Western Fantasy: a Life of Indulgence Starting from a Young Lord

I have listened to more than 40 chapters so far. The sensory style is Lao Fei and there are shadows of Lao Fei, but the combat power setting is different. The plot in the first few chapters is quite interesting, and the later chapters are developing and fighting at the same time. The plot has to be eaten quickly, and a place given four stars eats everything. The combat power has not collapsed yet, because there is still a battle between mortals and extraordinary knights, and they are still tinkering with hot weapons. Let's take a look at the follow-up and then evaluate again. I'm speechless. Why do you always buy second-hand ones? The war plot is just average.

I have read a lot of western fantasy hegemony movies in Tomato, and this one is really the best one I have ever seen. Each character is well-developed, the protagonists and villains all have online IQs, and have very distinct personality traits. And the author is very careful in illustrating many pictures. In addition, the plot is very smooth, the short narrative and the grand narrative switch appropriately, and the rhythm is very comfortable. It is very natural to switch from a love story to a political plot of war. There is no deliberate effort to concoct the writing style, but the text is very comfortable to read. There are two other outstanding highlights. One is that the author describes the military war with great detail. The other is that the author is very skilled in driving, and the section where the stepmother is completely defeated is really... In short, it is really good to watch, so give it a thumbs up to the author! Book friends, stop reading the book reviews and move on to the text!

From the pictures, I can see that it's very well thought out, and the plot doesn't have any flaws. I generally don't read Western fantasy, but I read this one because it's less verbose than other Western fantasy novels. It doesn't have a lot of greetings, lengthy names and titles. There are also a lot of Western fantasy imitation translations that are very uncomfortable to watch, and even various elementary school math problems, just a few pennies to buy something, and endless calculations, a lot of nonsense. This is the only problem that kept me from reading this book. Western literature is not that good, and there is no need to praise it in any way. At least in terms of language level, it is far inferior to Chinese. The hardware is not good, let alone the literature. Therefore, I very much support the author's writing style. Western fantasy is just that the historical background is Western, and the narrative is completely in accordance with our normal way.

This book is very good from the progress I have seen so far. Generally speaking, there is nothing to find fault with. It's just that the writing is a bit explicit. The character creation is still okay, and there is no problem with the general logic. If I have to say it, I think it won't be too different from Field next door. It's just too explicit. If you can't accept this kind of person, you might think... You know For example, the muskets and so on in it are written more logically, because many similar articles about anger, such as the muskets and so on, are written more logically, because many similar articles are too understated about firearms, beliefs, etc., And the writing of many things is too simple, but the author's writing is relatively good. If you like Western fantasy novels and are currently short of books, this is definitely a very good book. There are a lot of accompanying pictures, such as power distribution maps and character images, which make you feel more immersed when reading the text. At the same time, I quite approve of the author's characterization. For example, the overall setting of the protagonist is relatively three-dimensional, with good and bad sides. The author's writing is still too cool, I hope it will be updated soon! Come on brother

The plot of the story is a more traditional Western fantasy lord novel. The characterization is quite profound, but I think the responsible emotional description needs to be improved. Don't you think the emotional scene of the Dark Elf Queen is very abrupt? A person who has lived for thousands of years fell in love with the protagonist the first time they met. It's not that she can't like it, it just feels too sudden. Reply to the comments made before submitting the letter The author has improved the areas where I complained. I don't know if the author had planned it before or for some reason. In short, it's very good. It explained Orika's initial psychology and made the characterization more delicate. The author's subsequent writing is also slightly better than the previous one, and the characterization is more three-dimensional. In short, there are many advantages that you need to discover for yourself. Here are two suggestions: 1: I think the female character in this book can have a stronger personality, such as one who dies with her husband and then leaves the protagonist with nothing. The advantage of writing in this way can better reflect that the male protagonist's road to hegemony is not smooth sailing, and it can also show the character in a more three-dimensional way. 2: The author please don't have such a strong taste, and don't write about what the heroine eats. The taste in the last book was a little too strong. Please the author can read my comment [laughing] The above are all personal suggestions and comments about this book after reading it (up to the latest chapter). I have never written such a long book review before, and I was probably moved by the author's book.

The price of some mechanisms is not very reasonable. It is recommended to refer to the mechanisms in Mount and Blade and Age of Empires.

