The Ultimate Masterpiece of the True Teaching Soul Penetrates the Black Room

To be honest, it was quite tiring to watch the protagonist's pig-like appearance and low-level wits. The villain, who is obviously trash in the original book, would be very happy if he could counterattack and slap him in the face, which made him feel frustrated to death. Also, the emotional line is too forced. I think it's far-fetched for a girl to like the main character. Five-star support hopes to get better and better, the subject matter is novel

Quite novel. However, I don't want the male protagonist to be completely handsome, so I chose this one as the protagonist. The main thing is to rely on operations rather than modeling, like the uncle from another world. (It doesn't matter if I do this in the finale, but I will switch to modeling in the middle, and the feeling will be reduced a lot)

This is the first time I've seen Sankyo Yamauchi Haruki's fandom. I hope there will be a full life of Sakayanagi Arisu, and I hope I can survive a little longer.

The writing is good, a little bit toxic but quite distinctive. But the emotional line is a bit too fast. I suggest you slow down the pace first. If the author needs it, I can send you free gifts every day. I hope you will continue writing.

This is a normal practical teaching text. You don't have to deal with people when you meet them. If you have any ideas, I suggest you read the Records of Goddess Qiongming.

Indeed, Mr. Yamauchi's ordinary appearance is quite interesting. He is much more interesting and engaging than the handsome protagonist.

The writing is quite good, but the author is not very popular. If you push your books out more, as your little readers, it will also help you. Very good, no obvious poisonous points

The writing is very good and interesting, and the protagonist's ideas are quite interesting.

It's rare to write about Grandpa Yamauchi, please live longer, five stars

It's amazing, keep up the good work

It was quite toxic at first, but it was also quite fun. After watching too much pretending, it was a good change of taste.

It's okay, it's getting interesting gradually, keep it up

Not bad, the level of writing in the back is much better than in the front [Grass has been planted]

The plot is average, but there are too few realistic stories about Grandpa Yamauchi, so I give it five stars.

It's very good, and it looks and feels much better than those that have systems that make them invincible as soon as they are launched.

Good looking but too little😭

Yes [like], live longer [eat melon]

Indeed, there are very few written about our Mr. Yamauchi.

It looks good, but the author doesn't let the protagonist change his original face. That would make someone else look too shabby, and it also limits the protagonist's personality. And you don't see any behavior of giving away a girl?

Hahahaha, some of the clips are pretty cool, come on

Is there a female protagonist? Single or harem?

Not bad, there is Sakura in Kushida Horikita, I look forward to Shura Field

The requirements in the comment section are too high. I read two chapters and I think it's pretty good. It's much more pleasing to the eye than those who just traveled through time and saw Long Aotian. Sorry, I spoke too early