Traveling Through Liu Yizhen: Starting from Following Liu Yu's Northern Expedition

It is a very interesting historical article, with good writing style, high historical compatibility, and informal details. However, it is relatively weak in describing the overall situation of the Eastern Jin Dynasty, and the narrative centrality is too strong. The last few chapters have been full of flaws, and the writing power has declined significantly after leaving the original historical line. The protagonist openly declares that he wants to "leave the south to the north" and secede from the political center of the southeast; he asks Liu Yu for Ba and Shu, almost making it clear that he wants to split; as a son of a man, he calls his father "Liu Jinu" in the letter; after building Yubi City, he rests back and acquiesces that history will inevitably repeat itself... Faced with the protagonist's various actions, Liu Yu's old generals under his command and the Guanzhong gentry are still united and united. Liu Yu also tolerates and condones the protagonist, and even actively splits them. Territory... The author seems to think that a great victory and the benefit of the gentry can give the protagonist almost arbitrary political power in Guanzhong. Instead, he forgets that Liu Yu, the Beifu soldiers and the vast south are the real source of power for the protagonist "Liu Yizhen". This is not to say that the author's idea of "starting over from scratch" is not good or that the strategy is not feasible, but the author's roughness and frivolity ultimately led to a poor perception, and even Liu Yu had to be outwitted to make up for it. While I support the author's creativity, this is not a good historical novel.

A very good time travel story. Although I have read several novels in which the protagonist becomes Liu Yu's second son, after all, the original author is really sorry. A good hand of cards turned out to be bad. Back to the time when nothing happened, the protagonist has a historical perspective, is very smart, and dares to sit in the army, command the attack on Chang'an, implement the government army system, and let his father fight Helian on his behalf. Unfortunately, there are no military advisors in the back, and his father wants to go back to usurp the throne. The protagonist will sit in Guanzhong when he is 11 years old. It depends on what happens next. The character portrayal is good so far. Liu Yu is a loving father to the protagonist and has military wisdom, but he is not in good health. It turns out that he will die not long ago in history. The protagonist is too young and I don't know if he can hold on. I hope the tragedy of Liu Song can be avoided. The current protagonist is a rare man among the human-like gods and kings of the Northern and Southern Dynasties. He has the appearance of a wise king and a brave strategy. He sends agents to inquire about the military situation. Based on the known history, he determines that the former Qin general has died. Then he proposes to change the military strategy. He also loves the people, prohibits plundering the people of Chang'an, and uses the treasury to distribute soldiers. It is actually very wise to propose the system of government soldiers and plunder Qiang people as slaves of the government soldiers. At the same time, we should not be arrogant and listen to the opinions of the senior generals in the army. There is a Chang'an family who brought their daughter to see the protagonist. I don't know if she is the heroine. If so, I hope to write less emotional scenes. After all, most of the authors' emotional lines are so poor that I just want to skip them over and over again. Some of them are particularly disgusting and all kinds of top-notch. Just understate it. After all, I read this book to watch the struggle for hegemony. Don't always think about the harem. I hope the protagonist can grow up quickly. History does not give him much time. The current description is quite ancient, and various historical knowledge is readily available. The character design is relatively in line with the historical position. The protagonist is not mentally retarded, which is rare. I hope the author will continue to write well.

When the author wrote that the range of the infantry bow was not as far as that of the cavalry, I knew that the author was awesome. He reconstructed the laws of physics and theorems of mechanics. This is a free book. Four stars.

The writing is good, but the protagonist is not that awesome. Many authors write protagonists who are so good at leading soldiers and fighting at the age of 11-12. Even if you are a genius at the age of 12, people will not accept you.

First of all, I think the current rating of 8.0 Is a bit low. I have read this book carefully from the beginning to now, and I feel it is a well-written book. Whether it is the historical authenticity, the logic of the plot, or the writing style, he writes very well, and it is very comfortable to read. ——The author updates three times a day. I feel that the amount of updates is still large, and the quality is also good, but I still feel that I haven't seen enough, haha. ——The current progress of the article is that the protagonist plans to build Jade City, but I don't know what the subsequent plot will be like? I think from a logical point of view, it is more likely that the prince who will be established in the subsequent empire will be the protagonist. Regardless of the relationship with father and son, the power of his subordinates, or the reputation in the world, the second child's advantage will become greater and greater. Of course, there is also the Xuanwu Sect inheritance system, depending on the author's arrangement.

I feel that the author's historical background is very solid. Although there are too many historical materials, it cannot be fully verified. For example, I looked up the battle of Shen Tianzi. The number of enemies in the Song Dynasty and Zizhi Tongjian is tens of thousands, but there is indeed a forward number of 8,000 in another more reliable history book. Although it is difficult to tell whether it is true or not, the number of Zizhi Tongjian is indeed not credible after all. It has been written very well. Secondly, the logic of the actions of the characters in it is very reasonable. Whether it is the protagonist or the opponent, their actions and reasons are pointed out, such as why Prince Hu Xia sent troops, Liu Yu's ideas and tactics, etc. But the most important thing after that is to break away from the historical facts and see if the author can make it reasonable and interesting for the protagonist to defend Guanzhong under the surveillance of all sides. Looking forward to the author's next works

Great book, great potential! There are actually not many books about the Southern and Northern Dynasties, and even less about the Liu and Song Dynasties, but this one is really good and worth reading! After all, Liu Song is quite regrettable in history, and I am very much looking forward to its different direction in this work [Like] This book is also more attentive in terms of politics (for example, the reason why Liu Song lost his ruling foundation in Guanzhong), military (war, such as how to use footwork to control riding), etc. It is worth reading [Top post][Top post][Top post]

Two days later, although I don't know much about the history of the Northern and Southern Dynasties, after reading so much, I feel that Liu Yu, who is as powerful as a tiger, may be as strategizing as the author writes. The protagonist does not excessively use modern knowledge to make technological changes. I feel that if the protagonist can improve the way of social production, it may be better. However, the author must have his own considerations. It is my first time to write a long review and my words are not fluent. However, this novel is really good and I sincerely recommend it!!! [Like][Like][Like]

This book is very well written. Historical novels of this style are really rare in Tomato. Most of Tomato's historical novels are systematic or particularly naive, but this novel is completely in the starting point style.

