The Legend of the Dark River That Is About to Be Pierced Through a Sieve

I haven't written anything for a long time, and I've been devouring online novels and short videos. I feel like I've reached a writing low. But Legend of the Underworld was too over the top, so I decided to write it anyway. Many times I can't remember how to say the word I want to use. Fortunately, I can type on a computer or mobile phone, otherwise handwriting would be even worse. Just watch it, don't scold me, show your feelings! [Love] If you don't like it, you can just click the cross ❌ and change it to what you like! Peace and friendship, let's build a better online world together! [Love]

Nice! Like Changhe and Tonight [Adoration] It was good at the beginning, but the heroine explained the truth to Shuang Su several times later, but never listened to the heroine. Su Changhe's final choice as a partner was never on the heroine's side (it felt like the heroine was a part of Shuang Su's play, and she was de-enchanted by Su Changhe). Since Shuangsu himself refused to listen to the heroine taking someone away secretly (no matter what Su Changhe's difficulties were, the behavior here was a bit inferior to a young couple in love), and the heroine herself was so angry that she took the person away from the top of the mountain and said that the man would not be obedient. I thought the heroine was standing up. As a result, in the next chapter, he eagerly went to Tianqi to work as a nanny to clean up the mess. Time and time again, when her words were not taken seriously, the heroine just got angry and continued to clean up their mess. It's so frustrating! ! ! It's so frustrating! ! ! 😤Really, I encourage you to divide, I encourage you to divide! ! ! Tonight is all about her! If you can easily forgive your lover's lack of attention tonight, and if Su Chang's heart will always be Su Muyu, there is really no need to talk about this relationship. Su Changhe can live with Su Muyu directly, thank you for being beautiful tonight! ! !

Very nice! This is the most interesting Tales of the Dark River fanfic I have seen recently. The heroine herself is a time traveler. She was brought into the Dark River when her family was broken and she was wandering. Later, she entered the Xie family and became Xie Qidao's disciple. She has a high martial arts value and a very charming personality. She has many friends inside and outside the Dark River. CP Su Changhe

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It's so good to read. This is the best book I've ever read about The Legend of Undercity. It's not just limited to the value of Undercity itself. The heroine's experiences, thoughts and actions are very structured, especially the words the heroine said during the Demon Cult's Eastern Expedition, which made the world view seem grand. I really like it, very plump character. Like [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

I will squat quietly until the end [shy] The narrative has a sense of relaxation like a storyteller, and it is occasionally very interesting. Now that I see it, I feel very happy! Many fragments of the story unfold naturally before your eyes! Colloquial but not cheesy! Similarly, because advantages and disadvantages coexist, it lacks a bit of heaviness. Overall, I still like the portrayal of the heroine! The portrayal of the heroine can be directly felt! The author didn't handle the emotional line very well, maybe because he didn't develop the process in detail and only saw the result in the end. I have always had a very complicated attitude towards the character Su Muyu. This character cannot simply be called a "saint", he is really very contradictory. If you don't control the degree well, your writing will be controversial. The "pull" in the middle finally falls on the heroine. "Fuzzy and contradictory" is very difficult to control. The writing is really light and humorous, not just pretentious, but really easy to read! I really like the writing style! : Write a review carefully🥰 Keep squatting until the end of the story~

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It's really good to read. When I was looking for a book, I came across it and read it. I finished it immediately [plus one on the bookshelf] [already planted] Please update [please update more] [please update more] [please update more] Waking up every morning and seeing updates is a kind of happiness, a friendly time for cows and horses to go to work [please update][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Very well written, awesome! Come on!

The writing is very good. I have a different understanding of some vague plots in the play. Keep up the good work [like][like]

The author's writing skills are really great. In just a few chapters, the heroine's character is established. The characters in the novel fit the real life and are full of imagination. It is the best novel among all the fanfictions I have read.

Ok👌Good, good, good, good