[Multiple female protagonists] [School Belle] [Shen Hao] [Don't lick dogs] [The female protagonists are all adults] [Slow pace in the early stage] [Starting to have fun after the university starts]
After Chen Mo finished his college entrance examination, he watched Douyin's short videos and saw videos of various mansions and luxury cars, which made him envious.
At this moment, a voice suddenly sounded in his mind: "Ding! The pleasure system has been activated."
Chen Mo will receive rewards every time he enjoys himself, and he can also receive mysterious rewards for conquering high-scoring goddesses.
Chen Mo ordered a cup of milk tea, "It was detected that the host was physically and mentally happy drinking milk tea, and the reward 10,000 yuan has been deposited into the host's bank card."
After taking the driver's license test, "it was detected that the host is a god and has a driver's license but does not have an exclusive car. The host will be rewarded with a Ferrari SF90 sports car."
When Chen Mo accepted the white silk anchor, "it was detected that the host accepted the best goddess with a score of 86, and the host was rewarded with 80% of the shares of Wuchou Media"
From now on, start a luxurious life of wanton enjoyment! When Chen Mo drove his Ferrari supercar to report to the university, the senior students in the school were all shocked.
I want the royal lady in black stockings, the lolita in white stockings, the cold and strong woman, and the innocent senior sister!
(Today's novels are all fast-paced and exciting, which can easily raise the reader's pleasure threshold. My early novel was slow-paced, and it was only after I got to college that it started to be exciting, which lowers the reader's pleasure threshold.)
(The protagonist will spend money for the heroine. This is not dog-licking; paying without getting a response is dog-licking. The protagonist's efforts will be responded to. And there is a system in which the protagonist will not be short of money, and he will be happy as he pleases. If you don't like this kind of plot, you can skip it)
Reader comments
After reading Chapter 90, the following is my personal opinion. The writing is okay, the food is fast, and the author's driving skills are very good. This is a big advantage, but there are too many female protagonists. In fact, generally speaking, if you can write 10 female protagonists with multiple female protagonists, you are very good. There are only about 10 great authors in the genre of Guan Guan, Ji Cha and many female protagonists.
Suggestion: Reduce the description of social interactions. After all, you have a system to give you the details. Describe more about enjoying daily life, beautiful college days, travel, daily descriptions such as the atmosphere of life and the quarrels between characters. If you can write daily life well, the book can be greatly improved. Not many female protagonists can make up for it. Small collisions like the first and second heroines, which do not affect the protagonist's interesting collisions, can retain more viewers. After all, urban reading is still about enjoying life and daily fun.
It looks okay. The male protagonist is just like this. He can do what he wants without hesitation or concealment. He is so proud. Of course, he can do whatever he wants. There is no need to pretend to be a serious person. Those people who have a harem and are secretive are really tiring to watch [Eat Gua] It would be great if we could control the number of female protagonists, arrange the roles of each female protagonist reasonably, and add more comedy, daily plots, etc. This way, we don't have to constantly recruit new female protagonists. We can give the female protagonists who have less roles a chance to show their faces, and don't make it impossible to find this person later.
I don't have high requirements. I just want the heroine to keep this point all the way through. Then I hope there will be more types of heroines in the future, such as a royal sister, a lolita, an aloof female CEO, a tomboy [Adoration]
It's not bad, it's considered good in Shenhaowen, at least it's not second-hand.
College student, life is great
A very good book, five stars for it. [Laugh]
Overall, I feel that the writing is quite good, at least there are no major negative points. If I continue to maintain it, the rating will not be low.
What is the ending of Nan Liang?
Good looking, no second hand goods.
The author is great. Don't have too many entrepreneurial plots in the Shenhao novel. 90% Of the focus should be on pure enjoyment (enjoyment), okay?
Good-looking, really refreshing article [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]
Damn it, Sakura layout, I enjoyed reading it. Author, you are so good at writing. A perfect 5-star article.
I can't say it's bad, but it's not great either. The reason why I gave it four stars is because the business war episode kind of ruined the perception, but overall it's a good first work for a newcomer.
How many female protagonists do you plan to have? @The ending is Hou Ru
The author of Six Hundred and Sixty-Six has something
The title of this book is worth five points. College life is so good! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]
What a good book. It's such a good book. Author, please be more careful and don't stop reading. Otherwise, I will cry to death.
What else can I say? It looks good, it deserves five stars. [Cool]
It's okay. One point is deducted for doing some bad things from time to time, but it's not particularly bloody. Everything else is pretty good.
It's pretty good. The content is very neat.
Although the writing is a bit green, I give the heroine a full C and give me a star to support her.
After reading Chapter 90, the following is my personal opinion. The writing is okay, the food is fast, and the author's driving skills are very good. This is a big advantage, but there are too many female protagonists. In fact, generally speaking, if you can write 10 female protagonists with multiple female protagonists, you are very good. There are only about 10 great authors in the genre of Guan Guan, Ji Cha and many female protagonists. Suggestion: Reduce the description of social interactions. After all, you have a system to give you the details. Describe more about enjoying daily life, beautiful college days, travel, daily descriptions such as the atmosphere of life and the quarrels between characters. If you can write daily life well, the book can be greatly improved. Not many female protagonists can make up for it. Small collisions like the first and second heroines, which do not affect the protagonist's interesting collisions, can retain more viewers. After all, urban reading is still about enjoying life and daily fun.
It looks okay. The male protagonist is just like this. He can do what he wants without hesitation or concealment. He is so proud. Of course, he can do whatever he wants. There is no need to pretend to be a serious person. Those people who have a harem and are secretive are really tiring to watch [Eat Gua] It would be great if we could control the number of female protagonists, arrange the roles of each female protagonist reasonably, and add more comedy, daily plots, etc. This way, we don't have to constantly recruit new female protagonists. We can give the female protagonists who have less roles a chance to show their faces, and don't make it impossible to find this person later.
I don't have high requirements. I just want the heroine to keep this point all the way through. Then I hope there will be more types of heroines in the future, such as a royal sister, a lolita, an aloof female CEO, a tomboy [Adoration]
It's not bad, it's considered good in Shenhaowen, at least it's not second-hand.
College student, life is great
A very good book, five stars for it. [Laugh]
Overall, I feel that the writing is quite good, at least there are no major negative points. If I continue to maintain it, the rating will not be low.
What is the ending of Nan Liang?
Good looking, no second hand goods.
The author is great. Don't have too many entrepreneurial plots in the Shenhao novel. 90% Of the focus should be on pure enjoyment (enjoyment), okay?
Good-looking, really refreshing article [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying] Damn it, Sakura layout, I enjoyed reading it. Author, you are so good at writing. A perfect 5-star article.
I can't say it's bad, but it's not great either. The reason why I gave it four stars is because the business war episode kind of ruined the perception, but overall it's a good first work for a newcomer.
How many female protagonists do you plan to have? @The ending is Hou Ru
The author of Six Hundred and Sixty-Six has something
The title of this book is worth five points. College life is so good! [Cover face][cover face][cover face]
What a good book. It's such a good book. Author, please be more careful and don't stop reading. Otherwise, I will cry to death.
What else can I say? It looks good, it deserves five stars. [Cool]
It's okay. One point is deducted for doing some bad things from time to time, but it's not particularly bloody. Everything else is pretty good.
It's pretty good. The content is very neat.
Although the writing is a bit green, I give the heroine a full C and give me a star to support her.
Doing business feels like playing house