female protagonists with multiple female protagonists, you are very good. There are only about 10 great authors in the genre of Guan Guan, Ji Cha and many female protagonists. Suggestion: Reduce the description of social interactions. After all, you have a system to give you the details. Describe more about enjoying daily life, beautiful college days, travel, daily descriptions such as the atmosphere of life and the quarrels between characters. If you can write daily life well, the book can be greatly improved. Not many female protagonists can make up for it. Small collisions like the first and second heroines, which do not affect the protagonist's interesting collisions, can retain more viewers. After all, urban reading is still about enjoying life and daily fun.
It looks okay. The male protagonist is just like this. He can do what he wants without hesitation or concealment. He is so proud. Of course, he can do whatever he wants. There is no need to pretend to be a serious person. Those people who have a harem and are secretive are really tiring to watch [Eat Gua] It would be great if we could control the number of female protagonists, arrange the roles of each female protagonist reasonably, and add more comedy, daily plots, etc. This way, we don't have to constantly recruit new female protagonists. We can give the female protagonists who have less roles a chance to show their faces, and don't make it impossible to find this person later.
I don't have high requirements. I just want the heroine to keep this point all the way through. Then I hope there will be more types of heroines in the future, such as a royal sister, a lolita, an aloof female CEO, a tomboy 🥰
I have read the first dozen chapters. If I evaluate it, the subject matter and ideas are okay. The author's attitude towards listening to opinions and ability to avoid lightning are also okay. I can give it four stars. However, the writing is not very strong. The description of the hand-rubbing heroine cannot be stunning at first glance. It can only be said to be a common problem of novice authors. Overall, this book can be read as an entry-level novel, but if you are a picky old bookworm, it is still a bit short. Give me a four-star encouragement 😘
It's not bad, it's considered good in Shenhaowen, at least it's not second-hand.
Not bad, I read two hundred chapters in one go. The QC aspect of the heroines is great. The background protection mechanism generated by the system is very good. There are no plots about the aggrieved villains making faces in the whole story. This is much better than many system-driven novels. Personal sense, five stars.
There doesn't need to be too many heroines. Even if there are multiple heroines, the women who appear later will always have the shadow of the front. In my opinion, the core of multiple heroines is to write each girl's face in place, so there is no need to have too many, and then slowly advance the daily story. Now I like to read some daily articles, write about travel, campus life, and start a small business (you don't have to write too much). Anyway, plainness is the truth, and then slowly enrich the image of each heroine.
A very good book, five stars for it. 😄
Good-looking, really refreshing article 😂😂😂 Damn it, Sakura layout, I enjoyed reading it. Author, you are so good at writing. A perfect 5-star article.
Good looking, no second hand goods.