[Multiple heroines] [Various types] [No time travel, no system] [Various practice systems]
The story begins in a small town called Xu'an City, located at the foot of Biluozong Mountain.
Biluo Sect is very famous in Xuanhuangzhou, with thousands of green peaks swallowing the clouds, thousands of valleys and flowing springs surrounding the mountain gate, and the scenery is meandering.
People in the town for generations can always see living immortals on weekdays.
Chen Shutong, half of the shop owner of Yuelailou, met a particularly charming customer this day...
Reader comments
I finally saw that it's not a turtle man who licks the dog, and the characters in it are exquisitely written, especially the heroine Fang YY, who is very sweet, so sweet to me. I hope to write more of her scenes and less loli. Writing about cultivating immortals and then learning about loli has a very different sense of violation. It is better to write about royal sisters and married women, and I personally don't like loli [laugh][laugh]
As a bookworm of more than 10 years, let me objectively evaluate this novel. The writing style is very good, the portrayal of the heroine in the article is also very vivid, and the emotions are very delicate. At present, there are no poisonous points, but the only drawback is that there are too many realms, and each practice system has its own realm. Every time you see a fight, you should first look at the realm chart you made. It is recommended to divide them according to how many realms there are. There is also the part about the battle. The author's description is relatively unfamiliar, but it does not affect the viewing experience. Here are 5 ⭐s, and the author keeps up the good work!
It's very interesting, the writing is very good, and the interaction with the heroine is very little but very sweet. I want to keep it but I'm afraid that the author won't update it. It seems that the previous works are short stories and no one will read them anymore. I want to support it first. I hope this one can be more.
The writing is very good, and it has a style of ancient fantasy novels about immortality, which is rare nowadays, especially in 🍅. The writing and plot are both excellent, but maybe because of the major changes, the plot jumps directly to the main character getting the Yunxian Pen in the middle, and there is no middle. I also want to see more stories between the Liu sisters and the main character. Come on, author, you can go slower, but don't be a eunuch!
The writing is very good, and the writing style is very comfortable. The writing style is different from Jianlai, but it looks as comfortable as Jianlai. Believe me, this is really extraordinary in Tomato. It is even the highest praise I can give currently. It is that the content is too little and I need to keep it up.
When I saw Chapter 26, hey, the author's book is really good, but it will be discontinued. It's a pity. This one is still good. I read in the comment area that the writing is too broken. I think it's okay. It can be considered the author's style. An acceptable reading experience will be better.
Overall, I can watch it without any problem.
Chapter 78: I can't stand up to my brother anymore
This book has been added to my favorites "Tomato Dragon"
The writing style is still delicate, touching and eye-catching.
I hope this book will not be discontinued
Looks good so far
There is no introduction [what]
Feeling good now
Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch
It can look good.
Damn it, let's keep up with the big army
I wonder if there will be eunuchs this time.
It's also a very good book.
As for the heroine, the author is really good at writing it.
Not bad, the author should follow up quickly, one million words is just around the corner
It's really beautiful, I hope you don't stop updating >ᴗoಣ
After reading it now, I feel that the writing is good, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is quite interesting. However, I am a little worried because the author's previous works are not very long [Chigua]
Why can't I get along after chapter 69? Did I miss something?
I finally saw that it's not a turtle man who licks the dog, and the characters in it are exquisitely written, especially the heroine Fang YY, who is very sweet, so sweet to me. I hope to write more of her scenes and less loli. Writing about cultivating immortals and then learning about loli has a very different sense of violation. It is better to write about royal sisters and married women, and I personally don't like loli [laugh][laugh]
As a bookworm of more than 10 years, let me objectively evaluate this novel. The writing style is very good, the portrayal of the heroine in the article is also very vivid, and the emotions are very delicate. At present, there are no poisonous points, but the only drawback is that there are too many realms, and each practice system has its own realm. Every time you see a fight, you should first look at the realm chart you made. It is recommended to divide them according to how many realms there are. There is also the part about the battle. The author's description is relatively unfamiliar, but it does not affect the viewing experience. Here are 5 ⭐s, and the author keeps up the good work!
It's very interesting, the writing is very good, and the interaction with the heroine is very little but very sweet. I want to keep it but I'm afraid that the author won't update it. It seems that the previous works are short stories and no one will read them anymore. I want to support it first. I hope this one can be more.
The writing is very good, and it has a style of ancient fantasy novels about immortality, which is rare nowadays, especially in 🍅. The writing and plot are both excellent, but maybe because of the major changes, the plot jumps directly to the main character getting the Yunxian Pen in the middle, and there is no middle. I also want to see more stories between the Liu sisters and the main character. Come on, author, you can go slower, but don't be a eunuch!
The writing is very good, and the writing style is very comfortable. The writing style is different from Jianlai, but it looks as comfortable as Jianlai. Believe me, this is really extraordinary in Tomato. It is even the highest praise I can give currently. It is that the content is too little and I need to keep it up.
When I saw Chapter 26, hey, the author's book is really good, but it will be discontinued. It's a pity. This one is still good. I read in the comment area that the writing is too broken. I think it's okay. It can be considered the author's style. An acceptable reading experience will be better.
Overall, I can watch it without any problem.
Chapter 78: I can't stand up to my brother anymore This book has been added to my favorites "Tomato Dragon"
The writing style is still delicate, touching and eye-catching.
I hope this book will not be discontinued
Looks good so far
There is no introduction [what]
Feeling good now
Nice to watch, love to watch, love to watch
It can look good.
Damn it, let's keep up with the big army
I wonder if there will be eunuchs this time.
It's also a very good book.
As for the heroine, the author is really good at writing it.
Not bad, the author should follow up quickly, one million words is just around the corner
It's really beautiful, I hope you don't stop updating >ᴗoಣ
After reading it now, I feel that the writing is good, the characters are vividly drawn, and the plot is quite interesting. However, I am a little worried because the author's previous works are not very long [Chigua]
Why can't I get along after chapter 69? Did I miss something?