After I Harvested Long Aotian, I Faked My Death

In the early part of the plot, almost every line has a female rival [I'm about to cry]. I'm watching from behind. I hope the author will try not to use female rivalry to promote the development of the plot. It makes people uncomfortable to watch [crying] The heroine's character is very good! Stay true to your heart and remain unmoved [love]

After reading it for a long time, almost all the male protagonists suddenly had a strange feeling for the girl, and then fell in love at first sight. The writing of how they fell in love was actually very weak, except for the sword fairy who was a little thinner, but I still felt that the emotional line was abrupt. Sometimes it feels like it's too fast and everything happens without any preliminary preparation. It can be seen that the author wants to distinguish between the original body and different clones (the heroine pinches her own face, so let's call it a clone). The clones also have names, but I think if they are all clones, can't they all be named Yun? When Yun Qing thinks of the original body, will the collapse fall faster? Since the heroine They all planned to have clones, but they were completely separated once they were clones. Unrelated names are more real; and when I read the article, I found that the author had crossed out his own name. The male protagonist of the clone strategy actually called the female protagonist's original name several times, which was particularly dramatic. This kind of loophole appeared many times. So that's why I asked the author to give him an unrelated name, because the name is written in the splits many times. However, the writing is good, and I also like the character of the heroine. She is a hard-working and motivated person who is not in love and only pursues becoming stronger. Some of the details of the fighting are well written, and overall, it can be seen. I wish the author will get stronger as he writes and the novel will sell well!

It's super, super good-looking, and the heroine has different plans for each of the male protagonists, Long Aotian. The first one is a mortal woman and the second one is a blind woman. And when the author wrote it, it felt like an independent story line. Every pull feels very strong, and the most important thing is that it feels very immersive. There will be no drama. It's very, very beautiful. I hope the author will make more fun and more fun.

The plot is okay, the heroine's character is also good, but there are a lot of typos, and the author won't change them [smile][smile][smile]

This book is more interesting, specifically because of the heroine. She changes different identities in the same world to conquer the Son of Heaven, and each identity has a different personality and appearance. As for the emotional development of the guide, the clues are relatively clear, but the emotional development is relatively fast, and then there will be some competitive plots, and the character creation is also relatively good. I really like the two characters of the mortal, the gentle medical girl, the ignorant shark who can sing beautifully. In terms of plot, what I'm seeing now is Shura Field, that is, the identity is revealed, and then it almost feels like it should be over. I hope that the author can perfect the relationship when it is over, and the characteristics of the heroine's character can be more prominent (I really hope to see her different views on the strategies for different Sons of Heaven) and the reasons why she chose this way, not just for a simple mission.

Although the content of female competition in the first few paragraphs makes others feel uncomfortable, the author writes about rape and robbery, which feels very exciting and becomes more and more exciting. However, this is Long Ao Tianwen. Long Ao Tianwen generally has many harems and the like. It is natural to have other female partners. However, the author has too little content. It is recommended to keep the book.

In fact, we can't say female competition, those characters are more like tool people, because the character description is not full enough, but the text written by the author is fast-paced. After all, the text is not long. You can choose some characters like Lu and Liu who do not conflict with each other for long-term characterization. It is also good for the author to bring out contradictory ideas through them (the supplement like Liu's paragraph is good, maybe some arcs of the characters can be added) For example, the role of the male supporting character in the second guide is the same as that of other characters. Without these, it is difficult to promote development and make the article outstanding.

It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it! Very nice! The heroine is very sober and smart, and the scripts she develops for each Long Aotian are different. The heroine completes the task and escapes, just do it! Neat! It's not romantic at all, and it doesn't abuse women, so feel free to watch it! Very touching! Big cheers for the author!

The style of this article is bold, the strategy changes according to the target, and the emotions are delicate and sticky. Plot: The heroine is a character from another world. She is ordered by Heaven to guide the male protagonist to weaken his luck, consolidate the world of cultivation, and strengthen himself. The early stage is similar to the fast travel story of the world of cultivation, which is 1v1. The story of each stage of the strategy is different. Occasionally, the characters are connected in series. Some strategies will have female competition to promote development, but it is tolerable. In the later stage, it should lose its horse. Personality: The heroine is at the level of a movie queen, passionate and ruthless. She regards men as achievements. She will run away and change to the next one after getting the guide. The characters are clear and diverse. There are gentle and friendly women, and there are also jealous bad women. I think I have conquered them all. As long as the heroine is not abused and has a bit of androgyny, it doesn't matter. Most of the male protagonists are affectionate and paranoid. Disadvantages: Because of the female competition, most readers may not be able to accept it, resulting in low ratings. Summary: The movie queen travels to the world of cultivation and explores the story of the male protagonist to strengthen himself. It can be understood as: sacrificing men can increase cultivation, the plot is not procrastinating, the heroine is sober and rational, and has a little bit of female rivalry. Recommended

The beautiful heroine clearly knows what she wants. By the way, I heard that an author updated 500 chapters a day and got rich and went abroad to play. Update soon.