[Realistic writing, no system, no excitement.
When I was a child, my parents repeatedly told me: If I pick you up, I will be your sister's son-in-law. From now on, study hard, work hard, marry your sister when you grow up, guard this family, don't let her marry far away, don't let her suffer any injustice...
Reader comments
Was the single heroine given by the system, or was it chosen by the author himself? At present, the character of the male protagonist is completely scumbag, and in my mind, he is completely cs. What he did was completely sorry for his sister.
I said before that I would not marry anyone who is not my sister, but this is actually the case. Forget it if it's an ordinary scumbag man's story. You wrote about your sister who was so miserable. Her shoulders were bleeding when she was a teenager doing hard work. She worked from morning to night, so she devoted herself to the male protagonist. From my sister's perspective, I can't accept it. Although you write that your sister disagrees with your brother's idea of marrying her, you also write many times that your sister is not worthy of the male protagonist. But this is not the reason why the male protagonist has an affair with other people.
Even though my sister said not to accept benefits from others, the male protagonist still wants them. In Zhang Chunlan's second bet, she pays your tuition and fees for a year, and you just call her sister. The bets are completely unequal. Are you embarrassed to accept it? Then the dean's daughter sent a love letter. She was prepared to reject it without knowing her identity, but she immediately agreed when she knew it. This is the most disgusting part for me. I can make excuses for the previous ambiguity, just to earn some benefits and reduce the pressure on my sister. This is straight to the point, she is a pure chef.
If you don't label it as a chef male protagonist, then everything I said above will be invalid. Really, this can also prevent readers in advance, and some readers like to watch scumbag male protagonists.
I feel that the setting of the sister can only be about pure love. How about you write it better. The male protagonist, a pure love warrior, has to live his whole life with his sister and is forced to have a harem under the influence of various external factors. (It must be with the sister's consent.) This kind of change is also possible. Otherwise, I would definitely be sorry for my sister. No one is writing comments for you now. If you wait, others will definitely scold you later.
The above is just what I said is not good. In fact, it's just unacceptable from my sister's perspective. Ignoring this, the writing is actually okay. I gave it four stars. Some parts are quite funny.
It feels like a documentary. After all, I like this style. I hope the author will stick to it and finish it.
Was the single heroine given by the system, or was it chosen by the author himself? At present, the character of the male protagonist is completely scumbag, and in my mind, he is completely cs. What he did was completely sorry for his sister. I said before that I would not marry anyone who is not my sister, but this is actually the case. Forget it if it's an ordinary scumbag man's story. You wrote about your sister who was so miserable. Her shoulders were bleeding when she was a teenager doing hard work. She worked from morning to night, so she devoted herself to the male protagonist. From my sister's perspective, I can't accept it. Although you write that your sister disagrees with your brother's idea of marrying her, you also write many times that your sister is not worthy of the male protagonist. But this is not the reason why the male protagonist has an affair with other people. Even though my sister said not to accept benefits from others, the male protagonist still wants them. In Zhang Chunlan's second bet, she pays your tuition and fees for a year, and you just call her sister. The bets are completely unequal. Are you embarrassed to accept it? Then the dean's daughter sent a love letter. She was prepared to reject it without knowing her identity, but she immediately agreed when she knew it. This is the most disgusting part for me. I can make excuses for the previous ambiguity, just to earn some benefits and reduce the pressure on my sister. This is straight to the point, she is a pure chef. If you don't label it as a chef male protagonist, then everything I said above will be invalid. Really, this can also prevent readers in advance, and some readers like to watch scumbag male protagonists. I feel that the setting of the sister can only be about pure love. How about you write it better. The male protagonist, a pure love warrior, has to live his whole life with his sister and is forced to have a harem under the influence of various external factors. (It must be with the sister's consent.) This kind of change is also possible. Otherwise, I would definitely be sorry for my sister. No one is writing comments for you now. If you wait, others will definitely scold you later. The above is just what I said is not good. In fact, it's just unacceptable from my sister's perspective. Ignoring this, the writing is actually okay. I gave it four stars. Some parts are quite funny.
It feels like a documentary. After all, I like this style. I hope the author will stick to it and finish it.