The Beginning of Internet Writing, Accidentally Becoming a God in the Literary World

It looks good, but a little bland. The emotional description of parents is very good, but the mood of the male protagonist, the teacher, is too stable, which may make it a bit uncomfortable for those who are used to reading cool stories. The overall pace is faster Rating: Grain

I've read almost half of it, and I wanted to finish it before commenting, but I couldn't help myself. This book does not have an in-depth portrayal of family, friendship, or the relationship between teachers and students. It is too bland. When watching it, it gives people the impression that the protagonist is actually unaware of everything around him, and does the things set by the author expressionlessly. Like a hard-working guy, he only sketches everything around him without adding any emotion. It gives the impression that there is a thick barrier between the protagonist and everything around him, and the sense of boundary is too strong. The parents, brothers, and teachers around him also feel that they are not familiar with the protagonist, and they dare not engage in any behavior that crosses the boundary or engage in intimate behavior. This gave me the feeling that the protagonist had already exposed the fact that he had traveled through time, and was only trying not to expose it because his existence would bring more benefits than the original one.

The book of "Long Water" looks ordinary, but when listening to the book, it feels like water.