The SSS-Rank Sentinel’s White Moonlight

It's okay so far, but there are always too many words "I" in several paragraphs. I hope the author will change it. It's a bit broken. The heroine had a very calm and strong image in front of her, but after meeting the male protagonists, she became weak and became a bit spoiled.

It's super, super good-looking, and all the protagonists and supporting characters are normal. There is no such thing as a treacherous one. The protagonist is also very principled. He completes his work while protecting himself, knows what he should do and what to do, and has his own little hobbies. Although he likes to look at beautiful men, he will not lose his own interests for the sake of male lust. It looks good.

A very nice book with great potential. The heroine has her own character traits and retains some of her behavior and preferences as a Blue Star person. The heroine is not a delicate type. She has only been bound to a sentry for so long, and the upgrade is also very fast. It is upgraded from D+ level to A level without any delay. But it is worth noting: there are too many "I"s in the article, which affects the reading experience. I commented on two places. There were also a lot of "I"s before this. It will be much better if I modify it. I hope the author will continue to work hard [top post]

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The first is the shaping of the heroine, who has the brains to know what she wants and what she doesn't want and is determined to do it. I think the author loves the heroine's baby very much. I have a feeling that the author may have put himself into the heroine. It can also be said that he really shaped the heroine as a person, instead of just adding whatever he wants to the heroine. It makes me feel that the heroine is a real person, not just a character. I hope the author can continue to maintain this, whether it is plot or ideas. Come on.

I've caught up to the latest, and I think it's pretty good so far. Although the plot conflicts are a bit dull, I really appreciate the author's arrangement of the heroine's fate. Usually in women's novels, the heroine's official spouse is usually the most powerful one. In this book, the heroine categorically rejected the man who seemed powerful, rich, strong, and perfect because of an offensive word, and chose the man who knew how to respect the heroine, truly changed the heroine unconditionally, and took the heroine seriously, even if this man was not strong enough, rich, or powerful. It's really good. This choice truly reflects the subjectivity of the heroine.

After reading so many articles, this article does not have so many plots and plots, but in terms of the portrayal of the heroine, there are almost no flaws. Independent and sober, I think this is the real heroine. In a true sense, men conquer the world and women conquer men. I hope the author can continue to carry forward and produce more good articles. Love you! ❤️

The heroine's thoughts and ideas are written out, and she is not the traditional kind who can't walk when she sees a man. If you keep writing like this, I think this is a book with great potential, so keep writing, keep writing!

Generally speaking, this kind of sentry world will have a distorted world view. I temporarily looked at the previous point and thought it was a very normal world view 🤦 There are many kind-hearted guides, and there are also many gentleman sentries.

I don't know why, but when I read the latest version of The White Moonlight, which is not like the bright moon hanging in the sky and does not shine on me, I started to read the literature about spoiled wives [awkward laugh]