Game Arrival: Looting the Protagonist's Opportunities at the Beginning

One less star is because adding funny descriptions to the villain is whitewashing the villain in disguise, because this will subconsciously ignore the pain of the heroine. Also, don't write so many funny jokes, because they are not that funny. Delete some jokes and unnecessary psychological descriptions and you will find that it has no impact on the book and can make the text cleaner. It can be seen that the author is writing a novel for the first time and the writing style is a bit jerky, but the subject matter is okay. It is important not to add funny descriptions to the villains! Don't add funny descriptions! Don't add funny descriptions! ! !

It's very good. It's rare for authors to write well about dungeon puzzles. This book directly avoids this. The dungeon is all about fighting monsters without solving puzzles. It's not embarrassing to read. [Like] And then, the protagonist is not betrayed by a man and reborn. It's hard to think that she is smart when she is reborn after being stupid in her previous life. This protagonist is purely a matter of luck. Revenge is also clean and tidy. It doesn't say that they should be left to play slowly. It says that they can grab the golden finger in just a few days. The protagonist is the first in the fault and there is no inexplicable hidden powerhouse. This is called a cool novel. If you seize so many opportunities and are side by side or even suppressed by a bunch of official aristocratic families, then you will be reborn. If you are so open, of course you will dominate the world. The current male characters are all clowns, and there are a few female supporting characters who are quite strong, which are very nice. What I don't like is probably the description of the boss. The bosses that are killed are all projections. I prefer the ones that cannot be resurrected after killing them, otherwise I always feel that they will hold grudges and suddenly appear to play tricks on the protagonist. And it feels like they are trying to be cute, making the boss look like a big cat, which is a bit embarrassing, as enemies should look like enemies. Then the protagonist didn't take action against the relatives who bullied her, which made her a little unhappy. The recent plot has been a bit boring. I've been wandering around a few aristocratic families, and the game has no sense of presence.

I was treated like this in my previous life. After my rebirth, I didn't kill anyone. What a good person.

Except for the plot of Hanfu, everything else is perfect, but Hanfu's supporting role and the presence of the map in the early stage are still relatively strong.

The writing is very good, the protagonist is very decisive in dealing with others, fighting and taking revenge. I experienced a lot of pain and suffering in my previous life, but I made a fortune before I died, and I am very decisive in taking revenge in this life. To be able to keep the bottom line with people who have no hatred against you can be said to be a very determined and good person. Both the supporting characters and the villains have brains, and they only know how to get money for nothing. The protagonists are not the pure scammers as imagined. They also have unique personalities and memorable points. It is quite interesting to occasionally intersperse their stories. So far, no big poisonous points have been found. From a personal perspective, there are very few small blocking points. The article is not long. I hope the author will maintain his standard and update it on time.

It's not bad. Although there are only a few chapters, it has the flavor of a novel with a big heroine. The heroine is developed steadily. There are some logic problems in some places. I personally think there are some contradictions in the logic of the relationship between the heroine and the original male and female protagonists. The heroine's character is not too distinct and deep. I look forward to gradually improving it in the future. It is very flat, not outstanding but has no faults in the story. Not bad, please come on the author and will continue to update [Love]

I go The heroine Golden Finger has a lot of thunder, and rarely drags on. There is basically no watery plot. Each chapter has some specific content, rather than watery plot. In fact, I really like this kind of game invasion novels, but many of them are the kind where the female protagonist is inexplicably stronger than the male protagonist, or the female protagonist is not as strong as the male protagonist, and the female protagonist acts as a pendant for the male protagonist. No CP is just right, it's confusing and doesn't hurt your brain (no) There are no interesting points at the moment. I personally can actually watch more, so there are not so many interesting points. You can watch them individually anyway.

You don't look like a newbie at this level. Do you have a vest? [Laughs evilly] Very beautiful, the heroine has many talents, very cool The ratio of men to women is normal, and there are many good female characters [sending my heart]

Nice! I hope the author won't get carried away in writing the setting ability like other places, and the combat power will collapse. I have always maintained the ability to write logically, and I like the feeling of watching this ability improve little by little. I hope that the copy will be normal and not engage in the infinite flow writing method and then throw away the game settings. I like to see this kind of national game and I like to see the digital feeling. The ability settings are messy, and later on I forget what the abilities I set look like. I hope there aren't those random and inexplicable gods playing games

It's quite good-looking. The heroine has a big gold finger in this life and is very strong. She has high martial arts and many skills. She does a lot of high-profile things. She has been widening the gap with others from the beginning. From being an abandoned child in her previous life to being favored in this life, the overall experience is quite refreshing and interesting. The female-male comparison and the shaping of the female character are also good. It's just that the recent chapters have always been told from the perspective of various supporting characters, and the progress is a bit slow. I want to see the heroine get the last ability quickly (the heroine has been getting the ability until now, and she is tired of repeating similar recycling seven times) and then get to the main topic of the game invasion, as well as the protagonist's old flag, and there are too many prophets. Occasionally there are embellishments, and it becomes a bit boring when there are too many. Well, it would be better if the wording could be changed, such as using jealousy instead of jealousy or something like that.