This is a rare novel about Liu Jinu. The entry point is well chosen. There are some minor flaws, but they are innocuous. The author has worked hard and the plot rhythm is well grasped. I am personally looking forward to how the subsequent Young Master will manage Chang'an City and how he will compete for the world. After all, we are all clairvoyant and know that the God of War Liu Yu is almost gone. Good articles are rare in Tomato. The author should not sleep, get up and update.

I felt very comfortable watching it. Personally, I felt that the early pace was very good and not procrastinating. The author also has a good historical background. The writing style is easy to understand and has a bit of humor, such as early death and early care. The overall feeling is that it can get a high score of 9.5 Or above.

It's a very interesting book, and the plot development is incomprehensible. There is a feeling that Li Yuan wants to change Li Shimin to be the crown prince. Li Shimin doesn't want to do it. He just wants to break the earth and make him a king to conquer the world. Because the strategic value of that land is very important, and only Li Shimin can temporarily hold it in the world. Then Li Yuan agreed. Later, in order to prevent the Xuanwumen situation, the author described brotherly harmony. Now I just want to see how the plot will develop in order to avoid civil war?

I feel that the early writing is quite good. I hope to continue working hard and produce another good historical work [laughs] Basically, when I started writing this book, I started to read it, and now I feel that it is okay. It has increased from 6. To 8.2, And I feel that the writing is getting more and more flavorful. Manano is also a good author. I can't go up to 3 pages a day, which is about the same.

This book is so well written. There are so few fictional history books like Tomato that are not awkward and logical. I hope the author can write more than a million words [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Beautiful! I hope there won't be too many emotional scenes. .

I was attracted by the appearance at first sight when I got it. The color scheme is very fresh and not cheap. The details are well processed and the corners are neatly arranged. I usually wear it out and I get asked for the link several times. It goes well with pants and skirts.

It is well written. This kind of subject matter is not easy to write about, but the author's writing is not absurd. The description of the world's pattern is very accurate, and his judgment of the current situation is also excellent. But when did my Han clan have a rule that we must have the eldest son? It seems that the emperors of the Han Dynasty did not have many eldest sons before.

Good! The author writes very well! Big cheers for the author! [Like] [Like] The only thing is, can you let Liu Yu live a few more years, extend his original life span, so that he can meet the protagonist a few more times, instead of being separated forever after that hug, living longer can also help the protagonist stabilize the south and the rear [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

It's really good. I caught up with the updates in one go. I have a solid foundation. Good book.

A good time-travel novel that breaks away from the common dynasty limitations of historical time-travel novels. It chooses the Wei, Jin, Southern and Northern Dynasties as the background, allowing more people who don't understand this period of history to experience the confrontation between the North and the South from the perspective of the Liu and Song regime, and to correctly view this period of history.

Not bad, not bad. I started reading this book with a rating of 6 or so. Overall, it's okay, but sometimes it's a little bit toxic. In ancient times, did you call your father's name directly? Interesting. It's already a good book on Tomato

The writing in Nanbei Chaoli is quite good. I haven't seen any bad points so far. It suits my taste. Especially recently, I often read Anzhou Mu Nanbei Fengyun Current Electronic Pickled Vegetables from Station B. I am familiar with the plot, but it is too little and not enough to watch. It is not satisfying.

The writing is very good, without system, no cheats, and the writing style is also very good, and the rhythm is also very well grasped. Moreover, he is a rare author who writes about this period. It is worth reading.

Top notch. The writing is smooth and logical. In fact, the key hurdle is just that. Once you pass it, you can sit back and relax. The content is also reasonable and the historical context is clear. It deserves a high score on Tomato. Is it because it is smooth and precise that it does not seem to be very salivating? Anyway, in my opinion it deserves a rating of 9 or above.

This can be considered a difficult decision. Come on, the author, I will give you five stars.

It is very well written. There are currently too few books about the history of the Southern Dynasty and Song Dynasty. The author has written very well and basically restored the situation of this period of history. The young general is high-spirited. It's fun to watch.

The current score of 8.4 Is a bit low. A score of 8.8-9.2 Is more reasonable. The theme of the Southern and Northern Dynasties is rare in Tomato. The writing is delicate and the description is vivid without losing the sense of refreshment. I hope it will continue to be maintained.

Needless to say, it's an absolutely great book! It's just that the rating now is only 8.1 Points.

It's so well written, I feel like it as I continue reading [Sending my heart to you] It is a pity that modernization has not been promoted [smile] This is the greatest advantage of time travellers. Even if it is completely selfish, modernization will make personal life more comfortable and it will also make it possible for families to avoid dynasty changes (constitutional monarchy). Being a British royal family for a thousand years is no more comfortable than being a feudal royal family for four hundred years [laughing] The layout is a bit too small.

Another excellent tomato historical novel