. I don't think it should be a score, nor should it be this number of people. Although I still prefer the ones that are all first-hand. There are too many second-hand ones, so maybe they are a little bit different. But I think it's really well written. It's almost the same as Fei Ge. I think it's just that Fei Ge's darkness is too much, but this one is dark and medium. I hope the author will write a good break and break something.

There is a world map and a character map, which are really good. I jumped into the book halfway through and felt that the pace had sped up a bit. Also, the wording seems too abrupt in some places. In Western fantasy, it is better to use European and American tones, words or sentences. The way you use Chinese can easily make people laugh. Maybe the author made the change considering the readers' reading, but I personally was affected by it. It still feels like the speed is a bit too fast.

Damn it, when did Tomato have a Western fantasy novel of this level... It's so good. I felt that it was not simple from the map I inserted. It turns out that it is so. The only shortcoming is that it is still a seedling. It will definitely be fun to spread out in the later stage!

Excellent, highly recommended. This author is great, I must pay close attention to it, and the scale is also very good. Anyway, it's just fun. It's not mindless, but the overall rhythm is very fun, especially Serra [you taste it carefully] [watch] Update quickly, update quickly, update quickly The rating is a bit low, I feel it's at least 8.8. There should be a threshold for the rating, how much time or how many chapters later

Okay, okay, very good. There are very few authors who have not made topographic maps and power distribution maps. The character maps are also good and have a strong Western style. In terms of combat, we basically rely on the army, and there is not much difference between individuals. I hope that the author can maintain the balance of combat power and maintain the rhythm in the future. If the individual combat power of the army is maintained, it will not rapidly expand to defeat the entire army. It's not comfortable at the moment. I feel that only the Dark Elf Queen is overly emotional, which is a bit far-fetched, but it's not a big problem. The slave agreement behind Sera also solves the problem of turning enemies into one's own, which I personally think is very wise. The teaching and training later was also very passionate, and the writing conveyed a different feeling. Then for dark magic, light elves, look at the map and dwarves, what island, there are many interesting races and regions, there can be some interesting settings, it will be very interesting to keep the logic, I am looking forward to it Finally, come on, the author, I really like to read [exploration] Strive to have eighteen updates a day to keep you company

I read it in one go. I haven't read many western fantasy novels before. This one is still very attractive to me. The world view is perfect. As the story progresses, I feel that the author's writing becomes more comfortable. The war scenes are also very exciting. I hope that the protagonist and heroine can be more detailed and the meat and vegetables can be combined.

It's pretty good. I hope it can be updated to 3 million words. Anyway, there have been books of 2 million words and 1 million words before. I hope the author can break through this time to exceed 3 million words or even 5 million words.

It was so scary. When I saw Chapters 78 to 80, I knew that AI could never replace the horror of a real author.

Very detailed writing. Worth reading

[Sneaky laugh] Except for the beginning, the first two books are not fun because of the exile. The later ones are very enjoyable. [Sneaky laugh] Come on, Liu Bei.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I still feel good. The author's attitude towards this book is very serious and responsible. Anyone who has read it can see it. In particular, the important characters and maps have detailed pictures, and there are no surprises in the plot. That is to say, some thunderous language (especially the part between the male protagonist and the stepmother) [face covering] makes it difficult to hold back, but the rest is pretty good. In addition, I hope that the male protagonist's personal abilities can be strengthened later.

A very good western fantasy novel

I think it's really good in Western Fantasy. No one is perfect. As the protagonist, Aaron's character naturally has shortcomings, but he also has his strengths, inner entanglements, and recklessness. Overall, it's pretty good, and the illustrations are also very beautiful, which enhances the sense of immersion and can often resonate with my supreme stock [laughter]

Good, good, very good-looking [staring] It's my awesome spin

I highly recommend this author to write about an old resident of a dark house.

The writing is very good, with a basic bottom line. If I marry more girls, I will not only give you good reviews but also give you rewards. Come on [like]

The writing is not bad. Apart from the resources that I don't know where they come from and the technology tree that develops too fast, the character of the protagonist is also quite good.

The writing is pretty good. I wonder if the flying dragon will transform later.

It's very good, the author's illustrations are great, and the article's look and feel is also very good.

Come on! The big sister of crab cakes!

Tooth for tooth, eye for eye, blood debt must be paid with blood, I want to see the blood flowing into a river [angry]

The author is still too talented, there is nothing poisonous about it, it's okay

Not bad, I feel like the plot jumps too fast later on

That's great, wait and see and I'll give you a score