I discovered a new book. The heroine is strong no matter in her past life or in this life. In her previous life, she was a grindstone pushed out by the control of a wealthy family. After the explosion broke out after death, she always knew that she was just a knife. What made her angry was that there were so many strong people, but they refused to come out to save her. She lets the world know that the saviors He chooses are people who only take benefits and do no work.

Yes, the golden finger is huge and looks very cool. Just put your mind down and just watch. But there is still room for improvement. I give you 4 stars because I am afraid that you will be proud. If the content of the subsequent updates is good, this star will be added. Come on and update, stay tuned ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨

I watched it three times and finally stopped watching it today. The author writes very innovatively Group portrait is also good But to control the rhythm, the author needs to refine the language a lot Trying to write everything will make readers look tired, too tired This is why I couldn't watch it the first two times Come on, I'm very optimistic about you!

It's beautiful. I found a treasure book from childhood. I need to take good care of it.

It's almost 300,000 words, and the game has just entered the first beta..., And then it's all about reality, including those props that will mutate when the game comes. What I want to see is not that reality is constantly changing, games, games, games haven't come yet.

Is this the strength of a new book with a 7.0 Rating in just 68 articles? I suspect that this is a trumpet of the author. The writing is really good. The emotional expressions and characterizations are not as objective as other books. Many of the characters in it are self-aware and are very well portrayed. The good thing is that I discovered this book early enough. The bad thing is that I discovered this book early enough. It is not enough to read [crying] [crying] [crying] When will the author be able to amaze me even more when he is 50 a day [shy] [shy] [shy]

Cool article, but cute! The language of this article is humorous and playful, and the little cannon fodder villains often show a sense of joy, such as Jiang Shu who comforts himself mentally but is diligent in fighting monsters and trying to get a set of clothes for himself, and Shanmao who is flexible and flexible. In addition, the positive characters in the article are mainly women, and their roles are very natural. The author does not deliberately call for women to help each other and sisters, but naturally sets the characters with outstanding abilities or charisma as women. There is no character in the article who uses gender to make things happen and suppress women. It can be said that the Blue Star written by the author is a world with equal rights for men and women.

I like the plot in the game. The author consciously uses these words in vain. It's just that there was a long gap between the first closed beta and the second closed beta, so I didn't really like to watch various things about the family. In addition, when watching it, I always forget that the overall background is a few major families, and always think about the official appearance to rectify the aristocratic families.

It's good-looking. This is really good-looking. The heroine is not a virgin at all and is a bit too little.

The author is encouraged to keep updating and not to stop updating! ! ! ! I have read several articles before that I thought were good, but they have been discontinued. The author please keep this progress updated, and it will be better to add more occasionally, hehe (◍•ᴗ•◍)

The plot is very good, the heroine is decisive, the world view is grand, the plot is also very interesting and funny, but it is not dragging the tower, but the updates are a bit slow, I hope the author can keep going, I will always support the author [shy][shy] (This is my objective opinion, I have tied the whole book [laughs])

From low to high, there are eight levels: whiteboard, ordinary, fine, rare, king, epic, legend, and myth.

OMG how come this novel has a score of 7.3? Let me give you a five-star review and give you a score. The author's writing style is very fluent, and many of the plots in it are also very interesting. At present, this book is probably a long one, because the part about recycling cheats is quite long, but the advantage of a long book is that many plots can be written very excitingly. If the author keeps insisting on this style of writing, I think the final score of this book will definitely not be low, because I see that it is now on par with those more famous books (without the interference of the pseudo-human AI platform, maybe I can chase 9.4)

It's good to watch ૮₍ ˶•ᴗ•˶₎ა The writing is a little verbose at the beginning, but it gets better and better later on ੭ ᐕ)੭ Some of the descriptions are interesting (♡´∀`♡) and the character creation is also good (`･ω･´)ゞ

Chapter 114 and I haven't started the second game yet. . . Can you give the protagonist a disguise prop or skill? How does the protagonist rely on cross-dressing and makeup to pass the security check and board the plane for others?

The author likes to write about hemorrhoids, um, it's very humorous

It's a good read, and it's still a new book, but I can see that the world setting and the character of the protagonist are very well constructed. The protagonist is a strong man, not only in terms of strength but also in psychology.

Not bad, and the female-to-male ratio is very high. All the people who interact with the protagonist are women. God knows, my biggest fear when reading this kind of infinite level apocalyptic game is that a male protagonist will be sensationalized. Fortunately, the teammates who are touched by the memories of the past life are all women, otherwise I am really afraid that there will be another male protagonist.

It's really beautiful, but there are too few, not enough to watch. Our protagonist is also very sober, and the description of the battle scenes is also very enjoyable. The language is also very funny and humorous. I especially like to read this kind of article [laughing]

It looks good... There are no surprises so far, the atmosphere is relaxed and relatively easy to relax. The plot arrangement is quite neat and tidy. Boss, you are the best to my breasts. I don't want my sister to suffer any grievances╰(*´`*)╯